打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Also correct grammar (e.g., “handwriting is a great way to show my feelings”).

示例: I prefer handwriting. For example, when I write a personal note carefully, it feels more sincere and the recipient can see I spent time on it, so it makes the message more meaningful.

建议: Answer directly, avoid hesitations and fragmented phrases. Use one clear reason and a brief supporting detail with a linking word (e.g., “because” or “so”).

示例: No, I don't type every day because I rarely use a computer. Instead, I spend much of my free time reading physical books and exercising, so I don't need to type often.

建议: Provide a clear time reference and streamline the sentence. Remove fillers and give a concise supporting detail about lessons or practice. Use linking words like “because” or “so” if explaining purpose.

示例: I learned to type in primary school. We had a computer science class where each student practised keyboard skills through regular assignments, so I became familiar with typing early on.

建议: Be specific about methods and avoid repetition. Start with a direct statement then give one or two concrete strategies (e.g., timed exercises, online tutors) and use linking words like “for example” or “also.”

示例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice. For example, I do timed typing tests twice a week and use online lessons to correct errors, which helps increase both my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer handwriting because handwriting can is a very great way to show my attitude towards someone.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it is a great way to show my attitude towards someone.

The sentence uses the noun 'handwriting' repeatedly and incorrectly inserts 'can is'. Replace the repeated noun with the pronoun 'it' and remove the redundant auxiliary to produce a grammatically correct declarative clause. Suggestion: use pronouns to avoid repetition and ensure only one auxiliary or copula is used.

× If I write something down very seriously and considerably, my umm handwriting is bec uh becomes very great and that person would feel my uh since.

✓ If I write something down carefully and seriously, my handwriting becomes very neat and the person can feel my sincerity.

'Considerably' is the wrong adverb for manner; 'carefully' or 'seriously' fits. 'Becomes very great' is unnatural; use 'becomes very neat' or 'improves'. 'Feel my since' is incorrect word choice; the intended noun is 'sincerity'. Also remove filler sounds. Suggestion: choose adverbs that describe manner, use appropriate adjectives (neat/improved), and use correct nouns like 'sincerity'.

× Hmm, no, I type on the not every day because I don't use computer very much.

✓ No, I don't type every day because I don't use the computer very much.

The original has disordered elements ('type on the not every day') and missing articles. Reorder the sentence into negative simple present structure: 'I don't type every day' and include the article 'the' before 'computer' or say 'computers'. Suggestion: place 'every day' after the verb phrase and use correct articles.

× I prefer to just do very, uh, do a lot of physical stuff like reading a book or just doing some exercises.

✓ I prefer to do physical activities like reading a book or doing some exercises.

Reduce filler words and replace informal 'stuff' with 'activities'. 'A lot of physical stuff' is vague; 'physical activities' is clearer. Also remove redundant 'just do very, uh, do'. Suggestion: use precise nouns and eliminate fillers for clarity.

× I think it was in my primary school, everyone is supposed to do so like we have computer, uh, computer science, uh, course and every, each of us need to learn how to use a keyboard like it was, there were many assignments and very, uh, even there was.

✓ I think it was in primary school; everyone was supposed to learn it because we had a computer science course, and each of us needed to learn how to use a keyboard; there were many assignments.

The response mixes present and past tenses and omits articles. For past events, use past tense consistently: 'was supposed', 'we had', 'needed', 'there were'. Also remove filler words and redundant phrases. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (past) when describing past schooling and use clearer clause boundaries.

× Uh, I think it is just practice. Practice makes perfect. You know, if you want to, uh, make your typing speed more quickly and, or more accurate, you have to practice it everyday.

✓ I think it's just practice. Practice makes perfect. If you want to increase your typing speed or accuracy, you have to practice it every day.

'Make your typing speed more quickly' wrongly uses adverb 'quickly' with 'speed'; instead 'increase your typing speed' or 'type more quickly'. 'Everyday' is an adjective; use the adverb 'every day' (two words). Suggestion: use 'increase' with 'speed' and 'every day' as two words for frequency.

× So I just improve my typing skills by practice, Yeah, without any other, you know, methods.

✓ So I improve my typing skills by practicing; I don't use any other methods.

Use the gerund 'practicing' after 'by' (preposition requires -ing). The comma splice and fillers are removed. 'Without any other methods' is better expressed as 'I don't use any other methods'. Suggestion: after 'by' use verb+ing and state negatives clearly.