规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Your answer is clear and relevant, but to improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and avoid slight redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'we all need to', you could use synonyms or restructure sentences for better flow. Also, linking words like 'for example' or 'in addition' can enhance coherence.

示例: Yes, my school has several important rules. For example, punctuality is essential to ensure classes begin on time. In addition, students must raise their hands before speaking to maintain a respectful classroom environment.

建议: Your answer addresses both sides, which is good, but the sentence structure is sometimes unclear and there are some grammatical errors. To improve, focus on clearer sentence construction and use linking words like 'however' and 'on the other hand' correctly. Also, avoid awkward phrases such as 'a mind infringe students individuality'.

示例: On the one hand, clear rules can help students develop self-discipline and responsibility. However, too many regulations might stifle creativity and individuality, making students overly obedient.

建议: Your answer conveys your opinion but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence, use correct tense, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

示例: My high school economics teacher did his job very well because he balanced being friendly with students and demonstrating professionalism in his subject area.

× we all need to arrive at campus on time to ensure class starts promptly

✓ we all need to arrive on campus on time to ensure class starts promptly

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'campus'. The correct preposition is 'on' when referring to being present at a location like a campus. Therefore, 'arrive on campus' is the correct phrase.

× we also have regulations in class to make sure a good classroom atmosphere

✓ we also have regulations in class to make sure of a good classroom atmosphere

The phrase 'make sure a good classroom atmosphere' is missing the preposition 'of'. The correct expression is 'make sure of something' to indicate ensuring that something exists or happens.

× such as we all need to raise hands before answering or asking questions

✓ such as all of us needing to raise our hands before answering or asking questions

The phrase 'such as we all need to raise hands' is awkward and ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to a noun phrase like 'such as all of us needing to raise our hands' to fit properly after 'such as'.

× too many rules could cause students to lose their creativity as well as a mind infringe students individuality and they will become more obedient

✓ too many rules could cause students to lose their creativity as well as infringe on students' individuality, and they will become more obedient

The original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'a mind infringe students individuality' is incorrect. The phrase should be 'infringe on students' individuality'. Also, a comma is needed before 'and' to separate the clauses properly.

× It's my high school economic teacher did his job really well because I believe he found a good balance of being friendly and nice towards students as well as being specialized and professional in his own words, in his own fields

✓ My high school economics teacher did his job really well because I believe he found a good balance of being friendly and nice towards students as well as being specialized and professional in his own words, in his own fields

The phrase 'It's my high school economic teacher did his job' is incorrect. The subject and verb are not properly connected. It should be 'My high school economics teacher did his job really well'. Also, 'economic' should be 'economics' as the subject name.