打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答は明確だが、文法と語順の誤り、冗長な表現、語彙選択の問題がある。まず主題文を簡潔にし、その後で理由を1〜2文で補足する。具体的な頻度や場面（例えば仕事やメール作成）を挙げ、接続語（because, so, therefore）を自然に使うとよい。発音や流暢さも改善すると高得点につながる。

示例: I prefer typing to handwriting because I use my laptop every day for work. For example, I often type emails and reports, so typing is faster and more convenient for me.

建议: 答えは肯定しているが、不自然な語句（"use laptop for a walk"）や文の結び付けが不明瞭。まず直接にどちらを使うかを示し、その後具体的な用途を述べる。接続詞（because, so）や句（for example, usually）を正しく使い、語順とコロケーション（use a laptop, for emails）に注意する。

示例: Yes, I use a laptop every day. I mainly use it to check emails and create presentations, especially when I work from cafes or the office.

建议: 回答は率直だが、表現が曖昧で文法的に不自然。"unconsciously"や"because of age"は適切でない。学んだ時期が不確かならその旨を自然に説明し、現在の能力の理由を具体的に述べる（例えば練習や日常的な使用）。文は短く論理的につなげる。

示例: I'm not sure when I first learned, but I think I picked it up gradually while using computers at school and work. As a result, I practise typing every day, so I've become quite fast.

建议: 内容は伝わるが、語句の選び方と文の構成に問題がある（"coat"は誤用、断片文）。アプリ名を紹介する際は簡潔に述べ、やり方や効果を具体的に説明する。接続語で文をつなぎ、難しさの理由も付け加えると良い。

示例: I use a PC app called Sushida to practice typing. In the app I type different sushi names and phrases, which helps me improve accuracy and speed because some words are unfamiliar and tricky.

× I prefer typing because I everyday use laptops to work so I can type speedy, so I think it's very useful for me.

✓ I prefer typing because I use a laptop every day for work, so I can type quickly; I think it's very useful for me.

The sentence uses incorrect word order and adverb placement for present tense habits. 'Everyday' is an adjective; the correct adverb is 'every day'. Use 'use a laptop' (singular, because one person) and 'for work' to show purpose. 'Speedy' is an adjective; the adverb 'quickly' should modify 'type'. Also combine clauses with appropriate punctuation to improve clarity. Suggestion: Place time expressions ('every day') after the verb or at the beginning, and use adverbs (quickly) to modify verbs.

× Yes I do, I usually use laptop for a walk because it's useful for e-mail and making presentations.

✓ Yes I do. I usually use a laptop when I travel because it's useful for e-mail and for making presentations.

The noun 'laptop' requires an article ('a laptop'). 'For a walk' is odd in this context; likely intended 'when I travel' or 'when I'm on the move'. Use parallel prepositional phrases: 'for e-mail' and 'for making presentations'. Suggestion: Add the article before singular countable nouns and choose prepositions matching context.

× To be honest I forgot, but unconsciously I can.

✓ To be honest I forgot when I learned it, but I can type without thinking now.

The original mixes past and present awkwardly. 'I forgot' needs an object or clause ('when I learned it'). 'Unconsciously I can' is ungrammatical; express ability in present with 'I can type without thinking' to indicate automatic skill. Suggestion: Provide a clear time reference for the past tense and use proper present-tense phrasing for current abilities.

× I can type speedy because of age maybe.

✓ I can type quickly, maybe because of my age.

'Because of age' is missing a determiner; use 'my age'. 'Speedy' is an adjective; use the adverb 'quickly'. Place 'maybe' where it clearly modifies the clause. Suggestion: Use 'my' with 'age' and use adverbs to modify verbs.

× I use a PC app which coat which is called Sushida. To improve my typing.

✓ I use a PC app called Sushida to improve my typing.

The original contains redundant and misplaced relative clause 'which coat which is called' and a fragment 'To improve my typing.' Combine into a single clear sentence: 'an app called Sushida' and attach the purpose phrase to the main clause. Suggestion: Avoid repeating relative pronouns and ensure purpose clauses are attached to the main clause.

× In this app I type the name of Sushi.

✓ In this app I type the names of sushi.

If the app practices multiple sushi names, use the plural 'names' and lowercase 'sushi' (uncountable or plural when referring to items). If referring to one name, say 'the name "Sushi"' with quotes, but likely multiple names are intended. Suggestion: Match singular/plural and capitalization to the intended meaning.

× It's a little bit difficult.

✓ It's a little difficult.

'A little bit' is informal and redundant with 'a little'; 'a little difficult' is more concise and natural. Suggestion: Use 'a little' for small degree modifiers in spoken and written English.