规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的なルールを明確に述べ、冗長な表現を避け、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we must wear a school uniform every day. Besides that, students are expected to be punctual and respectful to teachers.

建议: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に混乱しています。意見をはっきり述べ、理由を論理的に説明し、文を簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。

示例: No, I don't think more rules would help students. I believe students need some freedom to develop responsibility, especially since after graduation, there are fewer restrictions.

建议: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。具体的な理由や例を使って、先生の良い点を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。

示例: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He is responsible and always kind to students. I can depend on him when I need help with my studies.

× Yes, actually I'm a high school student and uh, there are many others, but for example, we must wear school uniform and, but I think only this one or because in my school we can.

✓ Yes, actually I'm a high school student and uh, there are many others, but for example, we must wear school uniforms and, but I think only this one or because in my school we can.

The word 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' because it refers to the general rule that students must wear school uniforms, not just one uniform. In English, when talking about general items worn by many people, the plural form is used.

× Yes, actually I'm a high school student and uh, there are many others, but for example, we must wear school uniform and, but I think only this one or because in my school we can.

✓ Yes, actually I'm a high school student and uh, there are many rules, but for example, we must wear school uniforms. I think this is the only one because in my school we can.

The original sentence is confusing and contains run-on parts. Breaking it into clearer sentences improves understanding. Also, 'there are many others' is vague; specifying 'many rules' clarifies the meaning.

× No, I I don't think so. Because students want to feel free because when, when we Graduate School, we, we must, we don't have to wear schooling home or we don't have to no rule, but we, we have.

✓ No, I don't think so because students want to feel free. When we graduate from school, we don't have to wear school uniforms or follow rules, but we have them now.

The modal verb 'must' was incorrectly used and the sentence was unclear. 'Don't have to' correctly expresses absence of obligation. Also, 'Graduate School' should be 'graduate from school'. The sentence was restructured for clarity.

× When, when we Graduate School, we, we must, we don't have to wear schooling home or we don't have to no rule, but we, we have.

✓ When we graduate from school, we don't have to wear school uniforms or follow rules, but we have them now.

'Graduate' should be used as a verb with the preposition 'from' to indicate completion of school. The phrase 'Graduate School' is a noun referring to advanced studies, which is incorrect here. The sentence was corrected to use the verb form properly.

× Yes, I'll I have a teacher who does job very well and I can depend on him and he has a responsibility and he always kind of two students.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well and I can depend on him. He is responsible and he is always kind to students.

The phrase 'does job' is missing the possessive pronoun 'his'. Also, 'he has a responsibility' is better expressed as 'he is responsible'. 'He always kind of two students' is incorrect; it should be 'he is always kind to students'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and proper adjective use.