打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise, avoid repetition, use correct grammar and complete the final thought. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words and an example. Watch verb agreement and plural forms (e.g., “school reports are online”).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because most of my homework and school reports are submitted online. Moreover, typing is faster and less tiring, especially for long assignments, so I can finish tasks more efficiently.

建议: Answer directly and correct word choice. Use a simple present or present perfect correctly and avoid redundant phrases. Provide a brief reason with linking words and a short example of what you type.

示例: Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my school gives daily online assignments. For example, I complete homework and submit reports through the school portal.

建议: Clarify timeline and use past tense for completed actions. Avoid vague phrases like “PR practicing.” Give a clear statement about when you started and one supporting detail about how you practised.

示例: I learned to type in elementary school because the school included typing lessons in the curriculum. We practiced regularly in computer class, so typing now feels natural to me.

建议: Organize your answer: state current methods, explain why, and give a result. Use correct grammar and tenses, avoid long run-on sentences, and use linking words like “therefore” or “as a result.” Be specific about techniques (timed tests, games, lessons).

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly with online typing tests and typing while browsing my anime hobby. Because I often search for information and write comments, I get extra practice, and as a result my speed has become noticeably faster.

× I will prefer prefer typing because I have to submit most of my homework with online and school.

✓ I prefer typing because I have to submit most of my homework online and to my school.

The phrase 'will prefer' is inappropriate here because preference is a state, so simple present 'prefer' is correct (Present tense issue, but here fixed as preposition/phrasing). 'with online and school' uses incorrect prepositions and word order; use 'online' (adverb) and 'to my school' or 'to school' to indicate destination. Also remove duplicate 'prefer'. Suggestion: Use 'I prefer typing because I have to submit most of my homework online and to my school.'

× School reports is online too.

✓ School reports are online too.

The subject 'School reports' is plural, so the verb must be plural 'are' rather than 'is'. Suggestion: Ensure verb agrees with subject number: 'reports' -> 'are'.

× So typing is more convenient and it's quicker and less tiring than writing by hands.

✓ So typing is more convenient, quicker, and less tiring than writing by hand.

Use 'by hand' (singular) rather than 'by hands'. Also streamline comparative adjectives: 'more convenient, quicker, and less tiring' is more natural. Commas improve readability. Suggestion: Use 'by hand' for the general act of handwriting.

× And especially especially when I have long assignments, I.

✓ Especially when I have long assignments, I prefer typing.

The original sentence is incomplete and repeats 'especially'. It lacks a main verb and object. Add the preferred verb 'prefer typing' to complete the thought and remove the duplicate word. Suggestion: Complete the clause with the main idea: 'I prefer typing.'

× Yes, I have been typing desktop desk, desktop keyboards every day because my school has been having an online assignment every day and now it is summer break so I have many submission to work out.

✓ Yes, I type on a desktop keyboard every day because my school gives online assignments every day, and now, even during summer break, I have many submissions to complete.

Use simple present 'type' for habitual action rather than present perfect continuous. 'Desktop desk, desktop keyboards' is redundant; use 'desktop keyboard'. 'Has been having an online assignment every day' is awkward; 'gives online assignments every day' is natural. 'Submission' should be plural 'submissions' and 'to work out' is incorrect collocation; use 'to complete'. Suggestion: Use simple present for routines and correct collocations: 'type on a desktop keyboard', 'give assignments', 'complete submissions'.

× Actually, I don't have to learn because my school has been practicing.

✓ Actually, I didn't have to learn because my school taught typing from a young age.

The meaning intends that learning was unnecessary because school provided practice in the past. Use past tense 'didn't have to' and 'taught' or 'provided practice' to reflect completed past action. 'Has been practicing' is incomplete and unclear. Suggestion: Use past tense to describe past instruction: 'my school taught typing' or 'my school provided practice'.

× I have, my school has the PR practicing for from elementary school and we know how to type on the keyboard and we have trained by elementary school.

✓ My school provided typing practice from elementary school, so we learned how to type on the keyboard.

The original has redundant fragments and incorrect prepositions 'practicing for from' and 'trained by elementary school'. Use 'provided practice from' and 'learned' to show how instruction occurred. Remove unnecessary commas and repetitions. Suggestion: Simplify to 'My school provided typing practice from elementary school, so we learned how to type.'

× So first of all, I am not very good at typing at elementary school so I practice regularly in improve because my hobby is all about anime and I spend lots of time for searching the information or writing comments in online which gives me extra typing practice for help me get faster typer.

✓ First of all, I was not very good at typing in elementary school, so I practiced regularly to improve. Because my hobby is watching anime, I spend a lot of time searching for information and writing comments online, which gave me extra typing practice and helped me become a faster typist.

Multiple tense and phrasing issues: describe past ability and practice using past tense 'was' and 'practiced'. Use 'in elementary school' (preposition). Use 'to improve' for purpose. 'My hobby is all about anime' is better as 'my hobby is watching anime'. Use 'searching for information' and 'writing comments online' (no 'in'). 'Which gave me extra typing practice and helped me become a faster typist' uses past tense to match earlier clauses and correct noun 'typist'. Suggestion: Keep consistent past tense when talking about past improvement and use natural collocations: 'practice to improve', 'searching for information', 'writing comments online', 'faster typist'.