打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer directly addresses the question and gives a clear preference depending on situation — good. To improve, make the response more concise, avoid repetition, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Use one strong topic sentence and one or two supporting details (specific reason). Also try to reduce hesitation and filler words.

示例: I prefer typing for casual communication with family and friends, but I choose handwriting for exams and formal work because handwritten documents feel more official and are often required. For example, during exams I find handwriting helps me concentrate better and ensures my answers follow the required format.

建议: The answer repeats your previous response and does not directly answer the examiner’s question about which device you use daily. Improve by giving a direct topic sentence naming the device you use most often, followed by specific supporting detail (when and why). Keep it concise and avoid repeating unrelated content.

示例: I usually type every day on a laptop because I use it for online classes and assignments. For instance, I write emails and homework on my laptop in the evenings, while I only use a desktop occasionally at school.

建议: You answered the question with a clear time frame and background, which is good. To improve, remove fillers (uh, um), tighten sentences, and use linking words for coherence. Provide one specific example (name the app or describe exercises) and avoid long, repetitive clauses.

示例: I learned to type when I was in grade one at a boarding school where every student had access to computers. Because of that early exposure, we often used a typing practice app that gave timed exercises, which helped me become comfortable with the keyboard.

建议: Your answer explains practice and discipline but is vague and full of hesitation. Improve by giving a clear structure: one topic sentence stating your main method, followed by specific strategies (e.g., timed exercises, accuracy focus, regular daily practice) and an example of a practice routine. Remove disfluencies and be specific about frequency and tools.

示例: I improve my typing through daily practice using timed typing apps that present sentences to type quickly. For example, I practice for 20 minutes each morning focusing first on accuracy, then increasing speed using lessons that track my words-per-minute and error rate.

× For me it depends upon the situation.

✓ For me it depends on the situation.

'Depend on' is the correct phrasal verb in English. 'Depend upon' is less common and can be used, but 'depend on' is preferred and more natural in this context. Use 'depend on' consistently.

× If it is about giving information to my family members or friends then I choose typing, but in case of exams and formal work, I prefer handwriting.

✓ If it is about giving information to my family or friends, I choose typing, but for exams and formal work, I prefer handwriting.

'Family members or friends' is wordy; 'family or friends' is more natural. Use 'for' rather than 'in case of' for typical contexts. Also use commas to separate clauses. No present participle error remains after simplification; the main issue was awkward prepositions and phrasing.

× Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?

✓ Do you type on a desktop or a laptop keyboard every day?

When offering alternatives with countable nouns, include the article 'a' before 'laptop keyboard' for parallel structure: 'a desktop or a laptop keyboard' or omit both: 'on a desktop or laptop keyboard.' This fixes parallelism and article usage.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in grade one as, uh, being in a boarding school, there was a privilege for all the students to, uh, have access to Internet and keyboard, uh, computer, which made us, uh, familiar since our childhood.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in grade one because, being in a boarding school, all the students had the privilege of having access to the Internet and computers, which made us familiar with them from childhood.

Use 'because' instead of 'as' for clarity. 'Had the privilege' fits past tense. 'Access to the Internet and computers' is the correct collocation and plural. 'Familiar with them from childhood' is the correct phrase; 'since our childhood' with 'made us' is awkward. Maintain past tense throughout.

× And, uh, there used to be an app where we used to type a lot.

✓ There used to be an app where we typed a lot.

When describing habitual past actions, 'used to' can introduce the habitual state ('there used to be an app') but avoid repeating 'used to' before the verb; simply use the past simple 'we typed a lot' for clarity and naturalness.

× For us to improve our typing, we need to practice a lot as it depends upon our, uh, ability and also our discipline, whether we, uh, reach to the point where it's good and, umm, there used to be an app where, uh, in sentences will be given and we need to type that in some fraction of seconds.

✓ To improve our typing, we need to practice a lot because it depends on our ability and discipline, whether we reach the point where it is good. There used to be an app that gave sentences and we had to type them within a few seconds.

Simplify pronoun use: 'For us to' -> 'To'. Use 'depends on' not 'depends upon'. 'Reach the point' is correct; remove unnecessary 'to' after 'reach.' Use past tense consistently for 'used to' situations: 'gave' and 'we had to type them.' Replace 'in some fraction of seconds' with 'within a few seconds' for natural expression.