打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), and give one or two specific reasons with brief examples. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly and avoid odd phrases like "handheld like typing."

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and more convenient on computers and laptops. For example, when I write long essays or emails, I can edit and format them quickly, which saves time.

建议: Answer directly with a clear statement about frequency and device, reduce repetition and fix grammar. Use linking words like "but" or "however" if contrasting. Give a short specific example of typical tasks on each device.

示例: I usually type on a laptop because I use it daily for study and emails; it feels faster and more convenient. However, I sometimes use a desktop for heavy tasks like video editing because it has a larger screen.

建议: Start with a clear, direct answer stating when you learned, then add one specific detail about the class or what you learned. Avoid repeating words and correct tense and article errors.

示例: I learned to type when I was in sixth grade. My teacher taught a computer class where we practiced the keyboard layout and learned how to use each key, which helped me improve accuracy.

建议: Give a clear, structured answer: state one or two practical methods you use, use linking words (firstly, also), and be specific (e.g., practice speed tests, typing software, daily timed practice). Avoid filler words and grammar mistakes.

示例: To improve my typing, I practice daily using online typing exercises for 15–20 minutes to increase speed and accuracy. I also write full paragraphs and use typing software that highlights mistakes so I can correct common errors.

× Uh, in the modern technology, I prefer the typing because, uh, all types of works have to be, uh, in, uh, technology like a computer and laptop.

✓ Uh, with modern technology, I prefer typing because most kinds of work are done using devices like computers and laptops.

Using 'in the modern technology' is incorrect; use 'with modern technology'. 'The typing' is unnecessary article; use 'typing'. 'All types of works' is unnatural; use 'most kinds of work'. 'In technology like a computer and laptop' should be 'using devices like computers and laptops'. Replace articles and prepositions accordingly.

× So I have to prefer the handheld like typing because it is most convenient and it is easy to write everything, uh, even it is long.

✓ So I prefer handheld typing because it is more convenient and it is easy to write everything, even when it is long.

'Have to prefer' is incorrect; simply 'prefer'. 'Handheld like typing' is awkward; 'handheld typing' or 'typing on a handheld device'. Use comparative 'more convenient' rather than 'most' when comparing two options. 'Even it is long' should be 'even when it is long' to connect clauses.

× Whenever I do something on a laptop, that time I use the laptop keyboard then it will be a convenient for me and it is faster and it is easy to press every button which is which need to be a typing.

✓ Whenever I work on a laptop, I use the laptop keyboard because it is convenient, faster, and easy to press the keys needed for typing.

'That time' is unnecessary; use 'whenever'. 'It will be a convenient' should be 'it is convenient' and no article before 'convenient'. Remove repetitive 'it is'. 'Every button which is which need to be a typing' is ungrammatical; use 'the keys needed for typing' and 'press the keys'.

× And whenever I do that any type of works on a desktop. So it's a a casually work on a desktop.

✓ When I do that kind of work on a desktop, it is usually casual work on the desktop.

Sentence fragments and repetition ('a a casually') cause structure errors. 'Any type of works' should be 'that kind of work'. 'Casually work' should be 'casual work' as an adjective-noun pair. Combine clauses for clarity.

× Well, I remembered when I was in 6th class that time my teacher taught me how to type a keyboard because there is a one at item, there was a one subject which is based on a computer, how to use a computer and how to use a keyboard with each button and how to press everything like that.

✓ Well, I remember when I was in sixth grade my teacher taught me how to type on a keyboard because there was a subject about computers that showed how to use a computer and how to use the keyboard and its keys.

Mixing past and present tenses: 'I remembered' should be 'I remember' if recalling a memory generally, but 'my teacher taught me' is past; better: 'I remember ... my teacher taught me'. 'Type a keyboard' is incorrect; use 'type on a keyboard'. 'There is a one at item' is meaningless and should be removed. Use 'there was a subject about computers' for past tense consistency.

× Well, uh, according to my perspective there is a various ways ways to improve my typing.

✓ Well, in my view there are various ways to improve my typing.

'There is a various ways' is incorrect agreement: use 'there are various ways'. Remove duplicate 'ways'. 'According to my perspective' is wordy; use 'in my view' or 'in my opinion'.

× So firstly I do the typing uh try to typing in a keyboard for a long time.

✓ So first I practice typing on a keyboard for a long time.

'Do the typing' is awkward; use 'practice typing'. 'Try to typing' mixes 'to' with -ing; should be 'try to type' (infinitive) or 'practice typing' (gerund). Use 'on a keyboard' not 'in a keyboard'.

× I have to uh write a passage and write a long paragraph in into any desktop or laptop with the help of keyboard and any type of document which need to be made.

✓ I have to write passages and long paragraphs on a desktop or laptop using the keyboard and create any type of document that needs to be made.

Use plural consistency: 'passages' or 'a passage'. 'In into' is incorrect; use 'on' for devices. 'With the help of keyboard' should be 'using the keyboard'. 'Which need to be made' should be 'that need to be made' or 'that I need to create' for clarity.