打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing (e.g., “right by your own” should be “written by hand” or “done by hand”).

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing by hand feels more personal and helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes in a notebook I can draw diagrams and underline key points, which helps me study more effectively.

建议: Use a clear topic sentence and correct word choice. Replace informal or odd phrases (“tap”, “more close to my verbal life”) with natural expressions. Give a brief reason using a linking word.

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is more convenient and portable. For instance, I can work from different rooms or take my laptop to class, which suits my daily routine.

建议: Provide a clear timeline and use past tense consistently. Organize information with linking words (e.g., “first,” “later,” “when”). Be specific about what you learned and where.

示例: I first learned basic typing in elementary school, but I really improved my skills in high school. In computer class we practiced both English and Chinese typing, and we did presentations that required fast, accurate typing.

建议: Use a fluent, grammatically correct response with concrete methods and linking words. Replace vague phrases with specific activities and results.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly using online typing exercises and timed tests. As a result, I reduced my error rate and increased my speed, so I practice for 15–20 minutes most days to keep improving.

× I would prefer handwriting more than typing because handwriting is right by your own and that it will be.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because handwriting is personal and has a human touch.

The original uses incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing ('right by your own', 'that it will be'). Replace with 'personal' and 'has a human touch' to convey intended meaning. Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A more than B'.

× I think that will be full of human touch, so I would prefer handwriting more than typing.

✓ I think it has a human touch, so I prefer handwriting to typing.

The clause 'that will be full of human touch' is awkward and uses future tense incorrectly. Use present tense 'it has' to describe a general quality. Also change 'prefer ... more than' to the correct structure 'prefer A to B'.

× I usually tap on a laptop keyboard because the laptop keyboard is more convenient and it's more close to my verbal life.

✓ I usually type on a laptop keyboard because it is more convenient and closer to my daily life.

Use 'type' rather than 'tap' for keyboard use. 'It's more close' is incorrect adjective/adverb use; use 'closer'. 'Verbal life' is unnatural—use 'daily life'. Ensure comparative 'closer' modifies correctly.

× I learn from elementary school, but actually the truly like we have the presentation, the learning is at high school, we learn at the computer class and we will learn the English typing and the Chinese typing.

✓ I learned from elementary school, but the real instruction came in high school in computer class, where we learned English and Chinese typing.

The speaker mixes present and future tenses. Use past tense 'learned' for completed learning. Simplify and reorder for clarity: 'the real instruction came in high school' and use 'where we learned' for the class activities. Remove filler words and correct noun forms.

× I improve my typing is kind of rigid.

✓ My way of improving my typing is rather rigid.

Original lacks proper sentence structure. Insert subject and verb form: 'My way of improving my typing' as subject and 'is' as verb. 'Kind of' is informal; 'rather' is better in this context.

× I just keep practice and keep typing, keep trying to make it correct and make it more faster.

✓ I just keep practicing and keep typing, trying to make it correct and faster.

After 'keep' use the -ing form ('practicing' not 'practice'). Use 'faster' not 'more faster' (redundant comparative). Combine clauses to avoid unnecessary repetition.

× So just keep practicing to improve my typing.

✓ So I just keep practicing to improve my typing.

Sentence fragment missing subject. Add 'I' to form a complete sentence and match present habitual action.