打字— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be clear, concise and correct vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g., I prefer handwriting) then give one or two specific reasons using correct words and linking phrases. Avoid irrelevant or garbled words and keep to 2–3 sentences. Focus on clarity: mention organisation of thoughts and slower pace helps thinking during meetings.

示例: I prefer handwriting to typing because it helps me organise my thoughts more clearly. For example, when I take notes by hand I can quickly sketch diagrams and make connections, which helps me think more carefully during meetings.

建议: Good clear answer with relevant detail and an example. Improve by tightening language and correcting small grammatical errors and awkward phrases. Use a linking phrase and a concise final remark. Also avoid redundancy (e.g., 'portable and convenient' repeated ideas).

示例: I use a laptop every day because it’s portable and suits both work and study. For example, I can carry it to the library or a café, and the battery usually lasts long enough to finish most tasks.

建议: Good content and chronological structure. Improve grammar (past tense agreement), reduce repetition, and add a linking word to improve coherence. Keep it to two sentences maximum and be specific about what you learned (finger placement, exercises).

示例: I started learning to type at school when I was about ten. Our teacher taught proper finger placement and we practised exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

建议: Be specific, avoid repetition, and use correct vocabulary and grammar. Give a clear main idea followed by one or two concrete methods (regular timed practice, online typing programs, posture and finger placement practice). Use linking words for coherence. Limit to about 2–3 sentences.

示例: I improve my typing through regular practice with online typing programs that give timed exercises and accuracy feedback. I also focus on correct finger placement and posture, and I gradually increase speed while keeping accuracy high.

× I prefer handwriting to type Bing because I find it more convenient and race to organize my thoughts on paper.

✓ I prefer handwriting to typing because I find it more convenient and easier to organize my thoughts on paper.

Faulty word forms and word choice: 'to type Bing' is incorrect and likely a typo; 'handwriting to typing' requires gerund after 'prefer ... to'; 'race' should be 'easier'. Suggestion: use the gerund 'typing' after 'prefer ... to' and choose the correct adjective 'easier' for comparing convenience.

× I am not a fast diaper, so writing by hand help me think more clearly and make no think talking quickly during the meeting or.

✓ I am not a fast typist, so writing by hand helps me think more clearly and prevents me from thinking hastily during meetings.

Multiple errors: 'diaper' is a wrong word; correct noun is 'typist'. Subject-verb agreement: 'writing by hand helps' requires 'helps' (third person singular). 'make no think talking quickly' is ungrammatical; meaning likely 'prevents me from thinking hastily' or 'prevents me from speaking too quickly'. Also use plural 'meetings' for general situations. Suggestion: replace wrong words, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use clear verb patterns like 'prevents me from ...'.

× I type on a laptop every day because it's portable and convenient for both work and study.

✓ I type on a laptop every day because it is portable and convenient for both work and study.

Original sentence is generally correct but contraction 'it's' is acceptable; no grammatical change required. Kept full form 'it is' for formality consistency. No grammar problem from the provided list, so only a minor style adjustment was made.

× For example, I can take it to the library or a coffee cafe and the battery lasts longer enough for most of the my tasks.

✓ For example, I can take it to the library or a café, and the battery lasts long enough for most of my tasks.

Word choice and article errors: 'coffee cafe' is redundant; 'café' is sufficient. 'lasts longer enough' is incorrect order—correct is 'lasts long enough'. Also remove extra article 'the' before 'my tasks'. Suggestion: use 'long enough' for duration and correct articles.

× I started learning to type on a keyboard when I was at school around the age of 10 when we had a computer lessons where the teacher showed us proper finger placement and we practice typing exercise to improve speed accuracy.

✓ I started learning to type on a keyboard when I was at school at around the age of ten, when we had computer lessons and the teacher showed us proper finger placement; we practiced typing exercises to improve speed and accuracy.

Tense and number errors: 'computer lessons' should not have 'a' before it; 'we practice' should be past tense 'we practiced' to match 'started learning' and 'showed'; 'typing exercise' should be plural 'typing exercises'; add 'and' between 'speed' and 'accuracy'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently for past events and match singular/plural nouns.

× I think we can practice improve our typing skill by practicing.

✓ I think we can improve our typing skills by practicing.

Redundant and incorrect verb forms: 'practice improve' is wrong—use 'improve' as the main verb with 'by practicing' as the method. 'typing skill' is better as plural 'typing skills'. Suggestion: use 'improve ... by practicing' and keep noun number consistent.

× Our teacher always showed us how to replacement of finger on keyboard and we keep exercise of typing in our lecture.

✓ Our teacher always showed us how to place our fingers on the keyboard, and we kept doing typing exercises during the lesson.

Wrong word choice and tense: 'replacement of finger' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'place our fingers'. 'keep exercise of typing' is ungrammatical—use 'kept doing typing exercises' to match past context. 'lecture' is better as 'lesson' for school classes. Suggestion: use correct verbs ('place', 'do') and keep past tense consistent.

× So I think this is the best way of type improve.

✓ So I think this is the best way to improve typing.

Incorrect verb pattern and word order: 'way of type improve' is ungrammatical. Use the construction 'the best way to improve [noun/skill]' and change 'type' to 'typing' (gerund) or 'typing skill'. Suggestion: use 'the best way to improve typing' for clarity and correct form.