阅读— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail with correct word forms and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "everything they have."

示例: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me learn about new topics; for example, a book about social media taught me about the risks and benefits of online platforms, which improved my understanding of how to use them safely.

建议: Make the answer more natural and eliminate repetition. Use a clear reason and one supporting detail, linked with a conjunction. Correct phrasing ("I prefer paper books because...").

示例: I prefer paper books because they help me concentrate; when I read from a screen I tend to treat it like scrolling on my phone and lose focus.

建议: Remove fillers and fix grammar. Use a clear contrast structure (e.g. "When... however...") and specific examples. Use plural/singular correctly and avoid repetition of "I think."

示例: I need to read carefully when I study academic articles or official documents because accuracy matters; however, I don't read novels or comics as carefully since they are mainly for entertainment.

建议: Correct grammar and be concise. Give one clear reason and one brief example connected with a linking word. Avoid unclear sentences like "When I was coming." and finish thoughts fully.

示例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand and remember information; for example, when I studied a course text in detail I could recall key points for exams, unlike when I skimmed and forgot most of it.

× I like reading because reading helps me to gain more knowledge about everything they have.

✓ I like reading because it helps me gain more knowledge about everything it covers.

The pronoun 'they' incorrectly refers to 'reading' (singular/uncountable). Use 'it' for reading; also 'have' is incorrect in this context—use 'covers'. Remove the unnecessary repetition of 'reading' and the infinitive marker 'to' before 'gain' is optional here. Suggestion: use 'it' to refer to an activity and 'covers' to express content.

× For example, when I read a book about social media, I was able to learn more about social medias, risk and the good point.

✓ For example, when I read a book about social media, I was able to learn more about social media, risks, and the good points.

The noun 'social media' is uncountable and should not take the plural 'social medias'. 'Risk' should be plural 'risks' to match the list, and 'the good point' should be plural 'the good points' or 'the benefits'. Use parallel plural nouns in a list.

× I prefer paper because paper books I can feel like I am reading now by reading the paper books.

✓ I prefer paper because with paper books I can feel like I am actually reading.

The original sentence misuses articles and word order. 'Paper' as a preference should be 'paper books' or 'paper' as medium; use the preposition 'with' to indicate the medium. Avoid repeating 'paper books' and simplify 'I can feel like I am reading now' to 'I can feel like I am actually reading.' This fixes article redundancy and improves flow.

× If I am reading on the screen I feel like it's just scrolling the phone.

✓ If I read on a screen, it just feels like scrolling on my phone.

Use consistent tense and natural collocation. 'If I am reading' can be simplified to 'If I read'; 'on the screen' becomes 'on a screen'; 'it's just scrolling the phone' is ungrammatical—use 'scrolling on my phone.' Reorder for natural English: 'it just feels like'.

× I think when I read uh, articles or when I read a paper, I need to focus on reading carefully and but I think when I reading a novels or comics, I don't need to focus on reading carefully.

✓ I think when I read articles or academic papers, I need to focus and read carefully, but when I read novels or comics, I don't need to read so carefully.

'When I reading' is incorrect; the verb should be 'read' (base form) after 'when I'. Also 'a novels' mixes article and plural—use 'novels' without 'a' or 'a novel' singular. 'A paper' is vague; 'academic papers' or 'research papers' fits. Remove redundant phrases and fix conjunction 'and but' to 'but'.

× I prefers detailed reading because reading deeply helps me to gain more knowledge and also it helps me to understand deeply.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because reading deeply helps me gain more knowledge and understand things more deeply.

Subject 'I' requires verb 'prefer' not 'prefers' (third person singular). Also avoid repeating 'it helps me'—combine into one clause and simplify 'to gain' to 'gain.' Improve adverb placement: 'understand things more deeply.'

× When I was coming, I didn't understand what I read and also I didn't remember what the contents of the.

✓ When I first started, I didn't understand what I read and I couldn't remember the contents.

'When I was coming' is unidiomatic; possible intended meaning is 'when I first started' or 'when I was younger.' The clause 'what the contents of the.' is incomplete—omit 'of the' and use 'the contents' or 'the content.' Rephrase for clarity and grammatical completeness.