打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and fillers, and give one or two specific reasons with a linking word. Use correct comparative phrasing (prefer X to Y).

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's more convenient and faster. For example, I can edit and save documents easily on my computer, which saves me time when I'm working.

建议: This answer is clear and relevant. To improve, add a short supporting detail using a linking phrase to explain why your work requires it—this adds specificity and coherence.

示例: I type on a desktop every day because, as a nurse, I need to update patient records on the hospital system, so I use the ward desktop for accuracy and security.

建议: Correct repetition and reduce fillers. Give a specific time reference and one concise reason, using a linking word to connect ideas. Avoid repeating phrases.

示例: I learned to type in college when I had to write my thesis, so I practiced a lot on the computer to meet deadlines and format my work properly.

建议: Make the response more specific and structured: give a clear topic sentence and then one or two concrete methods you use to improve, with linking words. Avoid vague phrasing.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing every day on online typing exercises and by using keyboard shortcuts while working, which helps me increase speed and reduce errors.

× I do, I do prefer typing than handwriting because it's more convenient, umm, less hassle for me.

✓ I do prefer typing to handwriting because it's more convenient and less of a hassle for me.

Use 'prefer ... to ...' not 'prefer ... than'. Also combine clauses: 'more convenient and less of a hassle' is natural. Remove filler 'I do, I do' repetition; keep one emphatic 'I do prefer' if needed.

× With the nature of my work as a nurse, I type on a desktop every day.

✓ Because of the nature of my work as a nurse, I type on a desktop every day.

Use 'Because of the nature of...' or 'Due to the nature of...' rather than 'With the nature of...'. This corrects awkward prepositional use and keeps present simple tense for habitual action.

× I learned how to type on type on keyboard way back when I was in college because, uh, we usually do it in our thesis, so typing on a keyboard is a must.

✓ I learned how to use a keyboard way back in college because we usually had to type our thesis, so keyboard typing was essential.

Remove duplicate 'type on' and correct preposition 'in college' not 'when I was in college' for conciseness. Change tense consistency: 'we usually had to type our thesis' (past habit) and 'was essential' fits past context. 'Use a keyboard' is clearer than 'type on keyboard'.

× I do improve my typing, the means of doing it every day.

✓ I improve my typing by practising on it every day.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and awkward. Use simple present 'I improve my typing' for habitual action and 'by practising on it every day' to show method. 'Practising' is the correct verb+ing after 'by'.