打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., “I prefer typing.”), then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors (e.g., tense, articles, and word order). Try: “I prefer typing because it’s faster and more convenient; for example, I can edit easily and type long texts without tiring my hand.”

示例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can edit text quickly and write long documents without getting hand fatigue, which makes it my usual choice over handwriting.

建议: Give a concise direct answer then add clear supporting details with linking words. Replace vague phrases (“tap to”) with accurate verbs (“message” or “type”). Mention specific times and purposes to be more concrete. Watch sentence structure and avoid filler sounds.

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day. In the morning I usually message friends and check emails, and during the day I type essays or work-related documents on the same laptop.

建议: Answer directly with correct tense and concise linking. Specify what you learned and why, and give one clear result or feeling. Avoid filler words and tense errors (use past tense for past events).

示例: I learned to type about three months ago because I entered an online writing competition, so I practised a lot. It was difficult at first, but after many hours of practice my speed improved.

建议: Provide a clear method and explain its benefit with precise language. Use linking words (for example, so, therefore) correctly and correct grammar (e.g., “Word” and plural agreement). Be specific about routines or exercises and expected improvements.

示例: I improve my typing by copying passages from books into Microsoft Word every day. This helps me practise finger placement and rhythm, so my accuracy and speed have steadily increased.

× I prefer typing, although I nowadays I've spent a lot of time in practicing typing, but compared with handwriting, I don't need to raise a pen to write something actually reduce my.

✓ I prefer typing. Nowadays I have spent a lot of time practicing typing, and compared with handwriting I do not need to raise a pen to write.

This sentence has multiple structure problems: run-on sentences, incorrect word order ('nowadays I've spent' is awkward with 'although'), unnecessary 'in' before practicing, and an unclear phrase 'actually reduce my'. Break into clear sentences, use present perfect 'have spent' for ongoing past-to-present action, remove 'in' before 'practicing', and replace the unclear final phrase with 'I do not need to raise a pen' to convey the intended idea.

× Every day I type on a laptop keyboard. Uh, on the morning I may tap to my friends just greet them and while the other part of the day I may tap to write some content about.

✓ Every day I type on a laptop keyboard. In the morning I may tap my friends to just greet them, and during the rest of the day I may tap to write some content.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'on the morning' should be 'in the morning'; incorrect verb + preposition 'tap to my friends' should be 'tap my friends' or 'tap to send messages to my friends'; awkward phrase 'while the other part of the day' should be 'during the rest of the day'. Also 'just greet them' needs correct word order. These corrections fix prepositions and adverb placement and make the sentence natural.

× I learned that three months ago, uh, at that time I need to do a writing competition online. Therefore I had to practice writing on the keyboard. That's quite hard for me and I spend a lot of time in it.

✓ I learned it three months ago. At that time I needed to do an online writing competition, so I had to practice typing on the keyboard. It was quite hard for me and I spent a lot of time on it.

Tense errors: mixing past and present ('need' and 'spend' should be past 'needed' and 'spent' to match 'three months ago'). Also 'a writing competition online' is better as 'an online writing competition'; 'practice writing on the keyboard' is more naturally 'practice typing on the keyboard'. Change 'That's' to 'It was' to keep past narration consistent.

× I improve my typing by typing my content of the book into the word, the application called Word. Therefore I can let my finger know where they should move.

✓ I improve my typing by typing text from a book into the Word application. This helps my fingers learn where they should move.

Article and noun issues: 'the word, the application called Word' is awkward; use 'the Word application' or 'Microsoft Word'. 'My content of the book' should be 'text from a book'. Verb + -ing is acceptable but clearer phrasing is 'This helps my fingers learn where they should move.' Also 'finger' should be plural 'fingers' to match 'they' and 'let...know' is unidiomatic; use 'help...learn' instead.