规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use correct singular/plural forms and simple past/present structures.

示例: Yes. My school has many rules to maintain discipline and protect students’ welfare. For example, we must wear uniforms and arrive before classes start, which helps keep the school orderly and safe.

建议: Answer directly and explain one clear reason with a concrete example. Use linking words (because, so) and avoid double negatives and hesitations. Keep it to two or three sentences.

示例: Yes, I think more rules can help because they set clear boundaries for behaviour. For instance, a rule against mobile phone use in class prevents distractions and improves students’ concentration.

建议: Give a brief, relevant description of the teacher’s dedication with specific examples of what they did to help you. Avoid irrelevant comments about appearance and reduce hesitations.

示例: Yes. My high school teacher Miss Kamala was very dedicated. She stayed after class to explain difficult topics and organised extra practice tests, which helped me improve my grades.

建议: State your preference clearly and give one or two specific reasons with linking words (because, so, therefore). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “physical or mentally.”

示例: I prefer more rules because they promote discipline and good study habits. For example, regular homework deadlines teach time management, which is useful for future work or university.

建议: Describe the strictness with concrete behaviour (punishments, rules) and explain the effect on students. Avoid vague statements and emotional fillers. Use simple past to tell about past experiences.

示例: Yes. In college I had a very strict professor who punished late submission with grade reductions. As a result, students were more careful with deadlines but also felt anxious before exams.

建议: Give a clear yes/no answer, then provide one or two specific reasons with linking words. Correct vocabulary errors ("rule-free") and avoid repeating phrases. Keep it within two sentences.

示例: No, I would not. I prefer rules because they create structure for learning; without rules, it would be hard to manage classes and ensure students take their studies seriously.

× Yes, as we all know that there are many rules and regulars on set up in school for the welfare and discipline of individual student and school environment.

✓ Yes, as we all know, there are many rules and regulations set up in the school for the welfare and discipline of individual students and the school environment.

The sentence uses 'regulars' instead of 'regulations' (word choice) and 'individual student' should be plural 'individual students' to match general reference; 'on set up' is incorrect order — use 'set up' after the object. Suggestion: use correct noun 'regulations', pluralize 'student' to 'students', and reorder to 'regulations set up in the school'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× In my school there are many rules set up by a founder which.

✓ At my school there are many rules set up by a founder.

The clause ends with 'which' creating a sentence fragment and awkward structure. Remove the dangling 'which' to complete the sentence. Also 'At my school' is more natural than 'In my school'. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× Yes, umm, definitely student will benefit more from morals because umm, they have to remain at a certain discipline or uh boundary where rules are strictly followed and they don't do not umm goes in a wrong track.

✓ Yes, definitely students will benefit more from morals because they have to maintain a certain level of discipline or boundaries where rules are strictly followed and they do not go off the wrong track.

Errors: 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with 'they'; 'remain at a certain discipline' is awkward — use 'maintain a certain level of discipline'; 'don't do not' is a double negative — use 'do not'; 'goes' is incorrect with plural subject — use 'go'. Suggestion: pluralize nouns to match pronouns and use correct verb forms and avoid double negatives. Grammar problem type ID: 2

× Yes, definitely. Uh, at my school time, I, I really had a dedicated teacher, uh, ** *** was umm, Miss umm Kamala Kamala, umm Miss Kamala. She was very beautiful and diligent to us, uh, see uh, motivate us in every umm.

✓ Yes, definitely. During my time at school I had a dedicated teacher, Miss Kamala. She was kind and motivated us in many ways.

Use past tense consistently: 'during my time at school' is natural; 'really had' is acceptable but redundant — 'had a dedicated teacher' is sufficient. 'Beautiful and diligent to us' is awkward — 'kind' or 'caring and diligent' is clearer; 'motivate us in every' is incomplete — use 'motivated us in many ways'. Suggestion: simplify and complete phrases, keep past tense verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Uh, I prefer to have more uh, rules at school because it does it helps uh, student, uh, student to develop the your umm, discipline, umm, or physical or mentally umm, which is also good for their career.

✓ I prefer to have more rules at school because they help students develop discipline, both physically and mentally, which is also good for their careers.

Pronoun and determiners errors: 'it does it helps' is redundant and wrong; use 'they help' to refer to 'rules'; 'student, student' repeated and should be plural 'students'; 'the your' is wrong — choose one determiner; 'physically or mentally' should be 'physically and mentally'; 'career' should be plural 'careers' to agree with 'students'. Suggestion: use consistent plural forms and correct pronouns/determiners. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Umm, he was uh, so much strict, uh, and uh, umm, and angry, which makes us fear with, with and I just fear in US and.

✓ He was very strict and angry, which made us afraid and fearful in his class.

'So much strict' is incorrect; use 'very strict' or 'so strict'. Tense should be past: 'made us afraid' not 'makes us fear'. 'Fear with, with' is unclear — use 'afraid' or 'fearful'. 'in US' is likely 'in us' (inside us) but better: 'in his class' or 'in us'. Suggestion: use proper adjective modifiers ('very strict'), correct past tense, and clear collocations ('made us afraid'). Grammar problem type ID: 13

× No, uh, no, no, I don't like to work as a teacher in a roof roof free school because, uh, I'm, I'm also uh, student who raised in a rural umm ruled and regulation set up school and, and I prefer umm to umm set up.

✓ No, I would not like to work as a teacher in a rule-free school because I was raised in a rural school with rules and regulations, and I prefer that system.

Multiple issues: 'roof roof free' is mispronounced — should be 'rule-free'; tense and structure: 'I'm also student who raised' should be 'I was raised'; 'ruled and regulation set up school' is awkward — use 'a school with rules and regulations'; ending 'I prefer to set up' is incomplete — clarify as 'I prefer that system'. Suggestion: correct word choice, use past tense for upbringing, and complete the final clause. Grammar problem type ID: 26