视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Cố gắng sử dụng cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản. Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ loại cảnh bạn thích chụp, tần suất, công cụ bạn dùng) và dùng từ nối để nối ý. Chú ý dùng danh từ số nhiều/đếm được đúng (photos, landmarks), thì động từ (is/are), và từ vựng phù hợp (share on social media). Giữ tối đa 4-5 câu, tự nhiên và mạch lạc.

示例: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel. I usually photograph landscapes and famous landmarks because they show the character of a place. Taking pictures relaxes me and helps me capture memorable moments. I also like to share the best shots with friends and family on social media.

建议: Cần trả lời trực tiếp và ngắn gọn, sau đó giải thích cụ thể với lý do rõ ràng. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (prefer + -ing optional, plural nouns: rural areas; use correct verbs and expressions: I can relieve my stress/leave my worries behind). Dùng từ nối như 'because' hoặc 'so' để liên kết ý. Giữ 2–4 câu súc tích.

示例: I prefer views in rural areas because they usually have mountains, rivers and forests that feel more peaceful. The fresh air and quiet surroundings help me relax and forget my worries. For example, I often feel less stressed after a walk in the countryside.

建议: Trả lời trực tiếp (I prefer...) và cung cấp lý do cụ thể, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (my country, landscapes, workshops? likely 'attractions' or 'landmarks'; hang out with friends/family). Tránh từ không rõ nghĩa ('before view'). Dùng liên từ để làm rõ lý do và một ví dụ ngắn để minh họa. Giữ không quá 5 câu.

示例: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful landscapes and famous attractions. I know the best spots and often go there with friends or family. For instance, we frequently visit a nearby national park that has stunning scenery and great hiking trails.

× Well, I like taking photo of difference when I travel I often take photo beautiful landscape or the interesting landmark.

✓ Well, I like taking photos of different places. When I travel, I often take photos of beautiful landscapes or interesting landmarks.

The errors involve countable nouns and plural forms. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' because multiple images are meant. 'Difference' is incorrect; 'different places' or 'different views' is appropriate. 'Landscape' and 'landmark' need plural forms 'landscapes' and 'landmarks' when referring generally. Also add necessary articles and prepositions ('of different places', 'of beautiful landscapes', 'of interesting landmarks') and separate into two sentences for clarity.

× It's very relaxing and help me capture a memorable moment.

✓ It's very relaxing and helps me capture memorable moments.

Subject-verb agreement requires third person singular 'helps' for the subject 'It'. 'Capture a memorable moment' implies repeated actions, so plural 'moments' is more natural. This correction uses the present simple correctly for habitual action.

× I often say with my friend or family on social medical.

✓ I often share them with my friends or family on social media.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'say with' is incorrect; 'share with' is appropriate. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' when general. 'On social medical' is wrong; the correct phrase is 'on social media'. Also 'them' refers back to 'photos' and clarifies the object of sharing.

× While I brief taking photo of rural area because many mountains, rivers and forests is very beautiful and the air is fresh so I can less of steam and liver all the worries of the world behind.

✓ I prefer taking photos of rural areas because many mountains, rivers, and forests are very beautiful and the air is fresh, so I can let go of stress and leave all the worries of the world behind.

Multiple issues: 'brief' incorrect word; 'prefer' fits. 'Taking photo' should be 'taking photos'. 'Rural area' should be plural 'rural areas' for general preference. Subject-verb agreement: 'mountains, rivers and forests are' not 'is'. Phrases 'less of steam and liver' are incorrect; intended meaning is 'let go of stress' and 'leave all the worries behind'. 'Leave' not 'liver'. Commas and conjunctions added for clarity.

× Uh, in my opinion, I before view is my countries because my country is a popular travel destination and have many beautiful landscape or a famous workshop, so I usually hang out with my friend or my families.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer views in my country because it is a popular travel destination and has many beautiful landscapes and famous attractions, so I usually hang out with my friends or my family.

Errors include wrong word 'before view' corrected to 'prefer views'. 'My countries' should be singular 'my country'. Subject-verb agreement: 'it has' not 'have' when referring to 'my country'. 'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes'. 'A famous workshop' likely intended 'famous attractions' or 'workshops' depending on meaning; 'attractions' is chosen for general tourism. 'Friend' plural 'friends' and 'families' should be 'family' for singular collective noun.