打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Correct basic errors and improve clarity: use correct pronouns, adjectives and concise phrasing. Give a clear topic sentence, then 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid irrelevant or contradictory examples and keep within 3–4 sentences.

示例: I prefer typing on a computer because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can easily delete or rearrange sentences when I edit. Also, digital documents are easier to store and share, which saves time when I need to send work to others.

建议: Be concise and relevant: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific activities using linking words. Avoid fillers, repetition and unrelated phrases (e.g., “hello”).

示例: Yes, I use a laptop every day, both for work and leisure. For work I write emails and reports, and in my free time I browse the internet and watch Netflix. Using my laptop daily helps me stay organized and entertained.

建议: This answer is generally clear but can be more concise and natural. Start with a direct statement, then give a specific time frame and brief context using a linking phrase.

示例: I don't remember the exact year, but I learned to type in high school when our computer teacher showed us how to use keyboards. At that time we practiced typing lessons during computer class.

建议: Avoid clichés without explanation and unnecessary adjectives. Give a clear topic sentence then specific methods (e.g., timed exercises, online lessons) with linking words. Keep answer to 2–3 concise sentences.

示例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly and using online typing tests to track my speed and accuracy. I also use touch-typing lessons and set aside 15–20 minutes a day for focused practice, which helps build muscle memory.

× I prefer her typing on a computer because it's a much fatter way to complete my tasks and also it's convenience.

✓ I prefer typing on a computer because it's a much faster way to complete my tasks and also it's convenient.

The student used incorrect adjectives/adverbs: 'fatter' (means more fat) is wrong for speed; 'convenience' is a noun but sentence needs adjective 'convenient'. Use 'faster' (comparative adjective) and 'convenient' (adjective) to modify 'way' and 'it'. Suggestion: choose adjectives that match the meaning and correct part of speech (e.g., 'faster', 'more convenient').

× I can delete, rearrange my text whenever I want to.

✓ I can delete and rearrange my text whenever I want to.

The original misses a coordinating conjunction between two verbs. This is not a pronoun error per se but linking verbs requires conjunction 'and'. Use 'and' to join 'delete' and 'rearrange'. Suggestion: include conjunctions when listing actions: 'delete and rearrange'. Note: this correction also improves sentence fluency.

× For example, I can't rewrite my letter.

✓ For example, I can't easily rewrite a letter I have already handwritten.

Context indicates the student meant handwriting prevents easy rewriting. The original is short and ambiguous. Improve clarity by specifying 'a letter I have already handwritten' and adding 'easily' to contrast with typing. Suggestion: make the example clearly contrast typing and handwriting.

× Oh yes I I would say I do use laptop every day mainly at works and in my free times I love searching on the Internet and especially I like to watch Netflix and movie on the Internet so I would say hello.

✓ Oh yes, I would say I do use a laptop every day, mainly at work, and in my free time I love searching the Internet. I especially like to watch Netflix and movies online.

Multiple problems: missing article 'a' before 'laptop' (article error), 'works' should be 'work' (singular uncountable for job/place), 'free times' should be 'free time', and 'movie' should be plural 'movies'. Also 'on the Internet' can be 'online'. Repetitions ('I I', 'so I would say hello') are removed. Corrections align verbs and noun forms with third-person/subject usage and correct countability. Suggestion: use 'a laptop', 'at work', 'in my free time', and pluralize count nouns when appropriate ('movies').

× I cannot remember the exact year when I first used keyboards, but I think it should be around my high school time when my computer teachers taught us how to use computer.

✓ I cannot remember the exact year when I first used a keyboard, but I think it was around high school when my computer teachers taught us how to use a computer.

Use past tense consistently: 'should be' is inappropriate for a past time; 'was' suits events in the past. 'Keyboards' should be singular 'a keyboard' for the first time used, and 'use computer' needs an article 'a computer'. Also 'high school time' is unnatural; use 'around high school'. Suggestion: use past tense verbs for past events ('was') and include articles for singular countable nouns ('a keyboard', 'a computer').

× Oh, I would say practice make perfect.

✓ Oh, I would say practice makes perfect.

This is a subject-verb agreement issue where the proverb 'practice makes perfect' requires third-person singular 'makes' to match singular subject 'practice'. The error falls under verb + -ing/subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: memorize common fixed expressions and ensure verb agrees with the subject: 'practice makes'.

× So the best way to improve my typing is to type a lot or do it more frequently so that I get used to all the buttons on the keyboards.

✓ So the best way to improve my typing is to type a lot or do it more frequently so that I get used to all the buttons on the keyboard.

Minor number agreement: 'keyboards' should be singular 'the keyboard' when referring to the keyboard of a single device. Tense 'get used to' is fine present. Ensure noun number matches intended meaning. Suggestion: use 'the keyboard' when talking about the device you use, or 'keyboards' only when speaking generally about many different keyboards.

× That's what I think is the most beautiful.

✓ That's what I think is best.

'Most beautiful' is inappropriate and awkward for describing a preferred method; 'best' is the correct adjective. The student used a superlative unrelated to meaning. Suggestion: choose adjectives that match the context; use 'best' to express preference rather than 'most beautiful'.