打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason and an example. Use linking words and correct articles (a/an, the) and verb forms.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting. As a university student, typing lets me prepare presentations quickly and edit slides easily, so it saves time. For example, I can copy information from research articles into my notes and reorganize it within minutes.

建议: Correct grammar (plural/singular, comparative forms) and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence and add one specific example using linking words like 'because' and 'for example'. Use accurate adjectives (lightweight, not lightweighted).

示例: I use a laptop keyboard every day because a laptop is lightweight and portable. For example, I carry it to lectures and student events, which helps me finish assignments and presentations more efficiently.

建议: Provide a clearer timeline and correct tense usage. Use linking words (but, since, now) and one specific detail about practice. Avoid vague phrases like 'more perfect'.

示例: I learned to type during my college years, and when I started university I practised more regularly. Since then I set aside 20 minutes each day to improve speed and accuracy, so my typing is now faster and more natural.

建议: Be specific about which features help you and correct grammar (these apps, make my life easier). Use linking words and give one concrete example of improvement or a routine.

示例: I improve my typing with practice apps and tools such as typing tutors and Grammarly. For example, I use a typing tutor for 15 minutes daily to increase speed and Grammarly to spot typing and grammar errors, which has reduced my mistakes significantly.

× I generally prefer typing because as an university student I have to make my presentation at a shorter time.

✓ I generally prefer typing because as a university student I have to make my presentation in a short time.

Use 'a' before words starting with a consonant sound; 'an university' is incorrect. Also use 'in a short time' instead of 'at a shorter time' for natural phrasing and correct preposition use.

× So computer based typing make it more efficient for me and I enjoy it a lot.

✓ So computer-based typing makes it more efficient for me and I enjoy it a lot.

The compound subject 'computer-based typing' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' (subject-verb agreement). Also use a hyphen for the adjective 'computer-based'.

× I type on a laptop keyboard every day because laptop is more convenient for me as it is very handy and lightweighted.

✓ I type on a laptop keyboard every day because the laptop is more convenient for me as it is very handy and lightweight.

Use the definite article 'the' when referring back to 'laptop' in this context. 'Lightweighted' is not correct; use the adjective 'lightweight'.

× I can take it wherever I goes, for example in my university and official programs I can do my work more efficiently and quickly with the help of laptop.

✓ I can take it wherever I go; for example, at my university and at official events I can do my work more efficiently and quickly with the help of the laptop.

Verb should be 'go' (first person plural/simple present). Use 'wherever I go'. Add articles 'the' before 'laptop'. Use preposition 'at' for locations/events. Also separate ideas for clarity.

× In my college life, I learned how to type on keyboard, but when I become an university student, I polished the skill more and now I fixed a time for my typing.

✓ In my college life, I learned how to type on a keyboard, but when I became a university student, I polished the skill more and now I set a regular time for my typing.

Tense errors: 'become' should be past 'became' to match 'learned'. Use article 'a' before 'keyboard'. 'Fixed a time' is awkward; 'set a regular time' is natural. 'An university' should be 'a university'.

× As so my typing become more perfect, more natural and convenient.

✓ As a result, my typing has become more accurate, more natural, and more convenient.

Use correct phrase 'As a result,' and present perfect 'has become' to show change up to now. 'More perfect' is awkward; use 'more accurate' or 'much better'. Add commas and parallel modifiers.

× I improve my typing using various types of apps, for example, Microsoft Word or Grammarly.

✓ I improve my typing by using various apps, for example Microsoft Word or Grammarly.

Use 'by using' to explain the method. 'Various types of apps' is wordy; 'various apps' is preferred. Remove comma before 'Microsoft Word' in this short phrase.

× In this platform I can check my mistakes and I can work on it when I get free time.

✓ On this platform I can check my mistakes and work on them when I have free time.

Use preposition 'on' with 'platform'. Pronoun agreement: 'mistakes' is plural, so use 'them' not 'it'. Use 'have free time' instead of 'get free time' for natural English.

× I think this app made my life more easier.

✓ I think this app has made my life easier.

Use present perfect 'has made' to show effect continuing to present. 'More easier' is incorrect (double comparative); use 'easier'.