打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and direct in your topic sentence, avoid redundant phrasing (e.g., “more” with prefer). Provide one or two specific reasons with a linking word to make it coherent. Use varied but appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “advantages” instead of “merits and demerits”).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and makes editing easy. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and submit documents electronically, which saves time and looks neater.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and combine related ideas using a linking word to avoid repetition. Correct small grammar issues (e.g., say “most days” not “in most days”) and use articles where needed.

示例: I usually type on a desktop keyboard at home because I have a dedicated workspace; however, I use a laptop keyboard during meetings or when I need to work remotely.

建议: Give a clear, error-free topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid filler words like “uh” and correct phrases (say “touch type” or “type without looking” instead of “blind type”). Finish with a coherent concluding phrase.

示例: I learned to type in elementary school when I lived in the United States. There was an information technology class where we learned to touch type, and I have practiced regularly ever since.

建议: Provide a complete topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Avoid sentence fragments and repetition. Be specific about how the game helps improve skills and mention frequency or results to make the answer more informative.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing with a typing game called Sushida, which gives timed exercises and multiple difficulty levels. By playing it for 20 minutes most days, I have increased my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer typing more, but that doesn't mean the handwriting isn't good enough.

✓ I prefer typing, but that doesn't mean handwriting isn't good enough.

The phrase 'prefer typing more' is awkward because 'prefer' already conveys a comparative preference; adding 'more' is redundant and affects adverb placement. Remove 'more' to make the sentence natural and concise. Also drop the article before 'handwriting' since it refers to the general activity.

× In most days I use desktop keyboard.

✓ On most days I use a desktop keyboard.

Use the preposition 'on' with time expressions like 'most days' and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'desktop keyboard' because it's a singular countable noun. Correct preposition and article usage improves grammaticality.

× Most of the time I use it when I'm at my seat, but on meetings I use a laptop keyboard.

✓ Most of the time I use it when I'm at my desk, but in meetings I use a laptop keyboard.

'At my seat' is unnatural; 'at my desk' is the usual collocation for working at a computer. Use 'in meetings' not 'on meetings'—'in meetings' is the correct preposition. Also include the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard'.

× When I was little, I used to live in the states, so it had uh, information technology session where you can learn how to blind type.

✓ When I was little, I used to live in the States, so there were information technology sessions where you could learn how to touch type.

Capitalize 'States' for 'the States' (short for United States). Use 'there were' to describe past existence (there be issue). 'Information technology session' should be plural 'sessions' if referring generally. Switch 'can' to 'could' to match past tense. 'Blind type' is nonstandard; 'touch type' is the correct term for typing without looking.

× Ever since I type.

✓ I've been typing ever since.

'Ever since I type' is ungrammatical: 'ever since' requires a reference point and the verb tense should reflect continuity. Use the present perfect progressive 'I've been typing' with 'ever since' to indicate an action that started in the past and continues to the present.

× I improve my typing by.

✓ I improve my typing by practicing regularly.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking an object or clause after 'by'. Provide a complete verb phrase such as 'practicing regularly' to state how the improvement occurs.

× There's a game called Sushida where you type in words within a limited time frame and there's a there's multiple levels of difficulty and I challenge myself to go up the.

✓ There's a game called Sushida where you type words within a limited time frame; there are multiple levels of difficulty, and I challenge myself to go up the levels.

Multiple issues: 'type in words' is acceptable but 'type words' is more natural. Use 'there are' (plural) not 'there's' before 'multiple levels' (there be issue/subject-verb agreement). Remove the repeated 'there's'. Complete the final clause by adding 'levels' to avoid the sentence trailing off. Use semicolon or separate clauses for clarity.