打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and clear: state your preference in one sentence, then give one specific supporting reason with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid contradictions (you said 'handwriting' but meant typing) and reduce errors in tense and word choice.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is easier to store and organize notes on a computer. For example, I can search my notes quickly in the cloud and keep everything in one folder, which saves time when I need to review information.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence using correct verb tense, then give two specific daily activities as supporting details. Use linking words like 'for example' and correct article usage and plural forms.

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day. For example, I write emails and work on documents for my job, and I also browse the internet and chat with friends on it.

建议: Answer the time clearly, then explain reasons and progress with correct linking phrases. Fix grammatical errors (e.g., 'after a lot of practice', 'now I am comfortable') and keep it concise.

示例: I learned to type when I was about 15 because I used the keyboard to practise my English writing. It was difficult at first, but after a lot of practice I became more confident, and now I am comfortable typing quickly.

建议: Give a clear method and explain its benefits with accurate vocabulary. Correct subject errors and awkward phrases, and be specific about what the practice improves (speed, accuracy). Use one linking word and keep to two or three sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practising on typing.com every day. This helps me increase my speed and accuracy, and I also use the site when I practise English writing for the IELTS.

× I hope people have been too handwriting because it's much easier to store and organize information on a computer.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because it's much easier to store and organize information on a computer.

The original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and modal structure ('I hope people have been too handwriting') which is not grammatical. The speaker likely meant to state a preference. Use 'prefer A to B' for comparisons of preferences. Also 'typing' and 'handwriting' are the correct nouns for the activities.

× For example, I can search for note quickly back then in the cloud and keep everything in one folder.

✓ For example, I can quickly search for notes in the cloud and keep everything in one folder.

Errors include word order ('search for note quickly back then'), wrong noun number ('note' should be plural 'notes'), and an unnecessary phrase 'back then'. Place adverbs like 'quickly' before the verb or after the object, and use plural when referring to general countable items.

× I would say I used a laptop, so I type a laptop keyboard every day.

✓ I would say I use a laptop, so I type on a laptop keyboard every day.

Tense and verb form are inconsistent: 'used' (past) should be present 'use' to match 'every day'. Also the preposition 'on' is required with 'type on a keyboard'. Ensure subject-verb tense agreement and include correct prepositions.

× For example, I write e-mail and work on document for my job and I also browse the Internet and chat with friends on it.

✓ For example, I write emails and work on documents for my job, and I also browse the Internet and chat with friends on it.

Countable nouns need correct pluralization or articles. 'E-mail' and 'document' in this general context should be plural 'emails' and 'documents'. Also add commas for clarity and keep consistent noun forms.

× I learned to type when I was about 15 because I used the keyboard to practice my English writing.

✓ I learned to type when I was about 15 because I used the keyboard to practice my English writing.

This sentence is acceptable; tense usage is correct for a past event. No change needed. Explanation: 'learned' and 'used' are correctly in the past tense to describe past learning and practice.

× It was difficult at first, but after a lot of factors I became more confident and now I comfortable typing quickly.

✓ It was difficult at first, but after a lot of practice I became more confident and now I am comfortable typing quickly.

Problems: 'after a lot of factors' is incorrect collocation; 'practice' is correct. 'I comfortable' lacks the verb 'am'. Use the verb 'to be' with adjectives: 'I am comfortable'. Ensure correct collocations and include necessary verbs.

× Eyes always use typing.com to practice my typing is helps me improve my speech and currency and I also use it when practicing English writing for IELTS one.

✓ I always use typing.com to practice my typing; it helps me improve my accuracy and speed, and I also use it when practicing English writing for IELTS.

Multiple errors: 'Eyes' should be 'I', subject-verb issues ('is helps' wrong), wrong word choices ('speech and currency' unclear — likely 'accuracy and speed'), and awkward phrase 'IELTS one'. Separate clauses properly with correct punctuation or conjunctions. Use clear, appropriate vocabulary: 'accuracy and speed' and 'IELTS' without 'one'.