爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (article and verb forms), and avoid unnecessary words. Keep it concise and offer one brief supporting detail with a linking word if needed.

示例: Yes, I do. I enjoy drawing, especially sketching people and landscapes. For example, I often spend an hour in the evenings practicing pencil portraits to improve my shading.

建议: Use correct tense and singular/plural forms, and give a clear reason with a linking word. Avoid unclear phrases like “it's my patient.” Replace with specific explanations (e.g. it kept me calm or helped my concentration). Limit to 2–4 sentences.

示例: Yes, drawing was my favourite hobby when I was a child because it helped me relax and focus. For instance, I would spend hours drawing comic characters, which improved my attention to detail.

建议: Answer directly and then add one supporting detail using a linking word to show continuity (e.g. since, for, because). Be natural and concise—no more than 3 sentences.

示例: Yes, I have kept drawing since childhood. Because I enjoy observing people, I still like sketching faces and scenes from daily life.

建议: Be clear and grammatical: use concise linking words (however, but) and avoid double negatives. Provide a brief example to illustrate similarities or differences in interests.

示例: Yes, I share an interest in art with my father and one sister, as we often draw together. However, the rest of my family prefer sports and are not really interested in arts.

× I do have hobbies, it is a drawing.

✓ I do have hobbies; one of them is drawing.

The sentence mixes plural 'hobbies' with singular 'it is a drawing'. This is a singular/plural agreement issue. Use a phrase that connects the plural subject with a singular example: 'one of them is drawing'. Also replace comma splice with a semicolon or separate sentences.

× Drawing is my most loved hobbies when I was a child because I love to draw and it's my patient.

✓ Drawing was my most-loved hobby when I was a child because I loved to draw and I was patient.

Multiple errors: 'hobbies' should be singular 'hobby' to match 'most loved', causing a singular/plural issue. Tense should be past to match 'when I was a child' (present 'is' and 'love' changed to past 'was' and 'loved'). 'it's my patient' is incorrect; probably meant 'I was patient' — 'patient' is an adjective describing the speaker. Hyphenate 'most-loved' or use 'favorite' for clarity.

× Yes, it's drawing.

✓ Yes, it's drawing.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable. It uses the present tense 'it's' to identify a current hobby. No change needed. (Included for completeness; meets allowed problem list but no correction required.)

× Yes, I do have similar hobbies but only with my father and my one sister. The others they aren't so not into arts.

✓ Yes, I do have similar hobbies, but only with my father and one of my sisters. The others are not so into the arts.

Several issues: 'my one sister' is awkward; use 'one of my sisters' for natural English and correct singular/plural reference. The second sentence has an unnecessary pronoun 'they' and incorrect word order 'aren't so not into arts'. Correct to 'are not so into the arts' or 'aren't very into art'. Also add the definite article 'the' before 'arts' or better use 'art' as an uncountable noun.