爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be concise and directly state your hobby, give one or two clear reasons or details, use correct grammar and avoid repetitions. Keep to 2–4 sentences, use linking words (for example, because, so, and) and specific details (what model kits, how often, what you enjoy).

示例: I enjoy building plastic model kits, especially airplane models. I usually work on them during school holidays because the glue fumes make it hard to work every day, and I like taking my time to paint details carefully.

建议: Answer directly with a clear past-tense statement about your childhood hobby, avoid confusing phrasing and repetition. Provide one or two specific supporting details (how old you were, what you built, who taught you). Use linking words like when and because.

示例: Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed building model kits. I started at about eight years old and my father taught me how to assemble and paint the parts, so it became my favourite pastime.

建议: Give a clear, grammatically correct answer in present perfect or present tense to show continuity (e.g., "Yes, I have had..."). Add a brief specific example of how the hobby continued into adulthood and one reason why you kept it.

示例: Yes, I have had building model kits since childhood and I still do it now. Over the years I’ve moved from simple cars to detailed aircraft models because I enjoy the challenge of painting and weathering them.

建议: Answer clearly and expand slightly with a reason or brief contrast. Use correct negative form and add linking words (for example, but, although). Keep it to one or two sentences.

示例: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. For instance, I build model kits while my parents prefer gardening and my sister likes playing the guitar.

× One of my hobbies is that I'm playing on my model kit kit in the holidays and that's why I do only sometimes.

✓ One of my hobbies is building model kits during the holidays, and that's why I only do it sometimes.

The structure 'One of my hobbies is that I'm playing' is awkward; after 'hobby is' use a noun or gerund. 'Building model kits' uses the gerund correctly. Also corrected word order and removed duplicated 'kit' and misplaced 'only'. Suggestion: use 'building model kits' or 'making model kits' and place adverbs like 'only' before the verb phrase as needed.

× Because you smelly glue.

✓ Because the glue smells.

The original fragment lacks a subject and uses incorrect word order 'you smelly glue.' Use 'the glue smells' or 'because the glue smells bad.' Ensure a complete clause with subject and verb.

× I dance my brain that's why I only do it sometimes.

✓ It makes my head hurt, so I only do it sometimes.

'I dance my brain' is an incorrect and unnatural metaphor and sentence lacks clarity. Replaced with a clearer cause-effect structure: 'It makes my head hurt, so I only do it sometimes.' Maintain simple present tense for habitual actions.

× Did you have any hobbies when you were a child? -> The student's reply: 'Yes. The thing I told you was that I I'm a child and I still have A and that was my hobby. That was the thing I'm telling you was I have build model kits. That was my hobby.'

✓ Yes. When I was a child, I liked building model kits. That was my hobby.

The student mixes tenses and uses incorrect verb forms ('I have build'). For past habits use past tense: 'I liked' or 'I used to build.' Use gerund 'building' after 'like'. Simplify and keep tense consistent.

× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood? -> 'In childhood, I I'm just really kid and I play model kids. I already told you that.'

✓ When I was a child, I played with model kits. I already told you that.

Use past tense 'was' for 'I was a child' and 'played' for past habitual actions. 'Model kids' is incorrect; use 'model kits.' Keep tense consistent with the question about childhood.

× Do you have the same hobbies as your family members? -> 'No, I do not have to save hobbies as my family members.'

✓ No, I do not have the same hobbies as my family members.

The phrase 'to save hobbies' is incorrect. Use 'the same hobbies as' to compare possession of hobbies. Also ensure proper subject-verb structure: 'I do not have the same hobbies as my family members.'