规则— Part 1 评分报告

建议: In your answer, please pay attention to grammar, especially plural forms like 'rules' instead of 'rule'. Also, try to use linking words such as 'for example' or 'in addition' to make your answer more coherent. Avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas more smoothly.

示例: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, we have to wear uniforms to promote equality and discipline. In addition, mobile phones are not allowed during class to prevent distractions and enhance our learning.

建议: Your answer is good but could be improved by using plural forms correctly ('students' instead of 'student') and by adding linking words like 'because' or 'for instance' to connect ideas clearly. Also, try to expand your supporting details with more specific examples.

示例: Yes, I think students would benefit greatly from having more rules because they provide structure and discipline, which help students stay focused. For instance, rules about attendance and classroom behaviour encourage punctuality and respectfulness.

建议: Try to improve grammar by using correct verb forms and articles, for example, 'explains complex things in simpler concepts' and 'he usually uses real things'. Also, avoid using informal linking words like 'anyway' in formal speaking. Use linking words such as 'for example' or 'also' to connect ideas.

示例: Yes, I have a teacher who does his job very well. He explains complex topics in simpler concepts, which makes them easier for us to understand. For example, he often uses real-life examples to clarify difficult ideas.

× Yes, there are several rule at my school.

✓ Yes, there are several rules at my school.

The word 'rule' should be plural 'rules' because 'several' indicates more than one. In English, countable nouns must agree in number with their quantifiers.

× we need to wear uniform to make us equal and discipline.

✓ we need to wear uniforms to make us equal and disciplined.

The noun 'uniform' should be plural 'uniforms' to match the plural subject 'we'. Also, 'discipline' is a noun; the adjective 'disciplined' is needed to describe 'us'.

× we are not allowed to use mobile phone during class to avoid any distraction and to improve our learning.

✓ we are not allowed to use mobile phones during class to avoid any distractions and to improve our learning.

'Mobile phone' should be plural 'mobile phones' because it refers to devices used by multiple students. 'During class' is correct. 'Distraction' should be plural 'distractions' to match 'any' which implies multiple possible distractions.

× Yes, I think student would benefit greatly from having more rules because rules give structure and discipline which help them to stay focused.

✓ Yes, I think students would benefit greatly from having more rules because rules give structure and discipline which help them to stay focused.

The noun 'student' should be plural 'students' to agree with the plural subject implied by 'them' and the context of general students.

× For example, attendance and classroom behaviour promote them to be punctual and respectful.

✓ For example, attendance and classroom behaviour promote being punctual and respectful.

The verb 'promote' is not correctly followed by 'them to be'. Instead, it should be followed by a gerund phrase like 'being punctual and respectful' to express the intended meaning.

× Anyway, he can explain complex things into simpler concept which make it easier for us to understand.

✓ Anyway, he can explain complex things in simpler concepts which make it easier for us to understand.

The preposition 'into' is incorrect here; 'explain in simpler concepts' is correct. Also, 'concept' should be plural 'concepts' to agree with 'things'.

× He usually use real thing to make it clearer.

✓ He usually uses real things to make it clearer.

The verb 'use' must be in third person singular form 'uses' to agree with the subject 'He'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context.