视图— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer communicates the main idea but has grammatical errors, awkward phrasing and some unnatural word choices. To improve, use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and simpler, natural vocabulary. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences) and add one specific detail (when/what you photograph) using a linking word for coherence.

示例: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos when I travel. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and mountain vistas because they capture the atmosphere of a place, and I can look back at those moments later.

建议: The answer is unclear and contains repetition, hesitations and incorrect grammar. Focus on a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, while, however). Avoid filler words and repetitions.

示例: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the mix of historic architecture and modern skyline. For instance, city streets often offer vibrant street scenes and interesting buildings, while rural landscapes can feel less varied to me.

建议: Your response is confusing with several grammar mistakes and unclear references. State your preference clearly, give a concise reason and one specific example. Use correct tense and avoid unclear phrases (e.g., "customers" instead of "customs").

示例: I prefer views in other countries because I like seeing different landscapes and cultures. For example, visiting Europe allowed me to explore varied architecture and local customs, which gives me a refreshing change of scenery.

× I'm quite a fan that whenever I travel, I always capture various landscape.

✓ I'm quite a fan; whenever I travel, I always capture various landscapes.

The noun 'landscape' is countable here and refers to multiple scenes, so it needs the plural form 'landscapes'. Also use a semicolon or conjunction for clarity. Use 'various landscapes' to indicate several different views.

× These photos help me represerve unique sceneries and I can revisit those wonderful moments later.

✓ These photos help me preserve unique scenery and I can revisit those wonderful moments later.

'Represerve' is not a word; use 'preserve'. 'Scenery' is an uncountable noun referring to landscape in general, so use 'scenery' not 'sceneries'. The sentence otherwise is fine; keep 'preserve unique scenery'.

× I do prefer like view the urban areas in 'cause I think the rural is too normal in the Chinese China China's countryside and the city is is have a charming of the grace blended splendor.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I think the Chinese countryside is too ordinary, while the city has a charming, blended splendor.

Multiple structural issues: redundant fillers ('do prefer like view'), colloquial contraction ''cause' is informal, and repetition of 'China'. Use 'prefer urban areas' for simplicity. 'Rural' should be 'the countryside' and 'too normal' is better as 'too ordinary'. 'The city is is have a charming of the grace blended splendor' is ungrammatical; rewrite as 'the city has a charming, blended splendor.' This corrects verb usage, word order, and clarity.

× I prefer prefer this views in other countries because I have been living there leaving my country for decades and found the country firmly nor on uniform.

✓ I prefer these views in other countries because I left my country decades ago and have been living there.

'Prefer prefer' is redundant; use one 'prefer'. 'This views' should be 'these views' (plural demonstrative). The clause 'I have been living there leaving my country for decades' is wordy and confusing; correct chronological meaning with 'I left my country decades ago and have been living there.' The fragment 'and found the country firmly nor on uniform' is ungrammatical and unclear, so it was removed; if intended meaning is variability, rephrase explicitly.

× I enjoy traveling to see different landscape and experience new customers give me welcome change of scenery.

✓ I enjoy traveling to see different landscapes and experience new cultures, which give me a welcome change of scenery.

'Landscape' should be plural 'landscapes'. 'New customers' is incorrect in context; likely 'new cultures'. Add a relative clause 'which give me' to link how these experiences provide a welcome change of scenery. This fixes noun choice and sentence cohesion.