打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because / therefore / additionally). Avoid repetition and irrelevant details. Focus on concrete comparisons (e.g., ease of editing, speed, storage).

示例: I prefer typing on a computer because it is faster and much easier to edit. For example, I can quickly delete or move text with a backspace or cut-and-paste, whereas with handwriting I would need to cross out or rewrite whole pages.

建议: Answer directly and give one clear reason with a supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and clearer vocabulary (e.g., "use" instead of "tap", "since 2018" as a time phrase). Avoid vague filler phrases like "you know."

示例: I use a desktop keyboard every day because I have owned a desktop since 2018. I find desktop keyboards more comfortable and spacious, which helps me type more accurately and for longer periods.

建议: Give a single clear answer about the age and then support it with one concrete detail (how or why you learned). Avoid contradictory ages and repetition. Use correct tense and numbers ("five years old"). Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

示例: I learned to type when I was five years old because my parents enrolled me in computer classes. Since then I have enjoyed typing and practiced regularly to improve my speed.

建议: Be specific about methods and use clear sequencing language (first, then, also). Give concrete details such as practice duration, types of exercises or software, and results. Avoid vague expressions like "from my mind."

示例: I improve my typing by practicing two to three hours daily on typing websites and doing data-entry work at my job. As a result, my speed has increased and my error rate has decreased, so I now type more confidently.

× I prefer typing on computer because it is easy to type on a computer.

✓ I prefer typing on a computer because it is easy to type on a computer.

Use the definite article 'a' with singular countable nouns. The preposition 'on' is okay for 'typing on a computer', but 'computer' needs an article. Suggestion: Always use 'a' or 'the' with singular countable nouns when not using plural or proper noun.

× Like if you have to erase anything, you have to click on a backspace, if you space, if you have to space anything, if you have a space the alphabet.

✓ For example, if you need to erase something, you press the backspace key; if you need to add a space, you press the spacebar.

The original is repetitive and uses incorrect nouns and verbs ('click on a backspace', 'if you have a space the alphabet'). Simplify and use correct collocations: 'press the backspace key' and 'press the spacebar'. Keep parallel structure for clarity.

× So you have generally click on the space button.

✓ So you generally click the space button.

Do not use the infinitive form 'have click'; use present simple 'click'. Also 'click the space button' is preferred over 'click on the space button'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct verb form.

× But in the page you have to use razor, you have to use pencil, you have to use a page on which you have to write.

✓ But on paper you have to use a pencil or a pen to write.

'In the page' is incorrect; use 'on paper' or 'on the page'. 'Razor' is wrong for writing; use 'pen' or 'pencil'. Simplify and use correct prepositions and word choice.

× Yes, I only tap on a desktop because I have desktop since 2018.

✓ Yes, I only type on a desktop because I have had a desktop since 2018.

Use 'type' rather than 'tap' for keyboards. For actions continuing from past to present, use present perfect 'have had'. Also include the article 'a' before 'desktop'.

× I prefer to type on desktop because laptop keyboard is very thick and small to type and the desktop keyboard are good to type something you know.

✓ I prefer to type on a desktop because laptop keyboards are small and cramped, while desktop keyboards are better for typing.

Use plural 'keyboards' when speaking generally. Correct adjective order and word choice: 'small and cramped' is clearer than 'very thick and small to type'. Subject-verb agreement: 'desktop keyboards are'. Avoid filler 'you know'.

× I learned to type on a keyboard when I was 5 year olds.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was five years old.

Use singular 'year' with age expressions in this structure and write the number as words in formal speech. 'Years old' requires plural when the number is greater than one; 'five years old' is correct. Remove plural 'olds'.

× I, when I was a child, I want to learn to type on keyboard.

✓ When I was a child, I wanted to learn to type on a keyboard.

Maintain consistent past tense: 'wanted' not 'want'. Remove redundant subject 'I' after the introductory clause. Include article 'a' before 'keyboard'.

× I love to type on keyboard.

✓ I love to type on a keyboard.

Add the article 'a' before 'keyboard' when referring to a single device in general. Present simple 'love' is fine.

× You know, I love typing.

✓ You know, I love typing.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. It uses present simple appropriately to express a general preference.

× I love to, uh, do the century job.

✓ I love to do typing-related work.

'Century job' is unclear and likely a misphrase. Replace with 'typing-related work' to convey intended meaning. Also remove filler hesitations for clarity.

× So when I was six years old, I love typing and I learned typing to get a great experience.

✓ So when I was six years old, I loved typing and I learned to type to gain experience.

Maintain past tense 'loved' for a past time reference. Use infinitive 'to type' after 'learned' (learned to type), and use 'gain experience' instead of 'get a great experience' for natural phrasing.

× I practice it like 2 to 3 hours.

✓ I practice for about two to three hours.

Use 'for' with durations and write numbers as words in formal contexts. Also add 'about' for approximation and hyphenate 'two to three' as a range.

× I type, I do the entry job, so my typing skills getting improved by the job also.

✓ I do data-entry work, so my typing skills improve through the job.

Use the correct noun 'data-entry' and present simple 'improve' for habitual actions. Original used incorrect progressive passive 'getting improved by the job'; change to active form 'improve through the job'.

× And uh, I love to do typing, so I improve my typing skills from my mind also.

✓ And I enjoy typing, so I also try to improve my typing skills on my own.

Replace informal 'do typing' with 'enjoy typing'. 'From my mind' is unclear; use 'on my own' to indicate self-study. Use present simple for habitual actions.