打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and articles.

示例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. For example, when I take notes by hand, I can organise ideas with arrows and underlining, which makes revision easier and more effective.

建议: Clarify and correct word choice and sentence structure. Begin with a direct statement, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' appropriately and avoid awkward phrases.

示例: I usually type on a desktop because the full-sized keyboard is more comfortable and helps me type faster. For instance, I write most emails and long documents on my desktop since the layout reduces strain on my hands.

建议: Fix grammar and clarity. Use past tense consistently and avoid unclear phrases. Provide a brief supporting detail with a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

示例: I learned to type when I was about eight. My aunt, who was very good at typing, taught me the basics and gave me daily practice exercises, so I became comfortable with touch typing quickly.

建议: Organise chronologically with clearer linking words and remove redundant time markers. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'practice', 'timed tests') and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

示例: At first I practised by typing simple documents to get used to the keyboard. Then I used online typing tutors and did daily timed tests, which steadily improved both my speed and accuracy.

× For me, I prefer handwriting which is much more comfortable for me when I write down all the words by my hands.

✓ For me, I prefer handwriting, which is much more comfortable when I write all the words by hand.

Replace 'by my hands' with 'by hand' because 'by hand' is the correct idiomatic expression; remove the extra 'for me' to avoid repetition and add a comma before 'which'. Use 'write all the words' instead of 'write down all the words' for conciseness.

× That also help me remind the remember the things more effectively as I also like the feeling when I'm writing too.

✓ That also helps me remember things more effectively, as I also like the feeling when I'm writing.

Use 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'That' (subject-verb agreement). Remove 'remind the remember' which is redundant; use 'remember things' and drop the final 'too' for conciseness. Add a comma before 'as' for clarity.

× I prefer using a desktop every day because the keyboard is more comfortable and adjoining suit to my hands is easier and faster for me to type on that keyboard.

✓ I prefer using a desktop every day because the keyboard is more comfortable and better suited to my hands, so it is easier and faster for me to type on it.

Replace 'adjoining suit to my hands' with 'better suited to my hands' to use correct phrase and article usage. Use 'so it is' to connect clauses; replace 'that keyboard' with pronoun 'it' to avoid repetition. Correct word order and articles for natural English.

× So I do most of my writing and emails on the desktop.

✓ So I do most of my writing and my emails on the desktop.

Add 'my' before 'emails' for parallel possessive structure and clarity. This resolves a pronoun/possessive usage issue.

× I learned to type when I was about 8.

✓ I learned to type when I was about eight years old.

Spell out numbers under ten in formal writing and add 'years old' for natural expression of age. The past tense 'learned' is correct.

× My aunt, who was very proficient with keyboards taught me the basics and get me lots of breakfast exercising so I quickly became comfortable with touch typing.

✓ My aunt, who was very proficient with keyboards, taught me the basics and gave me lots of practice exercises so I quickly became comfortable with touch typing.

Add a comma after the nonrestrictive clause. Replace 'get me lots of breakfast exercising' with 'gave me lots of practice exercises' because 'gave' matches past tense and 'practice exercises' is the correct noun phrase. 'Breakfast' was incorrect here.

× At the beginning, I practiced by typing basic documents on my laptop to familiarize myself with the keyboard later.

✓ At the beginning, I practiced by typing basic documents on my laptop to familiarize myself with the keyboard.

Remove 'later' which conflicts with 'At the beginning' and creates a time-structure error. The infinitive 'to familiarize' correctly shows purpose; no 'later' is needed.

× Later, I used online typing tutor websites and daily timed exercises which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ Later, I used online typing tutor websites and did daily timed exercises, which helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

Add 'did' before 'daily timed exercises' to make the verb parallel with 'used'. Add a comma before 'which' to separate the relative clause. This makes the sentence grammatically parallel and clear.