阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be natural, concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid pronunciation/grammar errors (e.g., 'readings' → 'reading', 'contents' → 'content', 'more helpful and practical meaning' → 'more helpful and practical'). Add one specific example to support your preference and use a linking word to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading, but I usually avoid novels. For example, I read academic articles and textbooks related to my major because they help me understand concepts and prepare for exams.

建议: Give a clearer main sentence and use better vocabulary and linking words. Replace vague phrases ('changeable contents') with specific reasons (searchability, hyperlinks, updates). Add a brief example of how screen reading helps your research.

示例: I prefer reading on a screen because online articles are searchable and regularly updated. For instance, when researching social trends I can quickly find recent statistics and follow hyperlinks to original sources.

建议: Organize your answer: open with a clear contrast sentence, then give two specific examples and a linking word. Fix grammar and avoid fillers. Clarify why tests require careful reading and why social media is skimmed.

示例: I read carefully when the material affects my performance, such as exam instructions or academic papers, because mistakes can cost marks. On the other hand, I skim social media posts like Instagram since they are informal and just for enjoyment.

建议: Give a concise topic sentence, correct grammar, and provide a reason with an example. Use linking words ('because', 'so', 'for example') and avoid repetition. Explain when scanning is useful and when detailed reading is necessary.

示例: I usually prefer scanning because I have limited concentration and need to find key information quickly. For example, when reading news or emails I scan headings and the first lines to pick out the main points, but I read in detail for study materials.

× I enjoy readings but I don't like to read novels.

✓ I enjoy reading, but I don't like to read novels.

Use the gerund 'reading' after 'enjoy' not the plural noun 'readings'. Keep the rest of the sentence same; add a comma before 'but' for clarity.

× I prefer to read the contents related with my major.

✓ I prefer to read content related to my major.

Use 'content' (uncountable) instead of 'contents' and 'related to' instead of 'related with'. 'Related to' is the correct preposition in this context.

× It is more helpful and practical meaning to me, so I just read.

✓ It is more helpful and practical for me, so I just read those texts.

Use 'for me' not 'to me' with 'helpful and practical', and 'meaning' is unnecessary. Specify 'those texts' or 'them' to refer back to the content.

× I prefer to read on screen mainly because there are many changeable contents on the screen.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen mainly because there is a lot of changing content on it.

Use 'a screen' or 'screens' and treat 'content' as uncountable: 'a lot of content' or 'changing content'. 'Changeable' is awkward; 'changing' is better. Use 'there is' for uncountable noun.

× I like to do research a trend of society, so I like to read on screen.

✓ I like to research social trends, so I prefer reading on a screen.

Use 'research' as a verb with object 'social trends' and avoid 'do research a trend of society'. Match 'prefer reading' to earlier phrasing and keep 'on a screen' consistent.

× And I do the tests like is test I need to be very carefully but or Instagram like social media I don't do carefully.

✓ When I take tests I need to be very careful, but I don't read carefully on Instagram or similar social media.

Remove unnecessary leading 'And'. Use 'When I take tests' for clarity, 'be very careful' (adjective) not 'be very carefully' (adverb). Rephrase latter part to 'I don't read carefully on Instagram or similar social media'.

× It is very stressful situation that I think.

✓ I think it is a very stressful situation.

Word order: 'I think' usually comes at start or end; include the article 'a' before 'very stressful situation'.

× So I just enjoy it.

✓ So I just enjoy it.

This sentence is grammatically correct but keep context; 'it' refers to social media browsing. No change needed.

× I prefer scanning because I'm I had a low concentration of something so I just scanning and what is the most important thing that had and I just need it.

✓ I prefer scanning because I have low concentration, so I just scan and focus on the most important information I need.

Correct verb tenses and forms: use present 'I have' not 'I'm I had', and base verb 'scan' rather than 'scanning' after 'just'. Clarify 'most important information' instead of vague 'thing that had'.

× It is more useful to me.

✓ It is more useful to me.

This sentence is fine as is; it correctly uses 'to me' to indicate personal usefulness. No change needed.