打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise, avoid repetition, and provide a clear topic sentence followed by one specific supporting detail. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct minor grammar and word choice errors (e.g., “faster” not “more way faster”).

示例: I prefer typing because it is faster and more efficient than handwriting. For example, when I type I can edit and format text quickly, which saves time when writing emails or reports.

建议: Start with a clear statement about your usual habit, avoid conflicting connectors (“but however”), and choose precise vocabulary (e.g., “reply to emails,” “chat with friends”). Limit to two sentences and use linking words like “however” appropriately.

示例: I usually type on my desktop for work tasks, such as replying to emails and scheduling appointments. However, I use my laptop or iPad for chatting with friends because they are more convenient.

建议: Use correct tense and grammar (e.g., “I learned” not “learned since”; “teachers taught us”). Be specific about timing and give one concise supporting detail. Avoid vague phrases like “schoolkeepers.”

示例: I learned to type when I started primary school; my teachers taught basic typing skills during computer lessons. We practised regularly with typing exercises, which really helped me build speed.

建议: Give a clear, structured answer: state the main method, then support with a specific example. Correct grammar (e.g., “by typing every day,” “the more you practise, the better you become”). Avoid filler words and keep to two sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practising every day, because regular practice increases both speed and accuracy. For instance, I do short typing tests and chat with friends online to get extra practice.

× I think I prefer typing because it's more efficient and it's quicker than actually writing some sentences on your own.

✓ I think I prefer typing because it's more efficient and quicker than actually writing sentences by hand.

Using both 'more efficient' and 'it's quicker' is redundant; combine parallel adjectives 'more efficient and quicker'. Also 'writing some sentences on your own' is awkward — 'writing sentences by hand' is clearer and more natural.

× Like you can actually type them in a way that is more way faster than writing them through page.

✓ You can actually type them in a way that is much faster than writing them on paper.

Phrases 'more way faster' and 'through page' are incorrect. Use 'much faster' or 'far faster'. 'On paper' is the correct prepositional phrase, not 'through page'.

× I usually type on my desktop if I have to do some appointment or answer and or reply to emails.

✓ I usually type on my desktop if I have to make an appointment or answer or reply to emails.

Verb choice: 'do some appointment' is incorrect; use 'make an appointment'. Also eliminate redundant 'and or' — choose 'or' or 'and'.

× But however if I'm like chatting with my friends I think I type more faster in my laptop keyboard or actually just on my iPad.

✓ However, if I'm chatting with my friends I think I type faster on my laptop keyboard or on my iPad.

Do not use 'but however' together; choose one. 'Like' filler can be removed. Use 'type faster' not 'type more faster'. Use preposition 'on' for devices. 'My laptop keyboard' or 'on my iPad' are parallel.

× I learned how to type since I entered my primary school.

✓ I learned how to type when I entered primary school.

Use 'when' with past simple for a past event; 'since' requires present perfect (e.g., 'I have been typing since I entered primary school'). Also 'my primary school' can be 'primary school' unless a specific school is meant.

× The teacher teach us everything we needed to know about typing.

✓ The teacher taught us everything we needed to know about typing.

Subject 'teacher' with past tense requires 'taught' not 'teach'. Maintain past tense 'needed' with 'taught'.

× They made us practice typing on schoolkeepers during our computer classes and I think like one of the way to type fast is to practice a lot.

✓ They made us practice typing on keyboards during our computer classes, and I think one way to type fast is to practice a lot.

'Schoolkeepers' is incorrect — use 'keyboards'. Use 'on keyboards'. Remove filler 'like' and change 'one of the way' to 'one way' or 'one of the ways'. Add comma before coordinating conjunction for clarity.

× I think by actually types every day, like the more you practice in something or you spend your time on something, it will always turn out well.

✓ I think by actually typing every day, the more you practice something or spend time on it, the better the result will be.

After 'by' use gerund 'typing' not 'types'. 'The more... the better' structure is more natural. Avoid redundant 'in something' and use 'practice something' or 'spend time on it'.

× You would become efficient in doing it.

✓ You would become efficient at doing it.

Use the preposition 'efficient at' rather than 'efficient in' when referring to ability in an activity.

× And like another way is like to chat with your friends, try to type as much as you want.

✓ Another way is to chat with your friends and try to type as much as possible.

Avoid repeated filler 'like'. Use 'another way is to' + infinitive. 'Try to type as much as possible' is more natural than 'as much as you want'.