聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Make your answer slightly more natural and informative by beginning with a full topic sentence and adding one supporting reason. Keep it concise (1–2 sentences).

示例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. For example, we often catch up after school or work and share funny stories.

建议: Give a clear topic sentence and use linking words to add specific details. Avoid filler words and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "about my daily life" not "is about").

示例: I usually chat about my daily life and things that happened during the day. For instance, I might tell them about my classes, plans for the weekend, or funny incidents that occurred at work.

建议: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar (singular/plural). Give a brief reason and an example. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

示例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel more comfortable sharing private thoughts. For example, I can trust that friend to keep my secrets and give honest advice.

建议: Provide one clear sentence stating your preference and a second sentence with a specific reason. Remove awkward phrasing and use correct tense and linking words like "because" and "so".

示例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it's easier to understand tone and body language. For example, in person I can read facial expressions, so there is less chance of misunderstanding.

建议: Answer directly and then briefly explain your typical response using clear grammar and linking words. Avoid repetition and tell a short example of what you do instead of arguing.

示例: No, I usually avoid arguing with friends. If something makes me uncomfortable, I step away for a while and later talk calmly with them to resolve the issue.

× I usually chat with my friends. Uh is about my daily life and what happened in on that day.

✓ I usually chat with my friends. Uh, it is about my daily life and what happened on that day.

The student used 'is' without a clear subject and included an extra preposition 'in'. Add the subject 'it' for clarity and remove 'in' before 'on that day'. Use present simple 'is' to describe habitual topic. Suggestion: include a subject after 'Uh' and use 'on that day' for referring to events of a specific day. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because that one friends that we trust and can keep our secret.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because that one friend is someone we trust and who can keep our secrets.

The noun 'friend' should be singular to match 'one'. Also use 'is someone' to introduce the clause and 'who' as the relative pronoun for people. 'Secret' should be plural 'secrets' to sound natural when referring generally. Suggestion: match number (singular/plural) and use appropriate relative pronoun and verb. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I prefer to communicate face to face because we can. Avoid from miscommunication when we using social media, we will had miscommunication when chatting.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because we can avoid miscommunication. When we use social media, there can be miscommunication when chatting.

Remove the unnecessary preposition 'from' after 'avoid'; 'avoid miscommunication' is correct. Change 'we using' to 'we use' (present simple) and 'we will had' is incorrect: use 'there can be' or 'we may have' for possible outcomes. Keep tense consistent (present simple for habits and general truths). Suggestion: combine clauses for clarity and use correct verb forms and prepositions. Grammar problem type ID:11

× No I didn't argue with my friends but if I feel like I feel like something that make me feel uncomfortable I will avoid from my friend 1st and after I feel better I will go to that.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends, but if I feel something that makes me uncomfortable, I will avoid my friend at first and after I feel better I will go to them.

The response mixes past and present incorrectly. Use present simple 'don't' for habitual action. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with 'something' (singular). Remove 'from' after 'avoid' and use 'at first' for order. 'Go to that' is unclear; use 'go to them' referring to the friend. Maintain consistent tense and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: use present simple for habits, ensure verb agrees with its subject, avoid incorrect prepositions, and use clear pronouns. Grammar problem type ID:5

× No I didn't argue with my friends but if I feel like I feel like something that make me feel uncomfortable I will avoid from my friend 1st and after I feel better I will go to that.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends, but if I feel something that makes me uncomfortable, I will avoid my friend at first and after I feel better I will talk to them.

The original sentence uses 'that' ambiguously and has pronoun issues: 'go to that' is incorrect when referring to a person. Replace with 'talk to them' or 'go to them' to refer clearly to friends. Also remove duplicated phrase 'I feel like'. Suggestion: use clear pronouns ('them') and avoid repeating phrases. Grammar problem type ID:12