打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repetition and fix unclear phrase "close to as a."

示例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me think more clearly. For example, I usually keep a nightly journal where writing by hand helps me reflect, although I often type messages and emails during the day for convenience.

建议: Organize answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting points using linking words. Avoid redundancy ("portable, easy to carry and handle"). Use correct noun forms and concise phrasing.

示例: I usually type on a laptop or my mobile phone because I don't own a desktop. For instance, I use my laptop for longer documents since it's comfortable, and I text on my phone for quick messages because it's always with me.

建议: Provide a direct answer with a clear time reference, then give a concise specific example of how you learned. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid colloquial fillers like "playful things."

示例: I learned to type when I was about ten years old. My father had a desktop computer at home, and I practiced regularly on it, which made me quite fast by the time I started university.

建议: Answer should state specific methods you used to improve (practice, online exercises, touch-typing lessons) and give results with linking words. Avoid vague statements and repetition, and correct tense errors.

示例: I improved my typing by practicing daily with online exercises and gradually increasing the duration. As a result, I can now type around 150 words in one session, which is much faster than when I started.

× I absolutely enjoy writing because it is more authentic and close to as a rather than typing, Although these days I depend more on typing, whether it's mail or texting.

✓ I absolutely enjoy writing because it is more authentic and closer to me than typing. Although these days I depend more on typing, whether it's email or texting.

The phrase 'close to as a' is incorrect; use 'closer to me than' to compare preferences (preposition + pronoun). Also 'mail' in this context should be 'email'. Suggestion: use 'closer to me than' for personal closeness and 'email' for electronic mail.

× I really enjoy writing for that matter of fact, and I usually journal at night.

✓ I really enjoy writing, and in fact I usually journal at night.

The phrase 'for that matter of fact' mixes expressions and is ungrammatical. Use 'in fact' or 'for that matter'. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: choose a single idiom like 'in fact' and place it correctly.

× To be honest, I don't have a desktop so it's usually my mobile phone or laptops because it is more convenient than a traditional desktop as it is portable, easy to carry and handle so I love the flexibility it offers.

✓ To be honest, I don't have a desktop, so it's usually my mobile phone or laptop because they are more convenient than a traditional desktop: they are portable, easy to carry and handle, so I love the flexibility they offer.

'Mobile phone or laptops' mixes singular and plural; coordinate number. Also pronoun agreement: use 'they' for plural referents or make both singular. Use commas and colons for clarity. Suggestion: keep parallel number (phone or laptop) and match pronouns accordingly.

× Having said that, phone is something I usually type things texting or calling my friends so it is the thing.

✓ Having said that, the phone is what I usually use for texting or calling my friends, so I use it for most things.

Missing definite article before 'phone' and awkward pronoun/reference 'it is the thing'. Replace with 'the phone' and clearer phrasing 'the phone is what I usually use for...'. Suggestion: include articles and use clear referents.

× Well, I had been typing ever since I was a child.

✓ Well, I have been typing ever since I was a child.

Use present perfect continuous 'have been typing' to indicate an action that began in the past and continues to the present. Past perfect 'had been' is incorrect without a past reference point. Suggestion: use 'have been typing' for ongoing past-to-present actions.

× I had this beautiful desktop while growing up.

✓ I had a beautiful desktop while growing up.

'This' implies proximity; when referring to a past possession use 'a'. Suggestion: use 'a beautiful desktop' to describe a past object.

× Actually it was my dad's and I used to sneak in and do all my playful things around.

✓ Actually it belonged to my dad, and I used to sneak in and play with it.

'My dad's' is a possessive noun missing the noun; 'do all my playful things around' is awkward. Use 'belonged to my dad' and 'play with it' for clarity. Suggestion: express possession clearly and use natural verbs like 'play with'.

× So while I was 10, I was good at typing and that has really helped me during my university days.

✓ So when I was 10, I was good at typing, and that has really helped me during my university days.

Use 'when I was 10' rather than 'while I was 10'. 'While' typically needs a clause. Suggestion: use 'when' for age statements.

× To be honest, in the beginning I used to take a lot of time and I find it really difficult and time consuming.

✓ To be honest, in the beginning I used to take a lot of time, and I found it really difficult and time-consuming.

Mixing tenses: 'used to' refers to past, so follow with past tense 'found'. Also 'time consuming' as adjective should be hyphenated 'time-consuming'. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× However, over time it become really easy.

✓ However, over time it became really easy.

Verb tense: past tense 'became' is required to match 'over time' describing a past change. 'Become' is present; change to 'became'. Suggestion: use past tense for completed changes.

× Now I can type almost 150 words in a go and it's really easier than writing.

✓ Now I can type almost 150 words in one go, and it's much easier than writing.

'In a go' is nonstandard; use 'in one go'. 'Really easier' is awkward; use 'much easier'. Suggestion: use standard phrases 'in one go' and comparative adverb 'much'.

× Although I prefer writing over typing, it is really easy.

✓ Although I prefer writing to typing, typing is really easy.

Use 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A over B' in formal English; also sentence is vague with 'it'—clarify referent as 'typing'. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and name the subject for clarity.