打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Сократите повторы, улучшите структуру и грамматику, используйте связки. Начните с короткого топик‑предложения, затем добавьте одно‑два поясняющих предложения с причинами и примером. Избегайте слов-паразитов (uh, like) и неправильных форм (preferred → prefer, fastly → quickly).

示例: I prefer typing on my smartphone because it is more comfortable and faster for me. For example, I can type messages and emails quickly using predictive text. In contrast, handwriting is slower and less convenient for everyday tasks.

建议: Сформулируйте ответ прямо и уберите повторы. Используйте связку для объяснения причины и добавьте одно предложение с деталями. Исправьте грамматику (double words, article usage) и избегайте разговорных вставок.

示例: I usually type on my smartphone rather than a desktop or laptop because I don't own a keyboard at the moment. It is comfortable and I can type quickly on the phone, especially when I use autocorrect and swipe typing.

建议: Дайте точный ответ по времени, затем поясните контекст обучения. Уберите лишние вводные слова и исправьте лексику (suite→six? or a couple→two). Используйте связку объясняющую причину и добавьте конкретный пример метода обучения.

示例: I learned to type on a keyboard about two years ago at school. In our IT class we practiced touch typing with exercises and typing software, which helped me increase my speed.

建议: Отвечайте кратко и по делу: сначала основной метод улучшения, затем конкретика. Уберите нерешительные фразы (let me think, I think) и исправьте согласование и словосочетания. Добавьте пример конкретной практики (трёхминутные упражнения, онлайн‑тесты).

示例: I improve my typing by practicing every day during IT lessons at school. For example, I do short timed exercises and online typing tests to increase both speed and accuracy.

× I'm a preferred typing on smartphone due to it is really comfortable for me uh, to typing on telephone.

✓ I prefer typing on my smartphone because it is really comfortable for me to type on the phone.

The student used 'a preferred' incorrectly and mixed incorrect adjective/adverb forms; 'prefer' is a verb, not an adjective here. 'To typing' is wrong because after 'to' we need the base form 'type'. Also use 'my smartphone' and 'the phone' for natural English. Suggestion: use the verb 'prefer' and the base verb after 'to'. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Uh, handwriting is uh, a bit difficult for me because this is like, uh, not fast.

✓ Handwriting is a bit difficult for me because it is not fast.

Using 'this is like' is informal and unnecessary; 'not fast' describes speed, so 'it is not fast' is correct. Remove filler words and use 'it' to refer to handwriting. Suggestion: keep sentences concise and avoid filler phrases. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Handwriting is not fast, but I type on uh telephone very fastly uh, so like that.

✓ Handwriting is not fast, but I type on my phone very quickly.

‘Fastly’ is not a correct adverb; the correct adverb is 'quickly' or 'fast' as an adverb. Also use 'phone' or 'my phone' rather than 'telephone' here. Remove filler words. Suggestion: use 'quickly' as the adverb and avoid extra fillers. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I usually type on a smartphone, not desktop or laptop or keyboard because I don't have a keyboard right now.

✓ I usually type on my smartphone, not on a desktop or laptop keyboard because I don't have a keyboard right now.

Use articles and prepositions correctly: 'my smartphone' for possession, 'on a desktop or laptop keyboard' to refer to non-specific devices. Include 'on' before 'a desktop'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and prepositions for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:22

× So I type on my smartphone and it is really just comfortable for me and I type fast on smartphone, not on on a keyboard.

✓ So I type on my smartphone and it is really comfortable for me, and I type quickly on my phone, not on a keyboard.

Remove unnecessary 'just' and duplicate 'on'. Use 'quickly' instead of 'fast' for adverbial clarity and 'my phone' for possession. Suggestion: avoid repetition and choose correct adverb forms. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Uh, from my perspective, I learned how to type on a keyboard, uh, suite or two years ago, uh, due to, uh, I have IT subject at a school and I learned on that subject how to type on a keyboard very fastly.

✓ From my perspective, I learned how to type on a keyboard a year or two ago because I had an IT class at school and I learned in that class how to type on a keyboard very quickly.

Tense consistency: use past tense 'had' and 'learned' for past events. 'Suite' is incorrect; should be 'a year'. 'Due to' is used incorrectly; 'because' is better here. 'On that subject' should be 'in that class'. Use 'quickly' instead of 'fastly'. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout when describing past learning and use proper time expressions. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Let me think, I think I just type every day on a keyboard at school and so I can improve my typing on that moments that I can improve my typing on my IT subject.

✓ Let me think. I type every day on a keyboard at school, so I can improve my typing during those moments in my IT class.

Use simple present 'type' for habitual actions. 'On that moments' is incorrect; use 'during those moments' or 'in those moments'. 'On my IT subject' should be 'in my IT class'. Remove redundant phrases. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and correct prepositions 'in' and 'during'. Grammar problem type ID:6