规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng. Ví dụ, bạn nên giải thích rõ hơn về mục đích của việc mặc đồng phục và quy định không sử dụng điện thoại trong lớp học.

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms to promote equality among everyone. Additionally, using mobile phones in class is prohibited to show respect to teachers and avoid distractions.

建议: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và rõ ràng hơn, tránh sử dụng cấu trúc câu phức tạp không chính xác. Hãy giải thích lý do tại sao bạn nghĩ rằng nhiều quy tắc có thể gây áp lực cho học sinh và ảnh hưởng đến việc học.

示例: No, I don't think having more rules would benefit students. Too many rules can cause stress and make learning more difficult because students might feel restricted.

建议: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích lý do tại sao bạn đánh giá một giáo viên là tốt hoặc không tốt. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng.

示例: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He focuses not only on preparing us for exams but also helps us understand the lessons clearly.

× Yes, there are. There are more rules as my school will have to wear uniforms to keep everyone, to keep everyone's equals and we cannot use them in class because it respects my teacher.

✓ Yes, there are. There are more rules because my school requires us to wear uniforms to keep everyone equal, and we cannot use phones in class because it shows respect to my teacher.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'as' instead of 'because' to explain the reason. Also, 'everyone's equals' is incorrect; it should be 'everyone equal'. The phrase 'we cannot use them' is unclear; specifying 'phones' clarifies the meaning. 'Because it respects my teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'because it shows respect to my teacher'. Suggestions: use 'because' for reasons, ensure correct adjective use, clarify pronouns, and use appropriate expressions for respect.

× No, I don't think small rules are not good for students because it's much it's stress and I'm not sure I'm not so difficult for learning.

✓ No, I don't think small rules are good for students because they cause a lot of stress and make learning difficult.

The sentence contains a double negative 'don't think small rules are not good', which is confusing. 'It's much it's stress' is incorrect; it should be 'they cause a lot of stress'. 'I'm not sure I'm not so difficult for learning' is unclear; it should be 'make learning difficult'. Suggestions: avoid double negatives, use correct quantifiers like 'a lot of', and express ideas clearly.

× OK, now I haven't has told who was stand who would stand out because because some people because some people more people, some people so much focus exam and don't help us understand.

✓ OK, now I haven't told who would stand out because some people focus too much on exams and don't help us understand.

The phrase 'I haven't has told' is incorrect; it should be 'I haven't told'. 'Who was stand who would stand out' is ungrammatical; 'who would stand out' is correct. Repetition of 'because some people' is redundant. 'Some people more people' is unclear and should be omitted. 'Some people so much focus exam' should be 'some people focus too much on exams'. Suggestions: use correct verb forms, avoid redundancy, and structure sentences clearly.