聊天— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and plural/singular. Avoid redundancy.

示例: Not really. I don't chat a lot with friends; I prefer calling them when something important comes up. For example, if I need advice I call one friend directly, so they know to phone me rather than text.

建议: Use correct verbs and be specific. Begin with a topic sentence, then add a concrete example connected by a linking word (for example). Keep sentences short and clear.

示例: I usually talk about everyday things, such as work or family. For example, if something unusual happens at work, I call my friend to explain what happened so I don't feel isolated.

建议: Clarify your preference and correct vocabulary (chat, not shop; read → listen). Give a reason and an example. Keep it natural and grammatically correct.

示例: I prefer chatting in a group because I enjoy listening to several friends talk at once. For instance, at gatherings I often stay quiet and listen to their stories, which I find entertaining.

建议: Make a clear choice and explain with coherent reasons. Use correct phrases (prefer face-to-face, know their feelings, hear their tone). Use linking words like because and for example.

示例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see people's expressions and hear their tone of voice. For example, when someone seems upset I notice it immediately and can respond more appropriately.

建议: Answer directly, then explain with a clear cause and an example. Use correct grammar (I don't argue much; we sometimes have disagreements) and avoid unclear phrases.

示例: Not often. My friends and I rarely argue, but when we have deep discussions we sometimes disagree. For example, we once had a heated but constructive debate about career choices, which helped us understand each other better.

× I'm not a person that chatting a lot with my friends.

✓ I'm not a person who chats a lot with my friends.

The clause needs a relative pronoun plus a finite verb. 'That chatting' incorrectly uses the -ing form. Use 'who' for people and the simple present 'chats' for habitual action. Also subject-verb agreement requires 'chats' with 'a person who'.

× So even my close friend know that if they wanna talk to me they have to call me.

✓ So even my close friends know that if they want to talk to me they have to call me.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match 'they'. 'Know' is correct for plural, but the original had mismatch between singular 'friend' and plural pronoun 'they'. Also use 'want to' instead of colloquial 'wanna' in formal context.

× What do you usually chat about with friends?

✓ What do you usually chat about with your friends?

While the original is not strictly wrong, adding the article 'your' clarifies possession and fits the conversational context. This fixes a subtle article/preposition usage for naturalness.

× I usually shed about something like daily life with my friend.

✓ I usually chat about everyday things or daily life with my friend.

'Shed' is incorrect word choice; the intended verb is 'chat'. Use 'chat' in present simple for habitual actions. Also use 'everyday things' or 'daily life' for natural phrasing and plural 'things'.

× For example, yesterday I went to work and if something happened during the work I will call her and explain to her what happened, what's going on, something like that so I'm not lonely.

✓ For example, yesterday I went to work and if something happened during work I called her and explained what happened and what was going on, so I wouldn't feel lonely.

Time reference 'yesterday' requires past tense throughout: 'happened', 'called', 'explained'. Mixing 'will call' with past context is incorrect. Use past forms and adjust final clause to past conditional 'wouldn't feel' to show result.

× Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?

✓ Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with just one friend?

Change 'only one friend' to 'just one friend' for natural phrasing; grammatically both are acceptable but 'just' is more idiomatic. No major grammatical error beyond word choice.

× I prefer to shop with a group of people rather than only one friend because I really like to read when my friend chat with each other.

✓ I prefer to shop with a group of people rather than with just one friend because I really like to watch when my friends chat with each other.

The original used 'shop' which may be intended as 'chat' preference question; assuming speaking about chatting, 'watch' (or 'listen') fits better. 'Friend chat' is incorrect: plural 'friends chat' or 'friends are chatting'. Use 'friends chat' for habitual action or 'friends are chatting' for ongoing. Also keep parallel structure 'prefer to X with A rather than with B'.

× So I'm not replying them, I just read that.

✓ So I don't reply to them; I just read the messages.

'Not replying them' is incorrect: use 'not reply to them' or 'don't reply to them'. Also 'read that' is vague; specify 'read the messages'. Maintain simple present for habitual behavior.

× I don't prefer community kid face to face because I can know their feeling, their emotion and the I can know like her voice what how is the tone of her.

✓ I don't prefer communicating face-to-face because I can understand their feelings and emotions, and I can hear their voice and know their tone.

'Community kid' is incorrect; intended meaning is 'communicating'. Use 'communicate' or 'communicating'. Use 'face-to-face'. Replace awkward phrasing 'I can know their feeling' with 'I can understand their feelings'. 'the I can know like her voice what how is the tone of her' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I can hear their voice and know their tone.' Maintain present tense for general preference.

× No I don't. I give it friend a lot except we have some deep talk that like have different. Opinion So we will have a little bit argue, but that is the good argue.

✓ No, I don't. I get along with my friends a lot, except when we have a deep discussion and different opinions. Then we might have a small argument, but that is a good argument.

The original has multiple errors: 'I give it friend a lot' is incorrect—likely 'I get along with my friends a lot'. 'Except we have some deep talk that like have different. Opinion' must be 'except when we have a deep discussion and different opinions'. Use 'might have a small argument' for possibility. 'the good argue' should be 'a good argument'. Fix pronouns, plurality ('friends', 'opinions'), and word forms ('discussion', 'argument').