打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and directly answer, avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Use correct collocations (e.g., “skilled at typing”, “practice typing”) and correct minor grammar (remove duplicate words).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I am more efficient at it. For example, I can type quickly and edit text easily, so I usually type notes and emails when I have free time.

建议: Provide a clear, grammatical response and avoid filler words. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense and phrasing (e.g., “a few days ago” not “for the past few days ago”). Mention one or two specific details about why you use your laptop.

示例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard because I don't own a desktop. For instance, a few days ago I had to submit my thesis, which required extensive typing, so I completed all the work on my laptop.

建议: Give a clear time reference and use a smooth brief narrative. Remove fillers and repetitions, and use linking words to sequence events (e.g., “when”/“after”). Add one specific detail about how you practiced at the start.

示例: I learned to type when I received my first laptop after being admitted to university. At first it was difficult, but I practised for about an hour each day using online typing exercises, which helped me improve quickly.

建议: Be specific about practice methods and avoid vague or awkward phrases (e.g., say “Microsoft Word” instead of “Word Pro microprocessor word”). Use linking words to explain frequency and method. Mention measurable practice habits or tools for credibility.

示例: I improve my typing through regular practice: whenever I have free time I open Microsoft Word and do timed typing drills, and I also use online typing tests two or three times a week to track my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing because I I am quite efficient and quite skillful at this topic and whenever it's typing I do a lot of type whenever I am free.

✓ I prefer typing because I am quite efficient and skilled at it, and I type a lot when I am free.

The original has repetition ('I I'), awkward phrasing ('skillful at this topic', 'whenever it's typing'), and incorrect verb usage ('do a lot of type'). This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and also affects word choice. Suggest removing the duplicate, simplify 'skillful at this topic' to 'skilled at it', and change 'do a lot of type' to 'type a lot' to follow correct verb-object order.

× For the past few days ago I need to submit a thesis.

✓ For the past few days I needed to submit a thesis.

The phrase 'for the past few days ago' is redundant and 'need' is present tense while referring to a past obligation. This is a past tense error (ID 5). Use either 'a few days ago I needed' or 'for the past few days I needed'; here 'For the past few days I needed to submit a thesis' fits the context.

× Uh, so it need a lot of typing.

✓ So it needed a lot of typing.

Subject refers to the thesis or task in the past, so the verb should be past tense 'needed'. The original 'need' is base form; this is a past participle/past-tense related error (ID 9). Use 'needed' to match past context.

× It needed a lot of typing, so I did it on my laptop keyboard.

✓ It needed a lot of typing, so I did it on my laptop keyboard.

This sentence is correct in tense and structure and matches the past context, so no grammatical correction is necessary; included to show it's acceptable. (ID 5)

× Basically, I learned it whenever I got my first laptop.

✓ Basically, I learned when I got my first laptop.

'Learned it whenever I got my first laptop' is awkward. This is a sentence structure issue (ID 26). Rephrase to 'I learned when I got my first laptop' to clearly link the time of learning.

× When I I was admitted into a university, my father gifted me with a laptop and I used to, uh, practice typing on laptop.

✓ When I was admitted to university, my father gifted me a laptop and I used to practice typing on it.

Remove duplicate 'I'. 'Admitted to university' is the usual collocation (not 'into a university'), and 'gifted me with a laptop' is wordy — 'gifted me a laptop' or 'gave me a laptop' is better. 'Practice typing on laptop' needs the pronoun 'it'. This involves subject-verb/collocation and preposition choices (IDs 26 and 11). Use past tense consistently.

× Uh, at the beginning it, it was quite hard.

✓ At the beginning, it was quite hard.

Remove duplicate 'it' and unnecessary filler 'Uh'. This is a sentence structure/verbosity issue (ID 26). The corrected sentence is clear and grammatically correct in past tense.

× Basically, I do a lot of practice to improve my typing and whenever I get my free time I usually open my laptop and open the Word Pro microprocessor word and start typing.

✓ Basically, I practice a lot to improve my typing, and whenever I have free time I usually open my laptop and Microsoft Word and start typing.

'Do a lot of practice' is awkward; use 'practice a lot' and 'get my free time' should be 'have free time'. 'Word Pro microprocessor word' is incorrect naming; 'Microsoft Word' is appropriate. This involves verb+ -ing usage and collocation errors (ID 8) and phrasing issues (ID 26). Use present tense simple for habitual actions.