规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო ბუნებრივი და ნაკლებად განმეორებითი. ასევე, საჭიროა მეტი სიზუსტე და ლოგიკური კავშირი წინადადებებს შორის. მაგალითად, სიტყვა "already" არ არის საჭირო და პასუხი შეიძლება იყოს უფრო მოკლე და კონკრეტული.

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, wearing a uniform is mandatory for all students. Additionally, we have a student handbook that outlines important guidelines we must follow.

建议: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო მკაფიო და ლოგიკური. სიტყვები უნდა იყოს შესაბამისი და წინადადებები დაკავშირებული. ასევე, საჭიროა მეტი კონკრეტულობა და ნაკლები განმეორება, მაგალითად, "speaking and writing than their classes" არ არის გასაგები.

示例: Yes, I think having more rules can help students develop good morals. For instance, wearing a uniform helps us focus better on our studies instead of worrying about clothes.

建议: თქვენი პასუხი უნდა იყოს უფრო სუფთა და გრამატიკულად სწორი. საჭიროა უკეთესი ლინკინგი და კონკრეტული მაგალითები. სიტყვები "give gives" და "teachers devices" არასწორია და უნდა შეცვალოთ.

示例: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. She teaches us mathematics and also shares important lessons about morals and ethics, which help us make better decisions in life.

× For instance, we need to wear a uniform, it is mandatory for us.

✓ For instance, we need to wear a uniform because it is mandatory for us.

The original sentence is a comma splice, joining two independent clauses with only a comma. This is a sentence structure error. To correct it, use a conjunction like 'because' to properly connect the clauses.

× We are already.

✓ We already do.

The sentence 'We are already.' is incomplete and lacks a clear verb or object, making it a sentence structure error. Adding 'do' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× I believe that students would benefit more from morals.

✓ I believe that students would benefit more from rules.

The student likely meant 'rules' instead of 'morals' in this context. Using 'morals' here is incorrect quantifier usage because 'morals' are abstract and not the intended meaning. 'Rules' fits the context of school regulations better.

× I think this is good benefit for students because they are more concentrated and focused on learning and speaking and writing than their classes.

✓ I think this is a good benefit for students because they are more concentrated and focused on learning, speaking, and writing in their classes.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and unclear comparison. Adding the article 'a' before 'good benefit' and clarifying the phrase 'than their classes' to 'in their classes' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× She teaches us not only mathematics, she give gives us information about real life morals and ethic.

✓ She teaches us not only mathematics; she gives us information about real-life morals and ethics.

The verb 'give' is incorrectly used with 'she' which requires the third person singular form 'gives'. Also, 'real life' should be hyphenated as 'real-life' and 'ethic' should be plural 'ethics' to be correct.

× when we make some decision it is important to remember our teachers devices.

✓ When we make some decisions, it is important to remember our teacher's advice.

'Some decision' should be plural 'some decisions' to match quantifier usage. 'Teachers devices' is incorrect; the intended word is likely 'teacher's advice'. 'Advice' is uncountable and fits the context better.