爱好— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one supporting detail. Use correct verb forms and article usage (e.g., “I like reading books” and “I often read books online”). Add a linking word if you expand (e.g., “because” or “so”).

示例: I like reading books. Recently, I often read books online because it’s convenient and I can access many titles quickly.

建议: Use correct adjective forms and be specific about why it was enjoyable. Keep it concise: a topic sentence plus one or two specific reasons, linked properly (e.g., “because it helped me unwind”). Avoid contradictory adjectives like “relaxed and excited” without clarification.

示例: Yes, I liked watching TV after school because it helped me relax and I enjoyed exciting cartoons that made me laugh.

建议: Organize into a clear past-to-present structure: state the hobby, then explain how it changed using linking words (e.g., “but now” or “since then”). Fix grammar (e.g., “I have liked reading since I was young,” “I used to read physical books, but now I read e-books”). Be specific about benefits (saving money, more choice). Keep under five sentences.

示例: Yes, I have liked reading since I was a child. I used to read physical books, but now I read e-books because they save money and offer many more choices.

建议: Avoid unclear or inappropriate words (e.g., “drug running” is wrong and alarming). Give a polite, clear contrast: state whether you share hobbies, then explain differences with appropriate vocabulary (e.g., “they prefer outdoor activities like hiking and traveling”). Use correct grammar and linking words (e.g., “however,” “while”).

示例: No, not really. I prefer quiet hobbies like reading, while my family members enjoy outdoor activities such as hiking and traveling.

× Yes, I like to reading books, but now I often reading books through online.

✓ Yes, I like reading books, and now I often read books online.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'reading' (not 'to reading'). Also use the simple present 'read' for habitual actions ('I often read'). 'Through online' is unnatural; use 'online'. Combine clauses with 'and' for clarity.

× Yes, I liked watching TV after school because it was relaxed and excited.

✓ Yes, I liked watching TV after school because it was relaxing and exciting.

The sentence describes feelings or qualities, so use adjectives 'relaxing' and 'exciting' rather than past-tense verbs 'relaxed' and 'excited'. 'Liked' is correct in past tense for a childhood habit.

× Yes I liked reading since travel in the past I read the book physically but now I change to watch the book all night because it can save money and many choice.

✓ Yes, I have liked reading since I was a child; in the past I read physical books, but now I read books online because it saves money and offers many choices.

Multiple issues: 'since travel' is incorrect — use a time reference like 'since I was a child'. Use present perfect 'have liked' to show a hobby from childhood continuing to present. 'Read the book physically' -> 'read physical books'. 'Change to watch the book all night' is wrong: use 'now I read books online'. Use 'saves' (present simple) for general truth and 'offers many choices'. Also fix article and plurality: 'many choices' rather than 'many choice'.

× Note I don't think so I like reading and it's a quiet activities but my family they like go outside to have some maybe drug running or travel around. It's not like me.

✓ No, I don't think so. I like reading; it's a quiet activity, but my family prefers going out to do things like running or travelling. It's not like me.

Several problems: use 'No' rather than 'Note'. Split into sentences for clarity. 'It's a quiet activities' -> 'it's a quiet activity' (singular). Avoid redundant pronoun 'my family they' — use 'my family'. Use 'prefers' for family as a group (subject-verb agreement) or 'my family prefer' depending on variety; here 'prefers' fits. 'Go outside to have some maybe drug running' is ungrammatical and possibly incorrect meaning; replaced with plausible activities 'going out to do things like running or travelling'. Use 'It's not like me' clarified as 'It's not like me' is acceptable.