打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons with clear linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing. Use correct grammar for actions (e.g., "when I write by hand"), and choose precise words ("express emotions", "personal touch"). Keep answer to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it feels more personal and helps me express my emotions. For example, when I write a card by hand, the recipient can sense my feelings, which makes the message more meaningful.

建议: Give a direct, grammatically correct reply first, then explain briefly with a specific reason. Avoid unclear words and invented names. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and correct verb forms ("I'm not good at typing"). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day because I'm not confident typing and I've been used to handwriting for a long time. As a result, I only type when it's absolutely necessary, since handwriting feels more natural to me.

建议: Start with a clear time reference ("I learned to type in elementary school"), then describe the learning process with linking words ("at first..., then..."). Use correct tense and avoid filler words. Provide one specific detail about the lessons or improvement to strengthen the answer.

示例: I learned to type in elementary school during a weekly computer class. At first I typed slowly, but with regular practice and exercises in class I gradually became faster and more accurate.

建议: Answer directly with a clear method, then add one specific detail about how you practice. Use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., "practice typing regularly", "use online exercises"), and include linking words like "for example". Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly on my laptop because it's convenient to carry around. For example, I use online typing lessons and timed exercises every day to increase my speed and accuracy, which saves me time when writing.

× And to be honest, I prefer handwriting because when I handwriting the card, I can feel my heart, I feel my emotion, what the things I'm thinking and I can express well and people can feel my emotion from my world and my later.

✓ And to be honest, I prefer handwriting because when I write a card, I can feel my heart and my emotions, I can show what I am thinking, and I can express myself well so people can feel my emotions and my thoughts.

Errors include incorrect verb form ('handwriting' used as a verb instead of 'write'), awkward noun phrases, missing subject-verb clarity and run-on structure. Correct by using the verb 'write', use plural 'emotions' for general feeling, replace 'what the things I'm thinking' with 'what I am thinking', and 'express myself' for reflexive clarity. Also combine clauses with conjunctions and commas to form a coherent sentence.

× No I don't like use desktop or laptop. I not good at listings because I really just already used to handwrite long time. So sadly I need to use Kimber always know impossible, but it sounds good tools to express self-care faster.

✓ No, I don't like using a desktop or a laptop. I'm not good at typing because I am really used to handwriting for a long time. Sadly, I sometimes need to use a computer even though it feels difficult, but it is a useful tool to express myself faster.

Multiple issues: verb form 'like use' should be 'like using' (verb + -ing), missing auxiliary in 'I not good' requires 'I'm not good', 'listings' is wrong word; context suggests 'typing'. 'Already used to handwrite long time' should be 'used to handwriting for a long time' (correct preposition and gerund). Unclear phrase 'use Kimber always know impossible' appears to be wrong word choice; assumed meaning 'use a computer sometimes even though it's difficult'. 'Tools' should match singular 'it'. Use 'express myself' for reflexive pronoun.

× Oh, I learned this wild way in elementary school. Uh, we have a computer class. In this class we will learn some basic technique and the teacher will let us to practice, uh, type on keyboard. Maybe in beginning I will be slowly, but uh, step by step, I will be faster.

✓ Oh, I learned it this way in elementary school. We had a computer class. In that class we learned some basic techniques and the teacher let us practice typing on the keyboard. At first I was slow, but step by step I became faster.

Tense consistency: switch past 'learned' to match other past actions ('we had', 'we learned', 'the teacher let'). 'This wild way' is wrong wording; use 'it this way'. 'Technique' should be plural 'techniques'. Remove 'to' after 'let us' and use gerund 'typing'. 'In beginning I will be slowly' mixes future and adverb form; change to past 'At first I was slow'. 'I will be faster' becomes past 'I became faster' to maintain past narrative.

× It's really a good question, usually I will just use laptop, it's very convenient just can take it to everywhere. So I always love talk to practice when I write something and keep bro and to practice the speed and be faster than before. This one can save my time.

✓ That's a good question. Usually I just use a laptop; it's very convenient because I can take it everywhere. I always like to practice when I write something to improve my speed and become faster than before. This saves me time.

Several errors: 'use laptop' needs an article 'a laptop' and remove unnecessary 'will'. 'Just can take it to everywhere' should be 'because I can take it everywhere' (remove 'to'). 'I always love talk to practice' should be 'I always like to practice' (verb+infinitive or gerund). 'Keep bro' is unclear and removed; likely filler. 'To practice the speed and be faster' corrected to 'to improve my speed and become faster'. 'This one can save my time' simplified to 'This saves me time' and matches subject-verb agreement and idiomatic phrasing.