打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and directly answer first, then give 1–2 clear supporting reasons. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “penny ink”) and irrelevant words. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas, and keep it to no more than 3-4 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, using a laptop or phone lets me edit text quickly and saves time when I’m taking notes. Also, typed work is easier to share with others, so it suits my busy schedule.

建议: Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No + which device). Then give one specific reason and a short example. Improve grammar (e.g. ‘I am doing a Master’s in Business Administration’, ‘so many assignments’). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I type on my laptop every day. I am doing a Master’s in Business Administration, so I have many assignments and find the laptop keyboard faster for drafting essays and researching online.

建议: Give a brief, coherent timeline and clear details: when, what kind of course, and a short comment about improvement. Avoid vague or contradictory statements (e.g. ‘one minute course’, ‘so crazy’). Use linking words like ‘then’ or ‘after that’. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I learned to type when I took a basic typing course during high school, which lasted a few weeks. After the course, I practised on both laptops and desktops, and my speed gradually improved with regular practice.

建议: Answer directly and give specific practice methods and durations. Avoid idioms used incorrectly (e.g. ‘a good diaper’). Use linking words (‘so’, ‘therefore’) and provide concrete examples of exercises or tools (typing tests, apps). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practising for one to two hours every day using online typing tests and exercises. This regular practice has increased my speed and accuracy, and I also track progress with typing apps to stay motivated.

× I prefer typing as comparison to handwriting.

✓ I prefer typing compared to handwriting.

The phrase 'as comparison to' is not idiomatic. Use 'compared to' or 'in comparison to' to modify the verb 'prefer'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer typing compared to handwriting' or simply 'I prefer typing to handwriting.'

× Cool, helps you with time and with the help of keyboard or laptop or on phone we can easily type each and everything and it also show penny ink as well as people.

✓ It saves time, and with a keyboard on a laptop or phone we can easily type almost anything; it also shows what we write to others.

This original sentence has multiple issues: sentence structure errors, incorrect word choices ('penny ink' is incorrect) and unclear pronoun/reference. According to the provided list, address 'incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' and 'sentence structure errors' by rephrasing into a clear, grammatical sentence. Suggestion: break into shorter clauses, use 'saves time' instead of 'helps you with time', and clarify the meaning of 'shows what we write to others.'

× Everyday I use my laptop keyboard because I am pursuing master business administration and I have so many assignments so with the help of laptop I can easily type and make my assignment comfortable.

✓ Every day I use my laptop keyboard because I am pursuing a Master of Business Administration and I have many assignments. With the laptop's help I can easily type and complete my assignments.

Errors: 'Everyday' should be 'Every day' (adverbial phrase), missing article before 'Master of Business Administration', awkward phrase 'make my assignment comfortable' and plural agreement 'assignments'. Also improve present continuous 'am pursuing' is acceptable. Suggestion: use 'a Master of Business Administration', 'many assignments', and 'complete my assignments.'

× I took a course of typing how to type on laptop, keyboard or desktop.

✓ I took a typing course to learn how to type on a laptop, keyboard, or desktop.

Grammar and word order: 'a course of typing how to type' is awkward. Use past tense 'took' (correct) but rephrase: 'took a typing course to learn how to type on a laptop, keyboard, or desktop.' Suggestion: use infinitive 'to learn' for purpose and add articles.

× That was one minute course and after that I tried only how to type laptop or on desktop.

✓ It was a one-minute course, and after that I practiced typing on a laptop and a desktop.

Use hyphenated adjective 'one-minute', article 'a', and use past tense verbs correctly: 'practiced' instead of 'tried only how to type'. Also include correct prepositions 'on a laptop' and 'on a desktop.' Suggestion: say 'I practiced typing on a laptop and a desktop.'

× That was so crazy.

✓ That was so frustrating.

'Crazy' is colloquial and unclear here; choose a more precise adjective that matches intended meaning. If the course was unusually short or intense, use 'frustrating' or 'surprising.' Suggestion: pick adjective that reflects your feeling.

× For improving our typing is only one and one solution that is practice.

✓ To improve our typing there is only one solution: practice.

Use infinitive 'to improve' rather than gerund phrase 'for improving' in this context. Also fix word order and remove redundant 'one and one'. Suggestion: 'To improve... there is only one solution: practice.'

× Practice makes a man perfect.

✓ Practice makes perfect.

The idiom 'Practice makes perfect' is concise and gender-neutral; 'a man' is unnecessary and outdated. Suggestion: use the standard expression.

× So I use everyday my laptop keyboard around one to two hours.

✓ So I use my laptop keyboard every day for about one to two hours.

'Every day' should be two words and placed correctly. Use 'for about one to two hours' to indicate duration. Word order improved: 'I use my laptop keyboard every day.'

× That makes me more confident and as well as a good diaper.

✓ That makes me more confident and improves my speed.

The phrase 'a good diaper' is incorrect and likely a wrong word choice. Replace with a logical result of practice, such as 'improves my speed' or 'makes me more accurate.' Suggestion: use meaningful benefits of typing practice.