打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Vary vocabulary (e.g., 'faster' instead of repeating 'more quickly') and limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I'm familiar with the keyboard and can type much faster. For example, when I take notes or write emails, typing helps me finish tasks more efficiently and keeps my notes neater.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with a concise reason using linking words. Avoid repeating words and unfinished sentences. Add one specific detail or example about portability or battery life.

示例: I use a laptop every day because it's portable and easy to carry when I commute. For instance, I can work on the train or in cafés without needing a large setup, which a desktop wouldn't allow.

建议: Give a clear time reference and structure the answer: topic sentence + brief supporting detail. Correct grammar (use past tense), remove repetitions, and explain how practice helped with a specific example. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I learned to type in primary school during our computer classes. At first it was difficult, but with daily practice I gradually became faster and more accurate.

建议: Answer directly with a topic sentence, then give one or two specific methods using linking words. Avoid fillers and grammar errors; name types of websites or exercises and mention frequency or results.

示例: I improve my typing by using online practice websites recommended by my teacher, such as typing tutors with timed exercises. Also, because I use my laptop daily for study and work, regular real-world typing helps me build speed and accuracy.

× Currently I will prefer typing because I am familiar with the keyboard and I can type word, umm, quickly, then more quickly than writing, then handwriting. So I think it's more convenient for me to study or work. Yeah, that's all.

✓ Currently I prefer typing because I am familiar with the keyboard and I can type words quickly, more quickly than when handwriting. So I think it's more convenient for me for studying or working.

Errors: 'will prefer' uses future auxiliary incorrectly when stating a current preference — use simple present 'prefer' (Grammar Problem Type ID 10: verb in the present participle form applies here for verb form issues). 'type word' should be plural 'type words' (singular/plural issue, ID 1). Unnecessary filler 'then' and repeated 'handwriting' awkward; use 'when handwriting' for comparison (comparison structure and preposition). 'more quickly than writing, then handwriting' is redundant and incorrectly structured. 'for studying or working' is more natural than 'to study or work' in this context. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual/current preferences, ensure noun number matches, and use a clear comparative clause starting with 'when' or 'than' appropriately.

× Definitely laptop because it's more convenient to bring it for commuting and desktop is too big and. And a little bit outdated. Outdated.

✓ Definitely a laptop because it's more convenient to bring when commuting, and a desktop is too big and a little outdated.

Errors: Missing article before 'laptop' — should be 'a laptop' (Article errors, ID 22). The pronoun 'it' after 'bring' is unnecessary and makes the sentence awkward — use 'bring when commuting' or 'bring with me when commuting' (pronoun/preposition issue; primary issue here is pronoun use, ID 12). Sentence fragments 'And a little bit outdated. Outdated.' should be combined into a complete clause 'and a desktop is ... a little outdated' (sentence structure, ID 26). Suggestion: include articles before singular countable nouns and avoid dangling pronouns; combine fragments into full sentences.

× Since I think in the primary school I study study to learn typing in the computer class and at first it is very difficult for me, but after every day is pretty.

✓ I think I learned typing in primary school in computer class, and at first it was very difficult for me, but after practicing every day it became easier.

Errors: Tense mismatch and incorrect tense forms: 'I study study to learn' is incorrect — the action happened in the past, so use past tense 'learned' (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'It is very difficult' should be past 'it was very difficult' to match timeline. 'after every day is pretty' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'after practicing every day it became easier' — use a clear past result clause. Suggestion: place events in correct past tense for past experiences and use appropriate verbs like 'practice' and 'become' to show change over time.

× There are several uh website. Our teacher recommend that we can use it to practice and and I need to use laptop to for studying and working so.

✓ There are several websites. Our teacher recommended that we use them to practice, and I need to use a laptop for studying and working.

Errors: 'website' should be plural 'websites' to match 'several' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). 'Our teacher recommend' should be past tense 'recommended' to match context (Past tense issue, ID 5). 'that we can use it' has wrong pronoun 'it' for plural 'websites' — use 'them' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). 'I need to use laptop to for studying' needs an article 'a laptop' and correct preposition 'for' (Article errors ID 22 and preposition error ID 11). Also duplicate 'and' present. Suggestion: match plural/singular forms with quantifiers, use consistent tense, use correct pronouns for plural nouns, and include articles for singular countable nouns.