打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise, correct grammatical errors, and organize your response: give a clear topic sentence, one or two specific reasons with linking words, and a short example. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g. “for me to type”, “an one hour”, “find some dots”).

示例: I prefer handwriting because I type slowly and make many mistakes on the keyboard. For example, I often pause to find punctuation marks and letters, so writing a simple letter on my computer can take me almost an hour. Therefore, handwriting is faster and less stressful for me.

建议: Start with a direct answer, then add one clear reason using linking words. Avoid filler sounds and unsupported claims (desktops getting hotter is not a strong reason). Be specific about convenience and portability.

示例: I usually type on a laptop because it is portable and convenient to use in different places. For instance, I can carry it to the library or a café, which helps me study comfortably, whereas a desktop is fixed to one location.

建议: Give a clear time reference and organize reasons. Use correct tenses and fewer redundancies. Explain briefly what happened in the lesson and why you did not improve much afterwards.

示例: I learned to type in primary school when my teacher taught us to type both quickly and accurately. However, I didn’t practice much after class, so although I learned the basics early, I remain a relatively slow typist today.

建议: Provide a structured answer: state the main method, name or describe the tool, and give a brief specific example of practice. Correct grammar and avoid repetition (e.g. “complete your complete your task”).

示例: I improve my typing mainly through regular practice using a typing app. For example, I use an online program that gives timed exercises and tracks accuracy; by practicing for 20 minutes a day, my speed and precision have gradually improved.

× I still prefer handwriting because I find it difficult for me to type on the keyboard.

✓ I still prefer handwriting because I find it difficult to type on the keyboard.

The phrase 'difficult for me to' is not ungrammatical, but redundant here. Removing 'for me' makes the sentence more natural and concise while keeping meaning. Use 'difficult to + verb' for general difficulty statements.

× I'm not familiar with the keyboard so I always find myself making some mistake if I just type on my computer.

✓ I'm not familiar with the keyboard, so I always find myself making some mistakes when I type on my computer.

Use plural 'mistakes' when referring to more than one possible error. Add a comma before 'so' joining two independent clauses. Replace 'if I just type' with 'when I type' for habitual actions.

× And just give you an example, I just type a letter for an one hour on the computer because I find it really difficult to find some dots.

✓ To give you an example, I once typed a letter for one hour on the computer because I found it really difficult to find some dots.

Use 'To give you an example' to introduce an example. 'an one hour' is incorrect; use 'one hour' without an article or 'an hour' if not preceded by 'one'. Use past tense 'typed' for a past event. 'Find' becomes 'found' to match past. 'Some dots' is unclear but retained; consider specifying 'periods or punctuation marks'.

× Well, I just type it on the laptop keyboard because it is really convenient for me to carry the laptop around.

✓ Well, I just type on the laptop keyboard because it is really convenient for me to carry the laptop around.

Remove the pronoun 'it' which has no clear antecedent; 'type on the keyboard' does not need 'it'. This correction clarifies the action and avoids pronoun misuse.

× If you just, umm, used a desktop to, uh, type, you'll find it really troublesome and demanding for your speed of typing because it will get really hotter if you continue use the desktop for hours.

✓ If you use a desktop to type, you'll find it really troublesome and tiring for your typing speed because it gets very hot if you continue to use the desktop for hours.

Use present tense 'use' in the if-clause for a real conditional. 'Demanding for your speed of typing' is awkward; use 'tiring for your typing speed'. 'Get really hotter' is incorrect comparative; use 'gets very hot'. Add 'to' in 'continue to use'.

× Well, I think it was in my primary school, my teacher asked everyone to type quick not only quickly but also and accurately.

✓ Well, I think it was in my primary school; my teacher asked everyone to type not only quickly but also accurately.

Use past tense 'asked' is correct; remove redundant 'quick' and correct word order to 'not only quickly but also accurately.' Replace comma with semicolon or split sentences to avoid a comma splice.

× So I just cultivate that ability since that time, but I don't focus on the class actually and the time.

✓ So I have been cultivating that ability since then, but I didn't focus in class at that time.

Use present perfect progressive 'have been cultivating' with 'since then' for an action from past to present. 'Since that time' -> 'since then.' For the second clause, use past simple 'didn't focus' and correct preposition 'in class' and clarify 'at that time'.

× So I'm really weak at typing on the keyboard.

✓ So I'm really weak at typing on the keyboard.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. It correctly uses 'am' with 'I' and the structure 'weak at'.

× Just by practice and exercise, you know there is an application especially designed for typing.

✓ Just by practicing and exercising, you know there is an application specially designed for typing.

Use gerunds 'practicing and exercising' after 'just by'. Use 'specially designed' (adverb + past participle) rather than 'especially designed' for clearer modification of 'designed'.

× I just and spend some time to type on net application.

✓ I just spend some time typing on an online application.

Remove extraneous 'and'. Use 'spend time doing' with gerund 'typing'. 'Net application' is unnatural; use 'online application' and include article 'an'.

× It can teach you how to type really quickly and then to finish your complete your task on time.

✓ It can teach you how to type really quickly and to finish your tasks on time.

Remove duplicated 'complete your'. Use infinitive parallelism 'to type... and to finish...' and pluralize 'tasks' to refer generally. Keep present modal 'can' as appropriate.