打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more concise and add a clear reason with a specific example. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to connect points (e.g., because, so, for example). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me remember information better and I work faster. For example, when I take notes with my Apple Pencil on my iPad, I can draw diagrams and highlight key points quickly, so I review more effectively later.

建议: Answer directly and correct grammar; be specific about frequency and context. Use linking words to make the explanation coherent and avoid redundancy. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Not every day. I only use a laptop keyboard during IT classes because the lecturer assigns tasks that must be completed online. As a result, I usually type for about two hours each week during lessons.

建议: Give a clear time reference and a single specific example; fix tense and reduce repetition. Use linking words (for instance, when, because) to explain how you learned and what you practiced.

示例: I learned to type in secondary school, starting around age 12. For example, every Friday we borrowed laptops in the library to learn basic web coding and practice typing while following online exercises.

建议: Be more specific about methods and give measurable or time-based details. Replace vague phrases like "countless videos" and "I guess" with confident statements and link steps (for example, first... then...).

示例: I improve my typing through regular practice: I do 20-minute typing drills on a website three times a week and follow structured YouTube lessons to learn touch-typing techniques. Over a few months this practice noticeably increased my speed and accuracy.

× Even if I am using my iPad, I will use the Apple Pencil to write something on it instead of type.

✓ Even if I am using my iPad, I will use the Apple Pencil to write something on it instead of typing.

The verb after 'instead of' must be in the -ing (present participle) form. 'Instead of type' is incorrect; use 'instead of typing'. This keeps the parallel gerund form and is grammatically correct. Suggestion: Use 'instead of' + verb-ing whenever replacing one action with another.

× I think by handwriting it makes your work finish faster and you can understand better.

✓ I think handwriting makes your work finish faster and helps you understand better.

The original sentence has an awkward structure: 'by handwriting it makes...' causes a misplaced subject. Use a clear subject 'handwriting' and two coordinated verbs 'makes' and 'helps' to express effects. Also change 'you can understand better' to 'helps you understand better' for parallelism and clarity. Suggestion: Place the subject before verbs and keep parallel structure when listing effects.

× No, but whenever I have IT class I need to use laptop to complete the test giving when the lecturer give the task, we have to complete it on our laptop in the meantime, so it requires us to use keyboard.

✓ No, but whenever I have an IT class I need to use a laptop to complete the test. When the lecturer gives the task, we have to complete it on our laptops, so we need to use the keyboard.

Multiple errors: missing articles ('an IT class', 'a laptop'), incorrect verb forms ('give' -> 'gives'), awkward phrasing and run-on sentence. Also plural agreement ('our laptops') and article before 'keyboard' or 'the keyboard'—'the keyboard' is acceptable but 'the keyboard' replaced by 'the keyboard' or 'use the keyboard'; here 'the keyboard' becomes 'the keyboard' but simplified to 'use the keyboard'. Suggestions: Break into sentences, add articles before countable nouns, ensure subject-verb agreement, and plural consistency.

× If I am not mistaken, I had learned how to type on a keyboard since secondary school.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, I learned how to type on a keyboard in secondary school.

Using 'had learned' with 'since secondary school' is incorrect because past perfect implies a reference point further in the past; simple past 'learned' is correct for a past event. Also use 'in secondary school' rather than 'since' when indicating when the learning occurred (unless you continue learning up to present, then 'since' + present perfect would be used). Suggestion: Use simple past for completed past actions and use 'since' only with present perfect.

× During secondary school, we will enter library every Friday just to to retrieve our own laptop and learn how to access a code and create a website.

✓ During secondary school, we entered the library every Friday just to retrieve our laptops and learn how to access a code and create a website.

The original uses future 'will enter' incorrectly for a past habitual action; use simple past 'entered' or past habitual 'used to enter'. Also 'enter library' needs an article 'the library', 'to to' has a duplicate 'to', and 'our own laptop' should be plural 'our laptops' to match 'we'. Suggestion: Use past simple or 'used to' for past habits, include articles for singular nouns, and fix duplicated words.

× I guess the only way to improve my typing is by being consistent.

✓ I guess the only way to improve my typing is to be consistent.

After 'the way to' use the infinitive 'to be' rather than the gerund 'being'. 'By being consistent' is not wrong but 'the way to improve is to be consistent' is more natural and matches the structure. Suggestion: Use infinitive after 'the way to' for clear expression.

× I have seen countless videos on YouTube that teach us how to type without even seeing the alphabet on the keyboard.

✓ I have seen countless videos on YouTube that teach people how to type without even looking at the keyboard.

'Teach us' is acceptable if including the speaker, but 'teach people' is more general. Also 'without even seeing the alphabet on the keyboard' is awkward; 'without even looking at the keyboard' or 'without looking at the keys' is more natural. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'look at the keyboard' or 'look at the keys'.

× I guess if you are being consistent you will work it out.

✓ I guess if you are consistent, you will work it out.

'Are being consistent' is grammatically acceptable but awkward in general statement; simple present 'are consistent' is preferred for general truths and habits. Suggestion: Use simple present for general conditional statements (first conditional uses present simple in if-clause).