阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Keep the positive, relevant content but make the response more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (e.g., “increase my” twice) and long run-on sentences. Use linking words like “for example” or “which” to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially medical textbooks and educational books. For example, reading clinical case studies helps me deepen my knowledge and boosts my confidence when I handle similar cases at work.

建议: Provide a clear direct answer first, then give two concise, specific reasons using linking words like “because” and “for example.” Correct grammar (e.g., “gives me easier access” not “lets me more access”) and finish the sentence. Avoid trailing off.

示例: I prefer reading on a screen because it gives me easier access to books and articles online. For example, I can quickly search for articles on clinical topics and carry them on my tablet when I go to the hospital.

建议: Answer directly with a clear contrast and use linking words like “when” and “whereas.” Be specific about the types of important documents and avoid filler words (e.g., “umm”) and plural/singular errors (information is uncountable). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

示例: I read carefully when I review important documents, such as patient notes or research articles, because I need to extract accurate information. Whereas I skim online news or social posts when they are not relevant to my work.

建议: Start with a topic sentence that states your general preference, then explain the conditions using linking words like “if” and “however.” Correct word choice (scanning, not canning) and grammar (“go into detail,” “information is singular/uncountable”). Make examples specific and concise.

示例: It depends: I read in detail when I need accurate information, for instance when studying research papers or patient records. However, I usually scan social media or casual posts for general updates.

× For instance, I read more of medical textbooks, educational books and it helps me to increase my knowledge on some topics that are familiar with and improve my increases my confidence in tackling cases I see there on daily basis in my medical field and work.

✓ For instance, I read more medical textbooks and educational books, and they help me increase my knowledge on familiar topics and improve my confidence in tackling the cases I see on a daily basis in my medical work.

The sentence mixes tenses and has redundancy and word-order issues. Change 'it helps' to 'they help' to agree with plural subject 'textbooks and educational books' (subject-verb agreement / present tense). Remove duplicate 'increase my increases my' and correct word order to 'increase my knowledge'. Use 'on a daily basis' and 'in my medical work' for idiomatic phrasing. Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and avoid repetitive phrases. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I prefer reading on screen because it lets me more access to books and articles which is readily available online, and the fact that I can carry my gadgets everywhere I go is also of benefit to me, so it's more convenient for me and helps me assess things easily so I.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because it gives me more access to books and articles that are readily available online, and the fact that I can carry my gadgets everywhere is also beneficial, so it's more convenient and helps me access information easily.

Problems include incorrect preposition 'on screen' (prefer 'on a screen' or 'reading on screens'), wrong verb 'lets me more access' (use 'gives me more access' or 'provides me with access'), agreement 'which is readily available' should be 'that are readily available' to match plural 'books and articles', and awkward phrase 'helps me assess things' changed to 'access information'. Also remove trailing 'so I'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions and matching singular/plural forms and clearer verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× When it comes to reading carefully, I make preference to when I need important documents, I need to extract information from them, and then for when I'm not reading carefully, maybe when I'm just reading News Online, which are not that important to me.

✓ When it comes to reading carefully, I prefer to do so when I need important documents and must extract information from them; when I'm not reading carefully, for example when I'm just reading news online, those items are not that important to me.

Errors: 'I make preference to' is unidiomatic; use 'I prefer to'. Capitalization 'News Online' unnecessary; use 'news online'. Relative 'which are not that important to me' should refer to 'news' (plural) so use 'those items' or 'they'. Also sentence structure was run-on; split or use semicolon. Suggestion: use correct pronouns and idiomatic expressions, keep consistent capitalization. Grammar_problem_type_id:12

× So this helps me to carefully, umm, select all the informations I have and solve the problem.

✓ So this helps me carefully select all the information I have and solve the problem.

'information' is uncountable in this context, so 'informations' is incorrect; use 'information' without 'all the' or with 'all the information'. Also remove filler 'umm' and correct adverb placement: 'helps me carefully select'. Suggestion: learn countable vs uncountable nouns and place adverbs before the main verb. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× My preference for reading depends on the papers of the of what I'm going through.

✓ My preference for reading depends on the papers or material I'm going through.

Original has redundant and incorrect prepositions/phrasing 'papers of the of what'. Use 'papers or material I'm going through' to convey meaning. Suggestion: simplify prepositional phrases and avoid redundancy. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× If it's for extracting information that are very important to me, I go in details to get the information.

✓ If it's for extracting information that is very important to me, I go into detail to get the information.

'information' is uncountable and takes singular verb 'is' rather than 'are'. Also idiom is 'go into detail' not 'go in details'. Suggestion: match verbs to uncountable nouns and learn common idiomatic expressions. Grammar problem type ID:27

× But in contrast canning on social media for things that are not that important to me or relevant, I scan through them.

✓ But in contrast, when scanning social media for things that are not important or relevant to me, I scan through them.

Original has conjunction/structure errors and a typo 'canning' for 'scanning'. Add 'when' to form a correct subordinate clause and place commas appropriately. Suggestion: use correct conjunctions and check for typos to form clear clauses. Grammar problem type ID:16

× So detailed reading helps me to understand.

✓ Detailed reading helps me understand.

The sentence is grammatical but wordy; drop unnecessary 'to' for natural expression: 'helps me understand' is preferred. Suggestion: prefer concise structures and avoid superfluous words. Grammar problem type ID:26