打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答要直接并用清晰的主题句，避免语法和词汇错误。此处存在错误词汇（"scam writings" 应为 "handwriting" 或类似）和表达混乱。可以把观点放在第一句，随后用1–2个具体理由支持，并使用连接词（例如 because, so, for example）。注意句子简洁，不超过5句。

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and expressive. For example, when I write by hand I can vary the style and add little drawings, which shows my personality. Also, handwriting helps me remember ideas better, so I often write notes by hand when studying.

建议: 回答缺乏清晰的主题句并且有许多语法错误与不连贯的词组（例如“不定的短语”“that people”）。应先直接回答（desktop 或 laptop），然后用一两句具体原因或情景支持，使用连接词（because, so, however）。尽量避免重复和多余词。

示例: I usually type on a laptop because I live in a dorm and my laptop is more convenient to carry around. Sometimes I use desktop computers in the university library when I need a larger screen or better software for my research.

建议: 回答应更简洁并用准确词汇描述时间与经历。目前出现动词和词汇错误（例如 "check"、"sincere" 用错）。建议先说具体时间点（e.g. in elementary school），然后用一两句说明如何学会并举例，使用连接词（for example, because）。

示例: I learned to type in elementary school when we had a computer class. Our teacher showed us a typing program, and I practiced regularly on that app to learn the position of the keys and improve accuracy.

建议: 回答要用现在时描述习惯性做法，并提供更具体的练习方法和频率。目前表达重复且时间词不准确（"20 minutes a week" 可能过少），用连接词（for example, by, so）使句子连贯。增加具体工具或进步的例子会更好。

示例: I improve my typing by practicing for about 20 minutes every day using online typing tests. For example, I complete a daily speed test and then practice the keys I find difficult, which has helped me increase both my speed and accuracy.

× I definitely prefer scam writings because I've been throughout the handwriting.

✓ I definitely prefer handwriting because I've been used to it.

原句中“scam writings”和“throughout the handwriting”是不合适的用法。应使用“handwriting”（手写）表示偏好，并用短语“be used to”表示习惯。建议用更自然的表达来说明对手写的偏好和习惯。

× I can feel the temperature of the world, like I can show my own experience rather than typing on the phone or on the computer.

✓ I can feel the warmth of the world; I can express my own experience more personally than when typing on a phone or computer.

原句‘temperature of the world’在这里用法不自然，应改为‘warmth’或类似词以表达情感上的温度；另外比较结构应清晰，使用‘more personally than when typing…’使句子更通顺。

× I think it's more convincing my own personality.

✓ I think it better conveys my personality.

原句中结构不正确，‘more convincing my own personality’不是正确的比较或动词短语。可用‘convey my personality’或‘better conveys my personality’来表达更有说服力或更好地展现个性。

× Most of the time I'll take on the that people because I'm still a university student and I only have one that taught people in my dorm.

✓ Most of the time I'll use the laptop because I'm still a university student and I only have one computer in my dorm.

原句存在词语选择错误和主谓搭配问题，例如‘take on the that people’无意义，应改为‘use the laptop’；‘have one that taught people’也是错误表达，应为‘have one computer’。保证主语与谓语及名词搭配正确。

× Therefore that's the main reason why I usually use the laptop keyboard.

✓ Therefore, that's the main reason I usually use a laptop keyboard.

原句含义可理解但冗余使用‘that's the main reason why’。更地道的表达是‘I usually use a laptop keyboard’或‘That's why I usually use the laptop keyboard’。此外冠词使用改为‘a laptop keyboard’更自然。

× But sometimes I will go to the school library to finish like the my research.

✓ But sometimes I go to the school library to finish my research.

原句中‘finish like the my research’包含多余词‘like’和错误的定冠词‘the’与所有格‘my’冲突。应删除多余词并使用‘finish my research’。

× It's a long story. I learned how to check on the keyboard since I was sincere.

✓ It's a long story. I learned how to type on the keyboard when I was young.

原句中‘check on the keyboard’和‘since I was sincere’用词不当。应该是‘learned how to type’且表示过去的时间点用‘when I was young’或用完整的过去时间状语。若要用'since'需接持续现在完成时。

× So I have a computer class in my elementary school.

✓ I had a computer class in elementary school.

因为叙述的是过去的经历，应使用过去时'had'而不是现在时'have'；此外‘in elementary school’更常见的表述是不用冠词。

× My computer teacher teach us how to type the word on an app that I can practice how to spell in each of the words and use the keyboard to practice this one by one and it's.

✓ My computer teacher taught us how to type words using an app where I could practice spelling each word and use the keyboard to practice one by one.

句子需用过去时（taught, could）与主语时态一致；原句中动词'teach'要改为过去式'taught'，并调整从句结构和冗余部分使句子通顺。

× I improved my typing through practice sensi practice made perfect.

✓ I improved my typing through practice — practice made perfect.

原句含有拼写或输入错误'sensi'且句子结构混乱。用破折号或连词连接两个并列的短语，表达‘通过练习 —— 熟能生巧’更清晰。

× So I usually type in like 20 minutes a week to improve my typing speed.

✓ So I usually type for about 20 minutes a day to improve my typing speed.

原句时间频率与数量表达不自然且与语境不符（每周20分钟太少），将其更合理地改为'daily'或根据学生真实情况调整。语法上也将'in like'改为'for about'以表示时长。

× Like I was typing a long sentence again and practice it again and again to improve the speed.

✓ I practice typing long sentences again and again to improve my speed.

原句时态混乱，使用过去进行时'w as typing'不符合常规练习的描述，应使用一般现在时'I practice...'来表示经常性动作；并去掉多余的'Like'引导词。