打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words (uh) and grammatical errors (use complete sentences and correct word order). Aim for varied but accurate vocabulary (e.g., “comfortable,” “convenient,” “find the right words”).

示例: I prefer handwriting because writing with a pen on paper feels more comfortable and helps me think clearly. For example, when I jot notes by hand I can write ideas as they come and organize them quickly. However, typing can be frustrating for me because I sometimes struggle to find the right words when I type.

建议: Respond directly with a clear topic sentence and one specific reason. Use linking words like “because” and avoid vague phrases and fillers. Use correct tense and more precise vocabulary (e.g., “use” instead of “write on,” “occasionally” instead of “someday”).

示例: I don't use a desktop or laptop keyboard every day; I only type occasionally for college assignments. I prefer a laptop because it is portable and its keyboard feels comfortable for long typing sessions.

建议: Give a concise time reference and one or two specific details about the learning process. Use correct past tense and clearer phrasing. Use linking words like “when” or “then” to structure the answer.

示例: I learned to type during primary school in a computer class when I was about ten years old. My teacher showed us the proper finger positions and basic typing exercises, which helped me develop a useful foundation for later computer work.

建议: Give a clear method or plan for improvement with specific actions and use linking words like “so” or “by” to connect ideas. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing. Mention concrete steps (practice exercises, online tutors, typing software) and a measurable goal.

示例: I am quite slow at typing, so I practice regularly using online typing programs for 20 minutes a day to build speed and accuracy. For example, I use a typing tutor that focuses on touch-typing drills, and I also set weekly goals to increase my words-per-minute.

× Personally prefer handwriting because when we write on paper with the pen or pencil, we are very comfortably and we write whenever we think in our mind.

✓ I personally prefer handwriting because when I write on paper with a pen or pencil, I am very comfortable and I can write whenever I think of something.

Student omitted the subject 'I' and used plural 'we' inconsistently; pronouns must match the speaker. 'Comfortably' is an adverb but needs adjective 'comfortable' after linking verb 'am'. Also use 'think of something' rather than 'think in our mind' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: always include the subject and keep pronouns consistent, and choose adjective vs adverb appropriately.

× But on the other hand, uh, typing is a very complex for me because, uh, we firstly we try to find the words what we write.

✓ But on the other hand, typing is very complicated for me because at first I try to find the words I want to write.

'A very complex' is incorrect word form; 'complex' describes nouns while 'complicated' describes a situation or process. 'We firstly we try' has extra words and wrong order; use 'at first I try'. 'What we write' is wrong relative clause; use 'I want to write'. Also keep pronouns consistent (I vs we). Suggestion: simplify the clause order and use correct adjective form 'complicated'.

× Personally, I do not write on desktop or laptop keyboard everyday, but yes, uh, someday if I had any type of my practical work uh, about my college.

✓ Personally, I do not type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day, but sometimes I do if I have practical work for my college.

Missing articles 'a' before 'desktop' and 'laptop' and 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' as an adverb. 'Someday' is incorrect; use 'sometimes'. 'If I had' should match present/future: 'if I have'. 'Any type of my practical work about my college' is awkward; use 'practical work for my college'. Suggestion: include articles, use correct adverb forms, and ensure tense consistency.

× So I prefer laptop keyboard because laptop keyboard is very compatible for me.

✓ So I prefer a laptop keyboard because it is very convenient for me.

Missing article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'. 'Compatible' is incorrect in this context; 'convenient' is appropriate. Repeating 'laptop keyboard' is redundant; use pronoun 'it'. Suggestion: use 'a' for singular countable nouns and choose the correct adjective.

× I remember in my schooling a computer class was separate held for students to learn them how to write on the keyboard.

✓ I remember that during my schooling a separate computer class was held to teach students how to type on the keyboard.

Word order and passive construction are awkward: 'a computer class was separate held' should be 'a separate computer class was held'. 'To learn them how to write' is incorrect; use 'to teach students how to type'. Also 'during my schooling' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'teach' with the object and 'type' rather than 'write' for keyboards.

× So at that time my teacher teach me how to write on keyboard and what the main things we remember in our mind.

✓ So at that time my teacher taught me how to type on the keyboard and what main things we should remember.

Verb tense: 'teach' should be past 'taught' (Past tense issue but covered via pronoun grouping); 'write on keyboard' should be 'type on the keyboard'. 'What the main things we remember in our mind' is ungrammatical; better 'what main things we should remember' or 'what the main things to remember are'. Suggestion: use past tense for past actions and correct word order for clauses about things to remember.

× So this is very useful for me at that time.

✓ So this was very useful to me at that time.

Time reference 'at that time' requires past tense 'was' not present 'is'. Also 'useful to me' is more natural than 'for me' in this context. Suggestion: match verb tense to time adverbials.

× Personally I am very slow while typing on keyboard because I am struggling to find words.

✓ Personally, I am very slow when typing on the keyboard because I struggle to find words.

Use simple present 'struggle' for habitual action rather than present continuous 'am struggling'. Add article 'the' before 'keyboard' and use 'when' instead of 'while' for this context. Suggestion: use simple present for repeated or general actions.

× I'm trying to to be to become some professional and be normal in typing on keyboard but that's so hard for me.

✓ I'm trying to become more proficient and more fluent in typing on the keyboard, but that's very hard for me.

Extra repeated words 'to to be to become' and incorrect phrase 'some professional and be normal' are ungrammatical. Use 'become more proficient' and 'more fluent' for typing. Add article 'the' before 'keyboard'. Use 'very' instead of 'so' for formal clarity. Suggestion: remove repetitions, choose precise adjectives, and use parallel structure.