视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (plural/singular), and give one or two specific supporting details. Use a linking phrase if adding a reason.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph landscapes and family outings from various angles to capture moods and details.

建议: Provide a complete, balanced answer: state preference clearly (or say you like both) and finish the contrast. Remove fillers and repetition, use linking words (however, whereas) and add a specific detail or example to support your point.

示例: I like both urban and rural views. Urban areas offer tall buildings and lively streets for dramatic shots, whereas rural areas provide peaceful landscapes and natural lighting, which I also enjoy photographing.

建议: Be grammatical and specific: remove fillers, use correct plural forms and articles, and explain briefly why you prefer foreign views with a concrete example (e.g., famous landmarks or architectural styles). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer views in other countries because they often have famous landmarks and diverse architecture. For instance, I enjoy photographing historic monuments and museums when I travel abroad.

× Yes, I like uh, taking picture of different views from different angles and different scenarios because I love taking pictures of my own and my family's natures.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views from different angles and in different settings because I love taking pictures of my own and my family's natural scenes.

Errors: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' when referring generally (count noun). 'Different scenarios' is awkward for places; 'in different settings' is clearer. 'My family's natures' is incorrect: 'nature' as a noun meaning character is wrong here; use 'natural scenes' or 'nature' or 'my family's natural surroundings'. Use of -ing 'taking' is fine, but plural and noun choice needed.

× Uh, actually I love, uh, both scenarios and because, uh, in urban areas we get to see a lot of high highest buildings around ourselves and, uh, we can, we can take a lot of pictures, but in rural areas.

✓ Actually I like both kinds of places, because in urban areas we see many tall buildings around us and can take a lot of pictures, and in rural areas (there are different scenes to photograph).

Errors: 'both scenarios' is incorrect quantifier/collocation; use 'both kinds of places' or 'both scenarios' but better 'places'. 'A lot of high highest buildings' mixes forms; use 'many tall buildings' (quantifier + adjective). 'Around ourselves' is incorrect pronoun use; use 'around us'. Also sentence is incomplete; I added a parenthetical completion. These are quantifier and pronoun issues.

× I prefer other countries, uh, about scenarios because, umm, other country has skyscrapers, uh, historic monuments, museums, which our country doesn't have much and I like to take pictures of those scenario.

✓ I prefer other countries because they have skyscrapers, historic monuments, and museums that our country does not have many of, and I like to take pictures of those scenes.

Errors: 'other country' vs 'other countries' pronoun/number mismatch; use plural to match preference. 'Which our country doesn't have much' is incorrect: 'much' with countable nouns is wrong; use 'many of' or 'does not have' plus plural noun. 'Those scenario' singular vs plural mismatch; use 'those scenes'. Also changed 'they' to refer to countries. This fixes pronoun and quantifier errors.