食物— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles). Mention a brief reason or a memory to make your answer more specific.

示例: My favourite food is momo. I especially like it because of its soft dough and spicy filling, which is a popular dish in my country. For instance, I often eat momos at family gatherings because they remind me of home and make me feel happy.

建议: Use past tense when talking about childhood and give specific examples and reasons. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word. Fix basic vocabulary and grammar (e.g., 'gave me energy', 'junk food can be harmful').

示例: When I was young, I preferred healthy foods to junk food. For example, I often ate eggs and lentils because they gave me energy for school, whereas I avoided chips and sweets because they made me feel tired.

建议: Answer directly and give a specific example of seasonal changes. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'in summer' and avoid vague phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and correct collocations (e.g., 'try new foods', 'taste new flavours').

示例: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer light salads and cold drinks, while in winter I enjoy hot soups and stews because they are comforting and warming.

建议: Use clear past and present contrast with correct tense and avoid repeating phrases. Provide a reason for the change using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'. Keep answer to 2–3 sentences and include a specific example of foods you used to and now prefer.

示例: Yes, my favourite food has changed since I was a child. I used to eat a lot of chips and sweets, but now I prefer home-cooked meals like grilled chicken and vegetables because I care more about my health.

× Momo is MO All people loves Momo.

✓ Momo is popular. All people love Momo.

Original sentence uses 'MO' which seems incorrect and 'All people loves' has wrong verb form with plural subject. Use 'popular' to convey fame and 'love' to agree with plural subject. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement: plural subjects take base verb (love).

× It is very delicious and sweet It it gives me a good vibes and feel refreshed.

✓ It is very delicious and sweet. It gives me good vibes and makes me feel refreshed.

Run-on and repetition: 'It it' is a typo. 'a good vibes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'good vibes' (no article) or 'a good feeling'. Also 'feel refreshed' needs subject 'makes me'. Suggestion: fix typos, match articles to noun number, and include correct verbs to show cause ('gives' and 'makes').

× I love eating more.

✓ I enjoy eating it often.

'Love eating more' is awkward. 'More' is unclear; use 'often' or 'a lot'. Present participle 'eating' is acceptable but refine verb choice. Suggestion: replace 'love' with 'enjoy' and clarify frequency with 'often'.

× When I am young I like healthy food rather than junk food because healthy food give us protein and unhealthy food like junk food are ham or body.

✓ When I was young I liked healthy food rather than junk food because healthy food gave us protein and unhealthy foods like junk food harm the body.

Time mismatch: question asks about past, so use past tense ('was', 'liked', 'gave'). Subject-verb agreement: 'healthy food give' should be 'gave'. 'are ham or body' is incorrect — likely intended 'harm the body'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently and correct vocabulary ('harm').

× So that's it.

✓ That's all.

'So that's it' is colloquial and fine, but 'That's all' is more natural at the end of an answer. No major grammatical error; suggestion: prefer clearer closing phrase.

× Yes, I eat different food at different time of the year.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Use plural 'foods' and 'times' to match 'different'. Also 'at different times of the year' is the correct idiom. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when referring to multiple occasions or varieties.

× Not the just regular dishes when, but whenever I get chance.

✓ Not just the regular dishes, but whenever I get the chance.

Word order and articles are wrong: 'Not the just' should be 'Not just the' or better 'Not just the regular dishes'. Add definite article 'the' before 'chance' and remove stray 'when'. Suggestion: keep negative introductory phrase followed by contrast and include articles where needed.

× I love to taste new food. I love to drink new food, new taste.

✓ I love to try new foods and experience new tastes.

'Taste' and 'drink' usage is odd: we 'try' new foods and 'experience' tastes. Also pluralize 'foods' and 'tastes'. Suggestion: use appropriate verbs for sensory experiences and plural nouns for variety.

× Yes, my favorite food change since I was a child.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since I was a child.

When referencing a change from the past to now, use the present perfect 'has changed'. Simple present 'change' is incorrect here. Suggestion: use present perfect for actions that started in the past and continue to present.

× When I was a child I love eating more junk food like chips and when I am when I am being young, I like to eat healthy food.

✓ When I was a child I loved eating junk food like chips, but when I was young I liked to eat healthy food.

Inconsistent tense: describe past preferences using past tense ('loved', 'liked'). Remove redundant phrase 'when I am when I am being young' which is incorrect; replace with 'when I was young'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent and avoid repetition.