打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer more concise and correct small grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific reason for each preference using linking words (e.g., "because", "however"). Avoid filler phrases like "like for example."

示例: I enjoy both typing and handwriting. For work I prefer typing because it is faster and easier to edit, however for personal journals I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and helps me reflect.

建议: Give a direct topic sentence first, then add one or two relevant supporting details. Fix unclear phrases (e.g., "mechanical 1", "creamy talky sound") by using precise vocabulary. Use a linking word like "also" or "however" appropriately.

示例: I mainly use a laptop keyboard for everyday work. I also own a mechanical desktop keyboard, whose tactile clicky sound I find motivating when I work at home.

建议: Keep the answer concise and correct tense and word choice. Begin with a clear time reference, then give a specific detail about the lesson. Use linking words like "because" or "so" if needed.

示例: I learned to type when I was in grade school. We had a computer class where we practised touch-typing and learned which fingers should press which keys.

建议: Provide a clearer structure: topic sentence, then two concise supporting details with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "I improved" not "I got to improve", "once I knew about them"). Be specific about frequency and results.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing on free online typing tests several times a week. In addition, I type daily on my laptop, which helps reinforce speed and accuracy.

× I love to do both but it varies of what am I going to do.

✓ I love to do both, but it varies on what I am going to do.

The phrase 'varies of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on' after 'varies' when indicating depending on something. Also the clause word order should be subject + auxiliary + verb ('what I am going to do') rather than the question order. Suggestion: use 'varies on' and maintain declarative word order.

× Like for example if it's for work I would prefer typing 'cause it will make my work faster.

✓ For example, if it's for work, I would prefer typing because it makes my work faster.

'Like for example' is redundant; use 'for example'. Informal ''cause' should be 'because'. Also use simple present 'makes' to express general truth rather than future 'will make'. Suggestions: remove redundancy, use 'because', and use present tense for habitual or general results.

× But in creating journals I would love to do handwriting.

✓ But when creating journals, I would prefer handwriting.

The verb form 'in creating journals' is awkward; 'when creating journals' is more natural. 'Do handwriting' is incorrect; use 'handwrite' or 'prefer handwriting'. Suggestion: use 'handwriting' as a noun or 'handwrite' as a verb and 'prefer' instead of 'would love to do'.

× What I use for my everyday work is a laptop, so I mostly use my laptop keyboard, but I also have a desktop keyboard which is a mechanical 1 and it has a creamy talky sound that makes me productive whenever I work on a desktop.

✓ What I use for my everyday work is a laptop, so I mostly use my laptop keyboard, but I also have a mechanical desktop keyboard that has a creamy, clicky sound which makes me productive when I work on a desktop.

'Mechanical 1' is unclear; likely meant 'mechanical one' but better to say 'mechanical desktop keyboard'. 'Creamy talky' are inappropriate word choices; 'creamy, clicky' or 'tactile' are clearer. Use 'that' to introduce defining clause and 'when' instead of 'whenever' to sound natural. Suggestion: choose precise adjectives and correct '1' to 'one' or rephrase.

× I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in grade school.

✓ I learned how to type on a keyboard when I was in grade school.

Sentence is grammatically correct; past tense 'learned' appropriately describes a completed action in the past. No change needed.

× We have a computer subject back then and one of the lessons is to learn how to type on the keyboard and also what keys are specific to each finger to use.

✓ We had a computer class back then, and one of the lessons was to learn how to type on the keyboard and which keys each finger should use.

Mixing present tense 'have' and 'is' with 'back then' (past) is inconsistent; change to past 'had' and 'was'. 'Computer subject' is unnatural; 'computer class' is better. 'What keys are specific to each finger to use' is awkward; rephrase to 'which keys each finger should use.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use natural collocations.

× I got to improve my typing skills by doing a typing test.

✓ I improved my typing skills by taking typing tests.

'Got to improve' is informal and awkward; simple past 'improved' is clearer. 'By doing a typing test' is acceptable but 'taking typing tests' is more natural collocation. Suggestion: use 'improved' and plural 'tests' if general.

× There are a lot of free typing tests that you can find online and once that I had knew about it, I immediately used that almost every week.

✓ There are a lot of free typing tests you can find online, and once I knew about them, I started using them almost every week.

Tense and auxiliary problems: 'once that I had knew' mixes past perfect and incorrect past 'knew'; correct is 'once I knew'. Use consistent pronouns: 'them' for 'typing tests'. 'I immediately used that' is awkward; 'I started using them' fits better. Suggestion: use 'once I knew' and match plural pronouns and verbs.

× And another thing is that I always use a laptop.

✓ Another thing is that I always use a laptop.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; removing leading 'And' makes it more formal. Present simple 'use' correctly expresses habitual action. Suggestion: avoid beginning sentences with 'And' in formal responses.