阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer concise and directly state reasons with clear supporting details. Aim for 2–3 sentences: a topic sentence answering the question and one specific reason or example. Reduce repetition and correct grammar (e.g., ‘improve my vocabulary’ not ‘the speak of the reading’). Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘for example’ correctly.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me improve my vocabulary and understand different ideas. For example, when I prepare for exams, reading articles and books helps me learn new words and express myself more clearly.

建议: Answer directly with a clear preference and one or two specific reasons. Reduce filler words (‘uh’) and organize reasons using linking words like ‘because’ and ‘for example’. Correct grammar: ‘I prefer reading on paper’ and ‘it causes eye strain’ are clearer.

示例: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and I can read for longer without feeling tired. For example, when I study for long periods, printed books help me concentrate better than reading on a screen.

建议: Provide a clear contrast: state when you read carefully and when you skim, with specific reasons and one concrete example. Use linking words (‘when’, ‘because’, ‘for example’) and avoid hesitation. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

示例: I read carefully when the material is important or when I need to remember details, because I want to understand it fully. For example, I read course texts slowly and take notes, but when I’m just passing time, I skim short articles for main ideas.

建议: Clearly state your preference and give specific reasons or an example. Use correct terms (‘scanning’ vs ‘detailed reading’) and avoid unclear phrases like ‘her father to daily relief’. Use linking words such as ‘because’ and ‘for example’ to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer detailed reading because I understand the text better and remember important information. For example, when I read news articles quickly I miss points, but reading slowly and focusing on each paragraph helps me grasp the meaning.

× Yes, I like reading because I believe that if you read, then you boost your vocabulary and the speak of the reading of our example.

✓ Yes, I like reading because I believe that if you read, you will boost your vocabulary and improve your speaking using the examples you read.

The original sentence misused 'the speak of the reading of our example' and had unclear pronoun references. 'Speak' should be 'speaking' (verb/gerund), and 'of our example' is unclear; replace with 'using the examples you read'. Also add 'will' to show result. Suggestion: make pronouns and noun phrases clear and use appropriate verb forms.

× If I'm preparing the higher status, so I want to improve my reading, so I will definitely improve my reading.

✓ If I am preparing for a higher position, I want to improve my reading, so I will definitely practise it.

'Preparing the higher status' is ungrammatical; use 'preparing for a higher position'. Remove redundant 'so' after the conditional clause and avoid repeating 'improve my reading' by using 'practise it'. Also ensure correct preposition 'for'.

× I I like reading because.

✓ I like reading because it helps me learn and relax.

This fragment is incomplete and repeats 'I'. Provide a complete clause explaining the reason. Use a full sentence with subject and predicate.

× Uh, I prefer read all the paper because when I read on the screen, then uh, I feel some, uh, blurredness or in the eyes, uh, for example, if I read on the paper, then you can easily read with plenty of the time, but on the screen, visual effect on the eye.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because when I read on a screen my eyes become blurred. For example, when I read on paper I can read at my own pace, but screens can cause visual discomfort.

Use the infinitive 'prefer to read' not 'prefer read'. 'All the paper' is incorrect; use 'on paper'. 'Blurredness in the eyes' is awkward; 'my eyes become blurred' is natural. 'Plenty of the time' should be 'at my own pace'. Correct articles and word order and split into two sentences for clarity.

× I read too carefully when I, uh, when I have interest to read this, uh, when I just, uh, uh, waste the time and pass the time, then I not read carefully.

✓ I read very carefully when I am interested in something, but if I am just passing the time, I do not read carefully.

Use present simple/continuous appropriately: 'I read very carefully when I am interested' (present continuous for current state) and 'I do not read carefully' for negative habit. 'Have interest to read this' is incorrect; use 'am interested in something'.

× For example, I have a free time and then I just read with the.

✓ For example, if I have free time, I just read for pleasure.

'Omit the article before uncountable 'free time' and complete the phrase 'read for pleasure'. The original ends abruptly. Ensure full object/complement after 'read'.

× Well, I prefer her father to daily relief because, uh, my, my point of view, uh, I'm not good at scanning, uh, for example, when I scan the, uh, reading, then I'm not comfortable and not understand.

✓ Well, I prefer detailed reading because, in my view, I am not good at scanning. For example, when I try to scan a text I do not feel comfortable and I do not understand it.

'Prefer her father to daily relief' is unintelligible; replace with 'prefer detailed reading'. Use 'in my view' for opinion. Use 'try to scan a text' and correct negatives 'I do not understand'. Maintain consistent subject-verb agreement and complete object 'a text'.

× When I start in detail reading, then I can easily understand what is the.

✓ When I start reading in detail, I can easily understand the content.

Use correct word order: 'reading in detail' not 'in detail reading'. Remove unnecessary 'then'. Complete the sentence by specifying 'the content' instead of leaving it unfinished. This fits present tense habitual action.