建筑— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, use a clear topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and limit length to about 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "however" correctly.

示例: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because this neighbourhood is mainly residential. However, most high-rises are concentrated in the city centre, about 20 minutes away by bus.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and give a brief reason and an example. Use more natural vocabulary (e.g. "I don’t usually take photos of buildings" and "landscapes" instead of "natural scenario"). Keep it concise and coherent using linking words like "because" or "instead."

示例: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I prefer photographing natural landscapes. For example, I often take pictures of mountains and rivers when I go hiking.

建议: Provide a concise topic sentence, correct grammar, and add a specific reason or detail about why you want to visit. Avoid repeating phrases and keep to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "for example."

示例: Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101 because it is an iconic skyscraper and offers impressive city views. For example, I want to go to the observation deck to see the skyline and learn about its engineering.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and two concise specific reasons with correct vocabulary (e.g. "unsafe in earthquakes" and "lack of privacy/green space"). Use linking words like "because" and "also" and avoid unclear phrases like "not self."

示例: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building because I worry about safety during earthquakes and limited outdoor space. Also, high-rise living can feel less private and more congested than living in a house.

× There are not tall buildings near my home because this area is for house, not for a big buildings.

✓ There are no tall buildings near my home because this area is for houses, not for big buildings.

Use 'there is/there are' negatives as 'there is no' or 'there are no' rather than 'there are not' before a noun. Also correct count nouns: 'house' should be plural 'houses' to match a general area, and 'a big buildings' is incorrect: drop the article 'a' before plural 'buildings'. Suggestion: say 'There are no tall buildings...'; ensure singular/plural forms match the noun phrase.

× Tall buildings will be built just solely in the city center.

✓ Tall buildings will be built solely in the city center.

The adverb 'just' is redundant with 'solely'; remove one to avoid awkwardness. No article error in noun, but sentence was wordy. Suggestion: use a single adverb 'solely' or 'only' before the prepositional phrase: 'built solely in the city center.'

× No I don't.

✓ No, I don't.

Add a comma after 'No' for natural spoken response. This is punctuation rather than verb form; keep as a short answer matching the present simple negative 'I don't'. Suggestion: write 'No, I don't.' for clarity.

× I dislike photo shooting the buildings but I love taking a photo of natural scenario.

✓ I don't like taking photos of buildings, but I love taking photos of natural scenery.

Use 'like/dislike + gerund' (taking). 'Photo shooting' is unidiomatic; use 'taking photos'. 'Scenario' is wrong word: use 'scenery'. Match plural 'photos' for general activities. Suggestion: 'I don't like taking photos of buildings, but I love taking photos of natural scenery.'

× Yes, of course I would like to visit Taipei 101 buildings, because it's the famous buildings from Taiwan.

✓ Yes, of course I would like to visit Taipei 101, because it's a famous building in Taiwan.

Taipei 101 is a single building, so use singular 'building' not plural 'buildings'. Use article 'a famous building' or 'the famous landmark'. Use 'in Taiwan' rather than 'from Taiwan'. Suggestion: 'visit Taipei 101' is sufficient; do not pluralize the name.

× All tourists or travelers must be must visit there and I want to.

✓ All tourists or travelers must visit there, and I want to too.

Double 'must be must' is incorrect. Use 'must visit' for necessity. 'Visit there' is acceptable but 'visit it' or 'go there' is more natural. Add 'too' for agreement instead of 'I want to.' Suggestion: 'All tourists must visit it, and I would like to as well.'

× No, I don't want to live in a tall buildings because I think it's not self.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a tall building because I think it's not safe.

Mismatch of article and plural: 'a' requires singular 'building', not 'buildings'. 'Self' is wrong word; intended is 'safe'. Suggestion: 'a tall building' and use 'safe' to express safety.

× Especially when the earthquake happened, I think it's quite difficult to escape from the buildings.

✓ Especially during an earthquake, I think it's quite difficult to escape from tall buildings.

Use 'during an earthquake' rather than 'when the earthquake happened' for a general statement. 'Escape from the buildings' is acceptable, but specify 'tall buildings' to be clear. Also keep present-tense general statement: 'it's' is fine. Suggestion: 'During an earthquake, it's difficult to escape from tall buildings.'

× Also I think it's not safe.

✓ Also, I think it's not safe.

Add a comma after 'Also' for clarity in writing. The adjective 'safe' is correct. Suggestion: 'Also, I don't think it's safe.' provides a more natural negative phrasing.