打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with examples. Avoid phrases like “remove the word” or unclear fragments. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and correct small grammar errors (e.g. “I buy pencils” → “I buy pencils” or better “I use a pencil with an eraser”).

示例: I prefer handwriting because it feels more natural and flexible. For example, I can write anywhere without worrying about battery life, and I often use a pencil with an eraser so I can quickly correct mistakes. Therefore, handwriting is more convenient for my daily notes.

建议: Answer directly and fix grammar and coherence. Use a clear topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example. Replace vague phrases (“go work on size”) with precise descriptions and avoid filler words like “uh.”

示例: I type on a laptop keyboard every day because a laptop is portable and convenient. For instance, when I travel to my workplace or a café, I can take my laptop and continue working without interruption. This mobility makes it my preferred choice.

建议: Begin with a clear time phrase and then give concise details. Correct grammar (e.g. “my school had a class” not “have”) and be specific about what you learned. Use linking words like “because” to explain reasons more smoothly.

示例: I learned to type when I was a teenager because my school offered computer lessons. In that class we practiced using Microsoft Word and basic typing skills, which helped me write reports for different subjects.

建议: Start with a clear statement of your method, then give concrete examples of practice techniques and results. Correct vocabulary errors (e.g. “tie” → “type”) and avoid repetition. Mention measurable improvements if possible.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing every day. For example, I use online typing exercises for 15 minutes each morning and type emails and notes throughout the day. As a result, my speed and accuracy have noticeably increased over the past few months.

× I prefer handwriting because it's easy to write and easy to move.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it's easy to write and easy to erase.

The student intended to say removing writing, not moving it; 'move' is incorrect here. Use 'erase' or 'correct' to refer to removing written words.

× Remove the word.

✓ I can remove a word.

The standalone imperative 'Remove the word.' is unnatural in this context; making it a declarative sentence clarifies the meaning and fits conversation.

× So I just write.

✓ So I just write by hand.

Adding 'by hand' clarifies what 'write' contrasts with (type), making the sentence more precise.

× Buy pencils and use eraser on the top of pencil to remove some word and sentence.

✓ I buy pencils and use the eraser on the top of the pencil to remove words or sentences.

Article errors: 'use eraser' needs 'the eraser'; 'on the top of pencil' needs 'the pencil'; 'some word and sentence' should be plural and use 'or'. Also 'buy' should be present tense 'I buy' to match narrative.

× I've typed on laptop keyboard everyday because laptop is very convenient.

✓ I've typed on a laptop keyboard every day because a laptop is very convenient.

Missing articles: 'a laptop keyboard' and 'a laptop'. Also 'everyday' (adjective) should be 'every day' (adverb) here.

× When I go work on size I can take it to everywhere and it easy to, uh, take it every time.

✓ When I go to work on site I can take it everywhere and it's easy to carry every time.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'go work on size' should be 'go to work on site'; 'take it to everywhere' should be 'take it everywhere'; add subject and contraction 'it's'; 'take it every time' is better as 'carry it'.

× When I was a teenager, my school have a class of how to use computer or Word or Microsoft.

✓ When I was a teenager, my school had a class on how to use computers and Word or Microsoft Office.

Tense: 'have' should be past 'had'. Preposition and noun form: 'a class of how to use computer' should be 'a class on how to use computers'. Use 'Microsoft Office' and include plural 'computers'.

× This is because it's the fundamentals of the of every subject to write a report.

✓ This is because it is the foundation for every subject to write reports.

Article and noun form errors: 'the fundamentals' conflicts with singular 'this is'; better to say 'the foundation' or 'a fundamental skill'. Remove extra 'of the'. Use plural 'reports' or rephrase.

× I try to use it more frequently.

✓ I try to use it more frequently.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. It correctly uses 'try to' plus base verb.

× For example, I use this every day.

✓ For example, I use it every day.

Pronoun choice: 'this' is less appropriate than 'it' referring to typing; change to 'it'. 'Every day' is correctly spaced.

× I think I can tie it faster than before, so I think practice every day is a key action.

✓ I think I can type faster than before, so I believe practicing every day is the key.

Typo 'tie' should be 'type'. Gerund needed: 'practicing every day' as a noun phrase. 'is a key action' is unnatural; 'is the key' or 'is essential' is clearer.