阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and unclear phrases, use appropriate vocabulary, and keep to 2–4 sentences. Add one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector (e.g., because, so, for example).

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I read a lot to improve my academic performance because books help me understand subjects in depth and reduce stress. For example, reading a chapter before class often makes lectures easier to follow.

建议: Be accurate and avoid vague or incorrect technical claims. Use clear comparisons and a linking word to structure the answer. Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a specific reason or example to support your preference.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and causes less eye strain for me. For example, when I study from printed notes I can focus longer without headaches, whereas screens make my eyes tired after a short time.

建议: Organize your answer with a clear contrast using linking words (e.g., when… but, however). Use correct tense and avoid unclear phrases. Give one clear situation requiring careful reading and one situation when you read quickly, with brief reasons or examples.

示例: I need to read carefully when studying for exams because I must understand details and remember facts. However, I skim social media posts or messages since they are usually short updates and I only need the main point.

建议: Answer directly and use one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear expressions. Define what you mean by scanning and give a concrete example of when you use it versus when you would read in detail.

示例: I prefer scanning most of the time because it lets me quickly get the main idea of an article or news story. For instance, I scan headlines and first paragraphs to decide if an article is worth reading in detail; if it’s important for work or study, then I read it carefully.

× Absolutely yes I am a student died and I have to read my books because of my performance to enhance my performance as reading is good for our mental health and it act as a stressbuster to me and make me make my laser time more productive and help to increase my knowledge about the subject and a particular.

✓ Absolutely. Yes, I am a student, and I have to read my books to improve my performance. Reading is good for our mental health; it acts as a stressbuster for me, makes my leisure time more productive, and helps increase my knowledge about particular subjects.

The original sentence contains multiple sentence structure problems (run-on sentences, unclear phrasing, and incorrect word choice). Break long runs into separate sentences and use conjunctions and punctuation to clarify relationships. Replace 'died' (incorrect word) with a comma-separated clause; likely the student meant 'I am a student, and'. Use 'to improve my performance' instead of 'because of my performance to enhance my performance'. Change 'it act' to 'it acts' (subject-verb agreement) and 'make I make my laser time' to 'makes my leisure time'. Use 'particular subjects' instead of 'a particular'. Suggestions: split into shorter sentences, choose correct vocabulary, ensure verbs agree with subjects, and keep parallel structure in lists.

× Well, I prefer to read on paper because it is good for our eyes rather than in screen because the green has a lot of radiation effect which affect our eyes badly.

✓ Well, I prefer to read on paper because it is better for our eyes than reading on a screen; screens emit a lot of blue light that can harm our eyes.

The errors include wrong prepositions ('in screen' should be 'on a screen') and incorrect noun phrase 'the green' likely intended as 'blue light' or 'screen light'. Use comparative structure 'better for our eyes than reading on a screen'. Also replace 'has a lot of radiation effect which affect our eyes badly' with 'emit a lot of blue light that can harm our eyes' for clarity. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('on a screen'), accurate terminology, and clearer clause structure.

× And paper is a traditional method used since many years which is beneficial which is which is quite good for our health.

✓ Paper is a traditional medium used for many years and is beneficial; it is quite good for our health.

This sentence is repetitive and contains awkward phrasing ('method', repeated 'which is which is'). Reword to 'medium' or 'format', remove redundancy, and use correct temporal expression 'for many years' rather than 'since many years'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, choose concise synonyms, and use 'for many years' for duration.

× Well, I need to read carefully when I was doing my subject studies or when I think I am scrolling social media.

✓ Well, I need to read carefully when I am studying a subject or when I am reading something important rather than just scrolling social media.

Tense mismatch: 'when I was doing my subject studies' mixes past with present context. Use present continuous 'when I am studying' to match the question about habitual/current needs. Also clarify contrast with 'scrolling social media'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and use clearer phrasing for activities.

× I do not read that much effectively because I can easily found it on other rails and stories off of my friends and relatives.

✓ I do not read as carefully because I can easily find the information on other platforms, such as friends' posts and stories.

'Found' is incorrect form; should be base form 'find' after modal 'can'. Also 'that much effectively' is awkward; use 'as carefully'. 'Other rails' unclear—replace with 'other platforms'. 'Stories off of my friends and relatives' should be 'friends' posts and stories'. Suggestion: after modal verbs use base verb form, choose precise nouns, and correct possessive forms.

× Well, I prefer scanning because it is a easier method to calculate the overall result of the news or something productive things while detailing.

✓ Well, I prefer scanning because it is an easier method to get the overall idea of the news or other productive content, compared with detailed reading.

Use 'an' before vowel sound ('an easier'). 'Calculate the overall result' is unnatural; use 'get the overall idea'. 'Something productive things' is ungrammatical—use 'other productive content'. Also clarify comparison with detailed reading. Suggestion: use correct articles, natural collocations, and clearer comparative phrases.

× While detailed reading needs all a plethora of time which was which I found uh which I do not found that much productive uh in reference.

✓ Detailed reading requires a great deal of time, which I find is not very productive in some cases.

Multiple issues: 'needs all a plethora of time' is incorrect; use 'requires a great deal of time'. Tense and verb forms wrong: 'which was which I found' and 'I do not found'—use present 'I find' and base verb 'find' (not 'found'). Remove fillers ('uh') and 'in reference' which is unclear. Suggestion: use standard expressions ('a great deal of time'), correct verb forms, and avoid fillers for clarity.