打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with clear linking words. Correct grammar (verb tenses, articles) and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–3 sentences, e.g. state preference, then explain why with a brief example.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I find it faster and more comfortable. For example, when I try to type long messages I often struggle to find the right keys and my punctuation is slower, so handwriting helps me finish tasks more quickly.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence (laptop or desktop), then support with specific reasons using linking words (because, therefore). Avoid vague or incorrect words (e.g. 'duskily', 'taptop') and repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and easy to carry to classes and cafes. Because desktops are bulky and stationary, laptops are more convenient for my daily study and work.

建议: Be precise and grammatical: state the time clearly (e.g. 'when I was at secondary school') and describe what you learned using correct vocabulary (e.g. 'finger positions', 'practice exercises'). Use linking words to connect past learning with present ability.

示例: I learned to type at secondary school when I was about 13 in a basic computer class. The teacher taught us finger positions and we practised with simple exercises, so now I type every day for study and work and feel quite comfortable.

建议: Answer directly with a clear method and specific details: name the tools (typing software, games, timed drills), explain how often you practise and what results you get. Use correct grammar and linking words (for example, by, so that). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by using typing software and playing timed typing games every day to build speed. By doing short drills and accuracy exercises for 15–20 minutes daily, I have noticeably improved my typing speed and reduced errors.

× Well, I just still prefer handwriting the traditional method to write because I think I was really difficult and struggling with typing.

✓ Well, I still prefer handwriting, the traditional method of writing, because I find typing really difficult and struggle with it.

Original sentence has awkward word order and incorrect verb forms ('was really difficult', 'struggling with typing'). Use present simple to express a general preference and ability: 'I find typing really difficult' and 'struggle with it'. Also adjust noun phrase 'the traditional method of writing' and remove redundant 'just'.

× I just give you an example.

✓ I'll give you an example.

Context requires a future or immediate action; 'I just give you an example' is ungrammatical. Use contracted future 'I'll give you an example' or present continuous 'I'm going to give you an example'.

× I just write a short letter for an hour because I always find the punctuation keys.

✓ I once wrote a short letter for an hour because I couldn't find the punctuation keys.

Tense and meaning were incorrect: 'just write' should be past 'wrote' for a past event. 'Always find' conflicts with past context; use 'couldn't find' to express inability. 'For an hour' and 'once' clarify timing.

× I prefer typing on the keyboard a laptop keyboard because I think the laptop is really convenient to carry around and I think the desktop is more likely to be duskily and it is less portable than the taptop laptop, so I think the laptop is more convenient and comfortable.

✓ I prefer typing on a laptop keyboard because laptops are convenient to carry around; desktops are less portable, so laptops are more convenient and comfortable.

Original repeats words and contains wrong word 'duskily' and typo 'taptop'. Simplify and correct noun phrases 'laptop keyboard', use plural/general statements 'laptops are', and remove redundancy.

× Well, I learned to type on the keyboard when I was at secondary school around 50.

✓ I learned to type on the keyboard when I was at secondary school, around the age of 10.

Original 'around 50' is likely a mistake; it conflicts with 'when I was at secondary school'. Use a plausible age or 'when I was in secondary school'. Also add commas for clarity.

× I had a basic computer class and teacher showed us how to correct figure position and I practice with simple exercise.

✓ I had a basic computer class and the teacher showed us how to place our fingers correctly, and I practiced with simple exercises.

Missing article before 'teacher' and incorrect verb forms: 'showed' (past) matches 'had'; use 'practiced' past tense. 'Correct figure position' unclear—likely 'place our fingers correctly'. Use plural 'exercises'.

× Now I type every day for study and work so I'm quite comfortable.

✓ Now I type every day for study and work, so I'm quite comfortable typing.

Add 'typing' at end for clarity and flow. Tense is present simple and appropriate; adjust punctuation and phrasing.

× Well there are some software for typing and typing games for me to play because I'm really struggle with typing so I have to do it every day.

✓ Well, there is some software for typing and typing games for me to play because I really struggle with typing, so I have to practice every day.

'There are some software' is incorrect: 'software' is uncountable, so use 'there is some software'. 'I'm really struggle' is ungrammatical; use 'I really struggle'. 'Do it' vague—use 'practice'.

× Just like there is also some task or timed drill for me to complete the task.

✓ There are also timed tasks or drills for me to complete.

Simplify phrase and correct quantifier agreement: use plural 'tasks' and 'drills' with 'are'. Remove redundancy 'complete the task'.

× I think this is really important because it really improve my accuracy and speed.

✓ I think this is really important because it really improves my accuracy and speed.

Subject-verb agreement in present simple: 'it' requires 'improves' (third person singular). Use consistent present tense.